假设你是TengFei，请结合以下图文，给你的英国笔友Bob写一封电子邮件，分享你的所学、所悟、所为。
一、写作分步设计
Step1梳理邮件核心信息
1.身份&对象：写信人Teng Fei，收信人英国笔友Bob，体裁为英文电子邮件
2.故事内容补全（《卖油翁》经典情节）- 卖油翁原话：“Nothing special, only practice makes perfect.”（无他，但手熟尔） - 后续动作：Then he put “a copper coin on the mouth of the gourd bottle with a tiny hole in the middle”, and poured oil into the bottle through the hole without spilling any oil.
3.故事启示：Practice makes perfect. We shouldn’t be proud of our skills easily, and constant practice helps us get better.
4.个人经历：选第二个场景（英语考100分）展开：之前英语成绩平平，坚持每天背单词、做阅读、练书写，长期练习后拿到满分，印证熟能生巧的道理。
5.邮件结构：问候引入→讲述《卖油翁》故事→提炼感悟→分享自身经历→结尾互动。
Step2 句式&词汇准备
基础表达
-邮件开头：How's everything going recently? I want to share a traditional Chinese story The Old Oil Sellerwith you.
-故事衔接：As the story goes...
-道理表达：The lesson we learn is that practice makes perfect.
-经历描述：I used to... I kept... Finally...
Step3写作&自查要点
✅时态：故事用一般过去时，道理用一般现在时，个人经历用一般过去时+现在完成时 ✅覆盖：陈尧咨射箭→卖油翁的反应→卖油翁倒油演示→故事启示→个人真实经历 ✅邮件格式规范，语气符合笔友交流的轻松感
二、参考范文
Dear Bob,
How are you these days? I'm writing to share the Chinese storyThe Old Oil Sellerwith you.
Long ago, there was a great archer Chen Yaozi. He was proud of his archery skills. When he showed his skills, many people praised him, but an old oil seller only smiled. Chen asked the old man why. The old oil seller said, “Nothing special, only practice makes perfect.”Then he put a copper coin with a small hole on the mouth of a gourd bottle. He poured oil through the hole into the bottle, and no oil ran out.
From the story, I learn we can’t be proud easily. Practice can help us master anything. I used to be weak in English. I kept memorizing words and doing exercises every day. After months of practice, I got a full mark in the English exam last month!
Do you have similar experiences? Write to me soon.
Yours,
Teng Fei
一、写作分步设计
Step1梳理核心信息
- 写作身份：李华，写给英国笔友Peter的英文视频脚本，语气口语化、亲切自然
-核心事件：一次去成都自然博物馆的研学特别一天
-必须覆盖图示信息：
①时间：上午10点集合出发；天气：气温偏高、晴朗暖和；交通：坐大巴出行
②地点：成都自然博物馆
③参观内容：战机等军事科技展品、自然相关展品
④写作落点：研学收获（知识拓展、团队友谊、爱国自豪感等）
Step2句式&词汇准备
出行类
- set out at 10 a.m.上午10点出发
- take the school bus乘坐校车大巴
- warm and sunny天气温暖晴朗
场馆参观类
- go on a study trip to Chengdu Natural History Museum去成都自然博物馆研学
- see amazing exhibits like fighter jets观看战机这类超棒的展品
- learn about natural history and aviation knowledge学习自然历史和航空知识
收获感悟类
- broaden my horizons拓宽眼界
- feel proud of our country's development为国家发展感到自豪
- get closer with classmates和同学加深情谊
Step3写作&自查要点
✅信息点：出发时间、交通、天气、博物馆、展品、收获全部覆盖
✅格式：视频脚本口语化，适合对着镜头讲述
✅避坑：无真实校名、姓名，时态以一般过去时为主（描述过去的一天）
二、参考范文
Hi, Peter! It's Li Hua. I can't wait to share my most unforgettable study trip with you!
We hopped on the school bus and departed for Chengdu Natural History Museum at 10 a.m. in pleasant warm weather. The museum blew my mind with marvelous exhibits like advanced fighter jets, where we explored aviation development and natural history. This trip greatly broadened my horizons, strengthened my friendship with classmates and filled me with national pride.
It’s truly my highlight of this term. Want me to send you some museum photos?
