中考英语|新增已考省份真题+范文(江西+云南,回忆版)
一、江西省（全省统一命题）
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学校开展劳动主题实践活动，请你从以下两个活动中任选其一，以对应话题为题，写一篇英语短文，分享你的经历与收获。▸ 选题2：Vegetable Planting（校园蔬菜种植）选题一：家务劳动
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Housework
Last weekend, I decided to help my parents do housework to share their pressure（交代起因）.I cleaned my bedroom first, then swept the floor and washed the dishes（活动过程）. After finishing all the work, I was tired but really happy. When my parents came back home, they were surprised and praised me a lot（场景细节）.This experience made me understand how hard my parents work every day. I will keep doing housework regularly(定期) and learn more life skills（成长收获，升华主题）.亮点解析
- 叙事逻辑清晰，按“起因-过程-感受”推进，完全贴合题干三大要点
- 情感真实自然，落脚于“体谅父母、学习技能”，契合劳动教育的命题导向
选题二：校园蔬菜种植
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Vegetable Planting
Our school held a vegetable planting activity in the school garden last month. I took part in it with my classmates（活动背景）.We dug the soil first, then planted vegetable seeds and watered them carefully（种植过程）. I went to check them every day after class. A week later, the small green shoots came out(绿芽出来了). I felt a strong sense of success when I saw them（细节+感受）.Through this activity, I learned that fruits of labor are hard-won. It also taught me to value food and respect hard work（收获感悟，升华主题）.亮点解析
- 过程细节具体，挖土、播种、浇水、发芽的完整链条真实可感
- 结尾双维度升华，既谈劳动不易，又谈珍惜粮食，立意饱满
- 词汇丰富，精准使用hard-won、value等加分词，符合高分档要求
二、云南省（全省统一命题）
原题还原
书面表达（满分20分）
生活中，科学与我们息息相关。请结合自身经历，从以下两个方向任选其一，写一篇英语短文。▸ 方向1：叙述你的一次科学体验（如参观科学博物馆、参加科学主题活动、学习科学知识等）▸ 方向2：谈谈科学给你带来的启发（如阅读科学书籍的收获、科学家事迹对你的激励、科技进步对你生活的改变等）science-themed activity 科学主题活动；science and technology progress 科技进步；inspire v. 启发、激励
方向一：科学体验叙事类
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- 主体段：按顺序描述活动过程，补充1-2个印象深刻的细节
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An Unforgettable Science Experience
The most unforgettable science experience for me is visiting the city science museum with my classmates last term（点题，交代事件）.We took part in a wonderful science-themed activity there. We tried lots of interesting physics experiments and watched a fantastic robot show（体验过程）. I was amazed to see how technology makes our life more convenient. The guide also told us stories of Chinese scientists, which inspired me a lot（细节+感受）.This experience opened up（开阔） my eyes to the magic of science. I decide to study harder and learn more about science in the future（感悟升华，点明启发）.亮点解析
- 叙事完整有细节，实验、机器人秀、科学家故事三个层次内容饱满
- 非限制性定语从句修饰整件事，是阅卷偏好的高分复杂句
- 从“开阔眼界”到“努力学习”的升华自然，符合成长类作文评分逻辑
方向二：启发感悟类
写作思路
- 主体段：分两个角度论述启发——科技改变学习生活、科学家精神激励成长
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Science and Me
Science is around us all the time, and it has changed my life and study a lot（总起点题）.First of all, the progress of science and technology makes our study much easier. We can not only take online courses(上网课 at home, but also use smart tools to solve problems in time（科技带来的改变）. What's more, the stories of great Chinese scientists inspire (鼓舞)me deeply. Their spirit of never giving up teaches me to face difficulties bravely（精神带来的激励）.I will work harder at science. I hope to use what I learn to make our life better in the future（行动+升华）.亮点解析
- 分层论述逻辑清晰，从生活到精神两个维度完全扣住“启发”要求
- not only…but also、宾语从句等结构丰富，满足高分句式要求
- 立意正向，落脚个人成长与社会责任，契合中考德育命题导向
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