
独家模拟预测题
Directions:Suppose you have missed a scheduled meeting with Professor Smith. Write him an email to apologize for your absence, explain the reason, and suggest another time for the meeting.You should write about 100 words. Do not use your own name; use "Li Ming" instead.
(假设你错过了与史密斯教授预定的会议。请给他写一封电子邮件,为你的缺席道歉,解释原因,并建议另一个会议时间。约100词。)
1. 范文 (Model Essay)
Dear Professor Smith,
I am writing this email to express my sincere apologies for failing to attend our scheduled meeting yesterday afternoon.
The primary reason for my unexpected absence was a sudden medical emergency involving my roommate, which required my immediate assistance at the hospital. Consequently, I was unable to inform you in advance. I deeply regret any inconvenience my absence may have caused to your busy schedule.
I wonder if it would be convenient for you to reschedule our meeting sometime next week. I will be available at your earliest convenience. Thank you for your understanding.
Yours sincerely,Li Ming
2. 翻译 ( Translation)
尊敬的史密斯教授:
我写这封邮件是为了对未能在昨天下午参加我们预定的会议表达诚挚的歉意。
我意外缺席的主要原因是我室友突发急病,需要我立刻在医院提供协助。因此,我未能提前通知您。对于我的缺席可能给您繁忙的日程带来的任何不便,我深感抱歉。
我想知道您下周是否有空重新安排我们的会议。我将在您方便的最早时间赴约。感谢您的理解。
敬上,李明
3. 核心亮点提炼
- express my sincere apologies for...(对……表达诚挚的歉意)
- 得分要点
道歉信黄金开篇。很多考生一上来就写 "I am very sorry",过于口语化。利用 "express apologies for..." 这种“动名搭配”,能够迅速建立专业、正式的语体基调,向阅卷人展示你扎实的应用文写作功底。
- I deeply regret any inconvenience my absence may have caused...(对我的缺席可能带来的任何不便深感抱歉)
- 得分要点
极致拉分的客套句。这属于典型的外刊级高级表达,巧妙使用了 "inconvenience"(不便)和 "may have caused"(情态动词+完成时表示推测)。这句话可以直接作为万能模板,套用到任何因个人失误给他人造成麻烦的道歉信结尾。
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