第6篇 2017年全国I卷 真题【真题题目】你的英国朋友Jim来信说他打算参加中文演讲比赛，正在准备主题“我眼中的中国”，希望你给他一些建议。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：1. 建议他演讲的内容；2. 给他的演讲技巧建议。注意：写作词数应为100左右。【参考范文】Dear Jim,I'm glad to know you're going to take part in the Chinese speech contest with the theme "China in My Eyes". I'm writing to offer you some practical suggestions.For the content, I advise you to focus on the changes in China's transportation, such as the high-speed railway, which can show the rapid development of China in a vivid way. As for the speech skills, I suggest you practice in front of your Chinese friends and ask for their advice, which can help you feel more confident on the stage.Wish you a great success in the contest!Yours,Li Hua【核心复杂句型解析】1. For the content, I advise you to focus on the changes in China's transportation, such as the high-speed railway, which can show the rapid development of China in a vivid way.解析：本句先通过 advise sb. to do 提出核心内容建议，再用 such as 补充具体例子，最后用 which 引导的非限制性定语从句说明该内容的优势，一句话覆盖了“建议内容+具体例子+建议理由”三个核心要素，逻辑完整，句式高级，完全贴合高考评分标准。2. As for the speech skills, I suggest you practice in front of your Chinese friends and ask for their advice, which can help you feel more confident on the stage.解析：本句使用 suggest 后接宾语从句的虚拟语气，符合建议信的正式表达要求；同时用 which 引导的定语从句补充说明建议的好处，避免了简单句的重复，提升了文章的句式丰富度，是高考建议信的万能高分句型。第7篇 2016年全国I卷 真题【真题题目】你校图书馆打算改善服务，向学生征求建议。请你给图书馆写一封建议信，内容包括：1. 建议的内容；2. 建议的理由。注意：写作词数应为100左右。【参考范文】Dear Sir or Madam,I'm a student from Grade Two. I'm writing to offer some suggestions to improve the service of our school library.Firstly, I suggest the library can extend its opening time on weekends, for most of us have no time to borrow books during weekdays. Besides, I advise the library to update its books on foreign literature, which can help us have a better understanding of foreign cultures and improve our English.I hope my suggestions will be taken into consideration.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【核心复杂句型解析】1. Firstly, I suggest the library can extend its opening time on weekends, for most of us have no time to borrow books during weekdays.解析：本句使用 for 引导的并列连词表原因，替代了简单的 because ，是高考书面表达的亮点用法；同时 suggest 后接宾语从句，语气委婉礼貌，符合给官方机构提建议的语境，是建议信的规范表达。2. Besides, I advise the library to update its books on foreign literature, which can help us have a better understanding of foreign cultures and improve our English.解析：本句使用 which 引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰前面的整个建议内容，同时说明了两个建议的理由，句式紧凑，逻辑清晰，避免了拆分两个简单句，提升了文章的流畅度和高级感。第8篇 2022年全国乙卷 真题【真题题目】你校英文报正在举办以“我们学校的体育活动”为主题的征文活动，你的英国朋友Henry来信说他想参加，希望你给他一些写作建议。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：1. 推荐写作内容；2. 写作建议。注意：写作词数应为100左右。【参考范文】Dear Henry,I'm glad to know you want to take part in the essay contest with the theme "Sports Activities in Our School". I'm writing to give you some practical suggestions.For the content, I advise you to write about the morning running and the annual sports meeting in our school, which are the most unforgettable sports activities for all students. As for the writing, I suggest you add your own feelings and photos of the activities, which will make your essay more vivid and impressive.Wish you good luck in the contest!Yours,Li Hua【核心复杂句型解析】1. For the content, I advise you to write about the morning running and the annual sports meeting in our school, which are the most unforgettable sports activities for all students.解析：本句使用 which 引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰前面的两个活动 morning running and the annual sports meeting ，在从句中作主语，是高考定语从句的核心考点；同时一句话完成了“推荐写作内容+说明推荐理由”两个要点，符合高考“要点齐全”的评分要求。2. As for the writing, I suggest you add your own feelings and photos of the activities, which will make your essay more vivid and impressive.解析：本句使用 suggest 后接宾语从句的虚拟语气，是建议信的标准高级表达；同时用非限制性定语从句补充说明建议的好处，句式结构和前面的句子形成呼应，同时避免了重复，提升了文章的整体流畅度。第9篇 2015年全国II卷 真题【真题题目】你的英国朋友Peter来信说他打算利用暑假来中国学习中国画，希望你给他一些建议。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：1. 推荐学习地点；2. 学习建议。注意：写作词数应为100左右。【参考范文】Dear Peter,I'm delighted to know you're planning to learn Chinese painting in China this summer vacation. I'm writing to offer you some relevant suggestions.I highly recommend you come to Hangzhou to learn Chinese painting. As the home of many famous Chinese painting masters, it has a strong artistic atmosphere and many professional training institutions. For your study, I advise you to learn some basic Chinese brush writing first, which will help you master the skills of Chinese painting faster.Wish you a wonderful time in China!Yours,Li Hua【核心复杂句型解析】1. As the home of many famous Chinese painting masters, it has a strong artistic atmosphere and many professional training institutions.解析：句首的 As the home of... 是介词短语作状语，补充了杭州的背景信息，同时说明了推荐的核心理由，替代了两个简单句，句式精简高级，是高考书面表达的高频加分结构。2. For your study, I advise you to learn some basic Chinese brush writing first, which will help you master the skills of Chinese painting faster.解析：本句是建议信的经典高分句型，通过 advise sb. to do 提出具体学习建议，再用 which 引导的非限制性定语从句说明该建议的作用，逻辑清晰，句式高级，完全贴合高考的评分标准，可直接套用在同类建议信中。第10篇 2021年新高考II卷 真题【真题题目】你校英文报开设了“成长故事”专栏，向学生征稿，你的美国朋友David来信说他想投稿，希望你给他一些建议。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：1. 推荐写作内容；2. 写作建议。注意：写作词数应为80左右。【参考范文】Dear David,I'm glad to know you want to contribute to the "Growth Stories" column of our school English newspaper. I'm writing to offer you some suggestions.I advise you to write about your experience of learning Chinese, which is quite close to the theme of growth. For the writing, I suggest you add your own feelings and changes during the process, which will make your story more touching and real.Hope your story will be accepted!Yours,Li Hua【核心复杂句型解析】1. I advise you to write about your experience of learning Chinese, which is quite close to the theme of growth.解析：本句使用 advise sb. to do 提出核心建议，同时用 which 引导的非限制性定语从句说明该内容与主题的契合度，一句话完成了“推荐内容+推荐理由”两个写作要点，符合高考词数要求，同时句式高级，避免了简单句的堆砌。2. For the writing, I suggest you add your own feelings and changes during the process, which will make your story more touching and real.解析：本句使用 suggest 后接宾语从句的虚拟语气，是建议信的规范表达；同时用非限制性定语从句补充说明建议的好处，句式结构工整，逻辑清晰，是高考建议信的万能套用句型。
