2026中考英语作文原题出来了!二选一建议信+满分范文+3个避坑提醒

6月21日下午5:50，浙江中考英语考试结束铃响，2026中考正式收官。

作文题终于有考生回忆出来了——二选一建议信，比想象中友好，但3个隐形坑踩了就丢分。

今天把原题、审题要点、满分范文、避坑提醒一次性讲透，家有初中生的建议收藏。

选项一：一位同学想提升跑步速度，请你给他提建议。

选项二：一位同学的爷爷要来自己这里，他想让爷爷此次行程更加有意义，请你提三点建议。

两个选项都是建议信，体裁一致，难度持平，选自己有话说的那个就行。

🏃 选项一：给想提升跑步速度的同学提建议

审题3秒搞定

✅ 人设：Li Hua，收件人：同学（同龄人，语气轻松友好）

✅ 核心任务：给2-3条建议 + 每条配理由

✅ 时态：建议类用 should/can/could + 动词原形，全程现在时

满分范文（基础版）

Dear Tom,

I'm glad to hear that you want to improve your running speed. Here are some suggestions for you.

First of all, it's important to practice regularly. Running a little every day will help you build both speed and stamina. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect.

Besides, doing warm-up exercises before running is necessary. Stretching can help you avoid injuries and improve your speed . Also, don't forget to cool down after running.

I believe if you follow these tips, you'll see progress soon. Good luck!

Yours,
Li Hua

培优版范文

Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear that you intend to boost your running speed. Here are some practical suggestions for you.

First of all, it is vital to stick to regular training. Running for a while every day can help you improve your speed and endurance. As the old saying goes, practice makes perfect.

Besides, it is necessary for you to do warm-up exercises before running. Proper stretching can prevent sports injuries and strengthen your body. Meanwhile, remember to cool down after each run.

What’s more, keeping a balanced diet and getting sufficient sleep are equally important as daily training. Your body requires enough rest to recover and become stronger.

I firmly believe that you will make steady progress soon as long as you stick to these tips. Good luck!

Yours,
Li Hua

加分亮点说明（考场得分点）

1. 替换基础词：intend to, boost, stick to, balanced diet, sufficient sleep, equally, firmly believe 提升书面档次

2. 修正主谓一致语法错误，规避扣分点

3. 替换单调连接词：Also → Meanwhile，句式更多变

4. 运用 as long as 条件状语从句，丰富句式，符合高分要求

5. 短语 make steady progress 为阅读高频同义替换词组，阅卷老师偏爱

🚨 3个必踩的坑

❌ 写成叙事文——"我以前跑步很慢，后来我每天练……" 这是跑题！题目要你提建议，不是讲自己的故事

❌ "You should"从头用到尾——三段都是You should...You should...You should...，句式单一直接降档。换成Why not...? / It's a good idea to... / I suggest that you... 立马上档次

❌ 忘写称呼和落款——Dear Tom和Yours, Li Hua不能少，少了扣3分

👴 选项二：让爷爷的行程更有意义

审题3秒搞定

✅ 人设：Li Hua，收件人：同学（帮他想建议，不是直接写给爷爷！）

✅ 核心任务：提3条建议 + 每条说清为什么有意义

✅ 时态：现在时为主，可以穿插将来时（will/can）

满分范文

Dear Wang Ming,

First, you can take him to visit some local places of interest, such as the museum or the famous park in our city. This will help him learn more about your life here and feel connected to your world.

Second, why not spend some time doing things your grandpa enjoys? For example, you could play chess with him or cook his favorite dishes together. These shared activities will surely bring you closer and create sweet memories.

Third, I suggest recording a short family video or collecting old photos. Looking back at these precious moments together will make his trip truly unforgettable.

I hope these ideas are helpful. Wish him a wonderful trip!

Yours,
Li Hua

培优版

Dear Wang Ming,

I’ve heard that your grandfather is going to pay you a visit. How exciting! Here are several suggestions to make his stay here more worthwhile.

First, you can show him around local places of interest, such as the city museum and the well-known downtown park. In this way, he can know more about your daily life and feel closely connected with you.

Second, it’s a good choice to take part in activities he loves. For instance, you can play chess with him or cook his favorite meals hand in hand. Such warm shared moments will surely strengthen your bond and create precious memories.

Third, I recommend recording a short family video or sorting out old photos. Reviewing these valuable pictures together will make his visit absolutely unforgettable.

I hope my advice can be of great help. Wish him a pleasant stay!

Yours,

Li Hua

加分亮点说明

1. grandpa → grandfather，书面正式；pay sb a visit 高级短语；

2. show him around、strengthen your bond、be of great help 都是考场高频加分词组；

3. 句式多样化：in this way / it’s a good choice to do… 避免单调简单句；

🚨 3个必踩的坑

❌ 写成旅游攻略——只列景点不写理由，变成"去西湖→去博物馆→去公园"，零情感温度。题目关键词是"meaningful"，每条建议要回答为什么有意义

❌ 三个建议雷同——都是"去参观XX""去看XX""去游览XX"，没有层次。好写法是：参观（了解）→ 一起做活动（增进感情）→ 留住回忆（纪念意义），一条比一条深

❌ 收件人搞错——题目说"一位同学的爷爷要来"，你是给同学提建议，不是写给爷爷。写给Grandpa直接扣2分

⚡ 3个隐形拉分点：90%的人不知道

今年英语整体偏易，但真正拉开差距的是这3个地方：

口语弱的学生在这块丢5-8分，和传统笔试完全不同。机器对发音清晰度、语速、音量都有评判标准，含糊不清直接扣。

2. 阅读最后一篇主旨推断偏难

不能靠找原词定位，必须通读全文理解主旨。习惯"定位做题法"的同学容易翻车。

3. 作文套模板被压分

今年明确"反模板但不反基础表达"。简单但正确的句子 > 华丽但空洞的万能句。I think.../I believe... 只要逻辑通顺，照样拿高分。

一句话：2026中考英语筛选的不是谁背得多，而是谁用得准。（学练结合才是王道）

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