有些旅行总是让人难忘。你和家人或朋友的最近一次出游去了哪里？发生了什么有趣或特别的事？请以“A/An ________Trip”为题，根据下图内容提示写一篇英语短文，分享你的旅行。
要求：
1.包含提示信息，可适当发挥；
2.条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 60~80词。
一、写作分步设计
Step1梳理核心信息
-题目格式：半命题作文 A/An ____ Trip，需要先补充形容词（注意an用于元音音素开头单词，如unforgettable、exciting）
-写作主题：和家人/朋友的最近一次出游，写有趣/特别的经历
-必含模块（思维导图硬性要点）：
①Weather（天气，图中有多变多云、阵雨类天气图标，可设定晴转多云/偶尔小雨）
②Food（特色美食+品尝感受）
③Activities（至少3项游玩活动）
④Feelings（旅途心情）
⑤Lesson（旅行收获/感悟）
Step2句式&词汇准备
Weather:
It was cloudy with light showers sometimes.
The day was mostly cloudy with occasional light drizzle, which didn't ruin our fun at all.
Food:
We tried local noodles. They were delicious.
We tasted traditional hand-pulled noodles with spicy soup; the rich local flavor surprised us a lot.
Activities:
1.climbed a small hill
2.took lots of photos
3.bought cute gifts
Feelings:
We felt happy and relaxed all the way.
We were filled with joy and relaxation the whole trip.
Lesson:
We learned nature is beautiful and we should get close to it.
Step3写作&自查要点
✅ 所有思维导图模块（天气、食物、活动、心情、收获）全部覆盖
✅ 全文统一用一般过去时
✅ 冠词`a/an`使用正确，题目补写规范
✅ 语句有衔接词（and/though/besides等），不生硬堆砌
二、参考范文
An Unforgettable Trip
Last weekend, I went mountain hiking with my best friends, and it became my most unforgettable trip recently.
It was mostly cloudy with occasional light drizzle, but we still hiked along paths, took photos of lovely wild flowers and picked nice souvenirs. We tasted spicy local hand-pulled noodles at a snack shop, whose special flavor amazed us. We were joyful all the time.
This trip taught me that outdoor activities can relax us and improve our friendship.
假设你是李华。5月4日（星期日），你和家人一起去自贡旅行，并制作了以下旅行手账。请根据手账内容，写一篇英文日记，记录自己的经历与感受。
提示词：恐龙化石：dinosaur fossil；灯会lantern festival
要求：
1.包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.条理清楚，意思连贯；
3.词数80左右，文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
一、写作分步设计
Step1梳理核心信息
-题目格式：日记
-写作主题：5月4日（周日）和家人坐高铁去自贡一日游，记录经历与感受
-必含信息：
①Transport（交通方式）：坐高铁前往自贡
②Food（特色美食+感受）：在餐厅品尝自贡特色美食，描述味道和体验
③Activities： 1. 参观自贡盐业历史博物馆 2. 品尝当地特色美食 3. 参观自贡恐龙博物馆（看恐龙化石） 4. 游览中国彩灯世界（体验灯会）
④Feelings（旅途心情）：开心、惊喜、难忘、满足等
⑤Lesson（旅行收获/感悟）：了解家乡文化/历史，感受到家乡的魅力，或明白和家人出游的快乐
Step2句式&词汇准备
Transport（坐高铁）
- We went to Zigong by high-speed train.
- My family and I took the high-speed train to Zigong, and the ride was fast and comfortable.
Activities
- We visited Zigong Salt History Museum and learned about the history of salt.
- We had a nice meal and tasted local specialties at a nearby restaurant.
- We went to Zigong Dinosaur Museum and saw many amazing dinosaur fossils.
- We visited Chinese Lantern World and enjoyed the beautiful lantern festival at night.
Feelings
- I felt so happy and excited with my family.
- We were all amazed by the beautiful lanterns and the interesting history there.
Lesson
- This trip made me love this city more.
- I learned a lot about the city's history and culture, and had great fun with my family.
Step3写作&自查要点
✅覆盖所有模块（交通方式、食物、调整顺序后的全部活动、心情、收获）
✅全文统一使用一般过去时
✅语句使用衔接词（`first/then/after that/finally`等），不生硬堆砌
二、参考范文
May 4th, Sunday
Dear Diary, Today I went to Zigong with my family by high-speed train, and it was really an unforgettable trip.
First, we visited Zigong Salt History Museum and learned about the history of salt. Then we had delicious local food at a nearby restaurant. After that, we went to Zigong Dinosaur Museum and saw many amazing dinosaur fossils. Finally, we enjoyed the beautiful lantern festival at Chinese Lantern World at night. I felt so happy and excited all day.
This trip taught me a lot about the city's culture, and I will never forget this day.
