我从2023年带到2026年,3年班主任加双班英语。
收获1:形成一系列备考课程。
收获2:掌握了三轮复习的逻辑。
收获3:建立了专项和模考的题库。
收获4:提升了命题创新和一题多用的能力。
一班 2023 省卷第三次测学情总结
一、整体成绩概况
本次使用 2023 年广东中考省卷检测,班级 13 人笔试突破 76 分,进步突出。
76 分为基础达标线:
对标课标基础词汇、句型考点,视作学生储备 76 分基础得分 “子弹”,保底分。
有余力的冲刺高分、实现考点一题多拿分。
班级目标:达标学生稳住 76 分底盘,稳步向上突破 90 分卷面。
二、现存共性失分问题
- 1.审题与填涂失误
审题马虎、答题卡答案填涂错位,无谓丢分。(出现在84-89分的学生身上) - 2.单词变形易错
名词单复数 s、词尾字母 e 随意增减,形变规则掌握不牢。 - 3.答题卡规范盲区(重点整改)
你以为老师看到的:

改第五题老师看到的: 

试卷分模块分科阅卷,短文填空限定方框作答;答案超出答题框、错填至下一题作答区域,阅卷教师无法读取答案,书写无效,需专项纠正答题格式误区。
三、书面表达阶段性收获(13 节作文专项训练成果)
经过专项课程打磨,学生作文完成关键性突破:
中考作文想拿满分,可以下载作文包。
3 年真题数据|广东中考英语作文分层提分方案,6 句框架 + 2 句提分,必背作文
【广东中考英语】14个必背的中考主题作文+默写纸+作文纸(早读课读默25分钟+抽背,共7页,可打印)
1.统一规范三段式行文,段落开头空两格; 2.句式固定配比:首段 2 句、中间段 6 句、尾段 2 句;可自主补充拓展句、分句; 3.普遍会使用复合句,熟练运用 first of all /besides/what's more /all in all 等过渡词,整体作文框架成型,值得表扬。
四、作文后续补强要点(以 “我的梦:成为科学家” 例题拆解)
大纲:按照作文包要求。
1.6个要点。
第一段——2句话。第二段——2个要点,3句话。第三段——3个要点,3句话。
2.定人称和时态。
写我——第一人称。
第一二段——过去式。第三段——现在时。
3.过渡语。
two reasons——First, ——Second, ——All in all,
The first reason might be that ——The second reason might be that
4.必写词
第一段:I became a scientist.
第二段
Here are some reasons. Because
I joined the science weekly activity.
第三段:I am more intersted in science.
5.补足感叹号内容。

第一段(梦境内容)
中文:简单描写梦境,一句话用 and 衔接,写出梦里的身份、做的事以及事情带来的影响。
【核心名词:scientist、robot】
英文:
I became a scientist. I met many famous scientists and talked with them.
I became a scientist.I invented a robot, and my robot was very popular among the local people.
第二段
(原因剖析,硬性要求两点理由,缺项扣分,整段统一全部使用过去式,搭配固定过渡词;段首固定总起句,强制出现 reason、because 关键词)
中文:本段开头总起,引出做梦的多条缘由,分三点依次阐述经历。
【核心名词:reasons、dream】
英文:Here may be the reasons why I had this dream.
1、第一点(过渡句式:The first reason was that)
中文:我参与了科学周活动,观看有趣的演出,还和同班同学一起做实验。
【核心名词:science weekly activities、shows、experiments、classmates】
英文:The first reason was that I took part in /attended/joined science weekly activities. I saw some interesting shows and did experiments with my classmates.(可用 because 补充:Because these activities made me fall in love with science.)
2、第二点(过渡句式:The second reason was that / Besides)
中文:上周我阅读了科普书籍,或是观看了一部精彩的科普影片,影片讲述了机器人与太空相关的故事。
【核心名词:science books、science movie、robots、space】
英文:The second reason was that I read science books last week. / I saw an exciting science movie, and it told a story about robots and space.
3、第三点(过渡词:what's more)
中文:我和朋友们一起学习科学课程,我们常常交流自己学到的知识,此句要求学生会写宾语从句。
【核心名词:science lessons、friends】
英文:What's more, I studied science lessons with my friends. We often shared what we learnt.
备注:本段必须出现 because、so、reason 三个关键词,全文动词统一变为过去式。
第三段(总结升华,新增两处写作要点,本段用现在时态)
写出兴趣变化,句子必须包含 interest 相关变形词汇。 【核心名词:science】 英文:I think science is more interesting than before./I am more interested in science than before. 第一加分项:引用英语谚语或者复合句,例:熟能生巧。 【核心名词:practice】 英文:Practice makes perfect. 第二加分项:写明个人未来志向,下定决心成为科学家,尽全力实现梦想。【核心名词:scientist、dream】 英文:I decide to become a scientist in the future, and I will try my best to achieve my dream.
An Interesting Dream
By Li Ming
I had an interesting dream last night. In my dream, I became a scientist. I met many famous scientists and talked with them. I even invented a popular robot that was welcomed by local people.
Here may be the reasons why I had this dream.The first reason was that I took part in science weekly activities. I watched wonderful science shows and did interesting experiments with my classmates.The second reason was that I saw exciting science movies about robots and space in my free time.What's more, I studied science lessons with my friends and we often shared what we learnt.
Now I am more interested in science than before. I decide to be a scientist in the future. Practice makes perfect. I will try my best to achieve my dream.
作文对标要点核查✅
- 1.分段规范
严格三段式,首段梦境、中段三点原因(全过去式, The first/second reason was that+ what's more)、尾段感悟(现在时态) - 2.指定句型全部落地
原因段: reason/because关键词达标,三点素材:科学周活动、科普电影、结伴学科学 + 宾语从句 shared what we learnt3.结尾: more interested in science+ 志向句try my best to achieve my dream+ 谚语 Practice makes perfect- 4.核心名词全覆盖
science weekly activities、shows、experiments、science movies、robots、space、science lessons、scientist、dream - 5.词数
符合 80 词左右答题要求