第四部分写作（共两节, 满分40分）
第一节（满分15分）
46. 假定你是高三学生李华，你校英语社计划组织以“减压赋能，高效学习”为主题的活动。作为英语社社长，请你写一封电子邮件，邀请你校外教 Jack 参加，内容包括：
1.活动基本信息；
2.活动具体内容。
注意：1.词数80词左右；
2.可适当增加细节，使内容完整、连贯。
参考词汇：赋能 empower
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【答案】Dear Jack,
An activity with the theme of “Relieve Pressure and Study Efficiently” is planned by our English club. We’d like to have you as our guest.
Firstly, the activity will be held in the school auditorium at 3 p. m. next Saturday. It aims to alleviate students’ mental stress and empower them to study more efficiently. Specifically, a psychological expert will be invited to deliver a lecture to help students know various adjustment techniques and understand how to turn pressure into motivation. More interestingly, we will organize English riddle-solving games to shift students’ focus away from the overwhelming schoolwork pressure. Last but not least, top students will share their practical methods for study.
Hopefully, students can better handle stress, learn efficiently, and embrace the challenges. Looking forward to your attendance and it would be appreciated if you could give us some insights.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封电子邮件，邀请学校外教 Jack 参加以“减压赋能，高效学习”为主题的活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举行：hold→host
各种各样：various→a variety of
旨在：aim to→be intended to
接受：embrace→accept
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Firstly, the activity will be held in the school auditorium at 3 p. m. next Saturday. It aims to alleviate students’ mental stress and empower them to study more efficiently.
拓展句：Firstly, the activity will be held in the school auditorium at 3 p. m. next Saturday, which aims to alleviate students’ mental stress and empower them to study more efficiently.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Specifically, a psychological expert will be invited to deliver a lecture to help students know various adjustment techniques and understand how to turn pressure into motivation. (运用了“疑问词+不定式”结构作宾语)
[高分句型2] Looking forward to your attendance and it would be appreciated if you could give us some insights. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
第二节（满分25分）
47. 阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Once upon a time, in the middle of a busy life, I came across an old saying: “How happy you are can be seen in how much you help others. When you try to make others happy, you feel happy too.” These wise words stayed with me, but I really understood them after something big happened in my life.
It all started when I was looking through social media and saw a friend’s post about how important it is to get regular health checks. One thing caught my eye: “Ladies, don’t forget to get your yearly breast exam. Finding problems early can save your life.” It really hit home, so I made an appointment with my doctor right away, feeling a mix of anxiety and determination about my health.
A few weeks later, when I was sitting nervously in the doctor’s office, she said something that made me feel very cold inside. “Lisa, your breast exam showed something not normal. We need to do more tests, but it might be breast cancer.” It was like a hard blow to my stomach, but I got ready for what was to come, steeling myself for the battle ahead.
After lots of tests, the doctor told me I had cancer. She explained the treatment plan, which included surgery and radiation. It was scary and overwhelming, but I decided to face it and beat it with every bit of strength I had. After going through pre-surgery tests, the operation was scheduled at the nearby hospital. I was scheduled to be the first person to undergo the new method of treating cancer. This is an operation where the patient and the machine are in one room, and the doctor is in the nearby room operating the remote surgical controls, allowing for precision and care in this critical moment. I felt a mix of hope and fear, knowing that this was just the beginning of my journey.
续写要求：
1.续写词数应为 150 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Finally the operation began.
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I decided to give back for my good fortune.
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【答案】Sample:
Finally the operation began. The surgery was hard and scary, but I made it through. Right after the operation, my head looked like a pumpkin. But all in all, everything took a turn for the better. About a week later, I was discharged from the hospital. As told earlier, the discomfort was unavoidable. However, we knew we had taken the first step to getting rid of the cancer. Recovery was tough, but I didn’t let it take over me.
I decided to give back for my good fortune. While I was out for a short walk, I found a sign about volunteering at a local charity that helps kids who don’t have much. I signed up right away. Every day, I tried every means to help the kids. As the months went by, I got stronger and happier. One day, as I was leaving, a quiet little girl hugged me tight and said, “You make me believe I can do anything, Miss Lisa.” Her words were like a magic cure that healed my heart and reminded me of the meaning of that old saying.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索。讲述作者偶然看到一句名言，明白助人能收获快乐，而一场变故让她真正读懂这句话。她刷到朋友提醒女性定期做乳腺检查的动态后，立刻预约体检，却不幸查出乳腺癌。后续她要接受手术与放疗，还成为院内新型远程手术疗法的首位接受者，怀着忐忑与希望，勇敢开启了对抗病魔的历程。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容可知，本段可以写手术顺利完成，作者出院。康复过程虽伴随不适与艰辛，但情况逐渐好转，她积极面对。
②由第二段首句内容可知，本段可以写心怀感恩的作者加入公益帮扶贫困孩子，身体与心境日渐变好，小女孩的话也让她领悟了老话的真谛。
2.续写线索：手术顺利完成→作者出院→加入公益帮扶贫困孩子→身体与心境日渐变好→感悟
3.词类激活：
行为类：
摆脱：get rid of/rid oneself of
帮助：help/assist
情绪类
令人害怕的：scary/frightening
高兴的：happy/delighted/glad
【点睛】【高分句型1】 However, we knew we had taken the first step to getting rid of the cancer. (运用了省略that的宾语从句。)
【高分句型2】 As the months went by, I got stronger and happier. (运用了As引导时间状语从句。)
