【新初三】新人教九年级(上册)Unit 2 单元话题写作

核心写作话题

A person I admire/An inspiring person（我敬佩的人/励志人物，贴合单元“榜样人物”核心主题），今天作文指导以An Inspiring Person Around Me为例

写作要求

1.请以An Inspiring Person Around Me为题

2.写一篇100-120词的短文，

3.介绍一位激励你的人，描述他/她的事迹，说明对你的影响，

4.需正确运用It is/was...of/for sb to do...句型及强调句。

写作指导

1.结构设计（中考高分三段式）

①　开头段：开门见山，点明你最敬佩的人物，总述其核心特质

②　中间段：主体核心，讲述1-2件具体事迹，体现人物品质，说明敬佩的原因

③　结尾段：总结人物对你的影响，表达向其学习的决心

2.内容要点

①　明确介绍人物身份，避免模糊不清

②　用具体事例支撑人物品质，避免空泛夸赞，做到有理有据

③　必须写出人物对你的影响与启发，升华主题

3.．语言技巧

①　核心得分点：熟练运用It is + 人物品质形容词(kind/brave/hard-working) + of sb to do sth；It is + 事件属性形容词(important/difficult) + for sb to do sth；可适当运用It is/was...that...强调句

②　高分衔接词：not only...but also..., what's more, besides, to my surprise, from then on

③　加分句型：The person I admire most is...; What I learn most from him/her is...; It is his/her spirit that encourages me to...

万能写作模板 

开头段

The person I admire most is ______ (人物姓名/身份，e.g. my English teacher/my mother). He/She is a ______ (人物核心特质，e.g. hard-working and warm-hearted person) who has inspired me a lot.

中间段

I admire him/her not only because ______ (表层原因，e.g. he/she is very excellent), but also because ______ (深层原因+具体事例). It is ______ of him/her to ______ (运用单元句型描述事件，e.g. It is very selfless of her to help students with their study after class every day). What's more, ______ (补充第二个事例/品质). It was her positive attitude that helped me get through the hard time last year.

结尾段

______ is my role model, and I have learned a lot from him/her. I will always follow his/her example, and try my best to be a person like him/her.

满分范文

An Inspiring Person Around Me

    In my life, the most inspiring person around me is my English teacher, Ms Li. She is a kind and responsible teacher who has changed me a lot.

    I admire her not only because she has excellent teaching skills, but also because she is always patient with every student. It is very selfless of her to spend her spare time helping us with our poor English, even when she is tired after a whole day's work. What's more, she always encourages us when we fail the exams. It was her warm words that made me regain confidence and fall in love with English last year.

    Ms Li is my role model. I have learned kindness and perseverance from her. I will follow her example, and try my best to help others and never give up easily.

翻译

《我身边一位激励我的人》

在我的生命中，身边最能激励我的人是我的英语老师李老师。她是一位善良、有责任心的老师，改变了我很多。

我敬佩她，不仅因为她有着出色的教学能力，更因为她对每一位学生都始终充满耐心。她非常无私，哪怕在一整天的工作后十分疲惫，依然会利用自己的课余时间帮我们补习薄弱的英语。除此之外，当我们考试失利时，她总会鼓励我们。去年，正是她温暖的话语，让我重拾信心，爱上了英语。

李老师是我的榜样。我从她身上学到了善良和坚持。我会以她为榜样，尽自己所能帮助他人，绝不轻易放弃。