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Some people believe that cheap and fast transportation is required for successful international business, while others believe good technology is more important.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
（2026-5-23大陆）
替换表达
substitutions
some people believe that: it is sometimes argued that
cheap: inexpensive, at reasonable prices / rates, economical, a sharp drop in prices, value for money, budget
fast: quickly, instantly, instant access to, in an instant, in a moment, immediate, immediately, at once, instantaneous
transportation: transport passengers, be transported to, air / rail / road transport, means / mode / form of transpotation / transport, air travel, flight
is required for: necessary, be essential for, a requisite for, be indispensable for, be vital for, a desperate / pressing need for something, a demand for, the basic requirements of, the necessity of
successful: success, succeed, profitable, prosper, thrive, flourish
successful international business: greater economic cooperation, a highly / extremely profitable investment, foreign / global / world trade
good technology: advanced technology, advances in technology, technological advances / breakthroughs / innovations, the lastest technology, cutting-edge technology
主体段练习
Body paragraph
支持观点1
cheap and fast transportation is required for successful international business
Topic sentence - 提出论点
（话题关键词，逻辑连接词，给出倾向）
现代交通运输的发展是世界贸易的基石，因为它使得各国之间的进出口贸易更加便捷，不再受高昂物流成本和长距离运输的限制。
The development of modern transportation is the cornerstone of world trade, as it has enabled easier access to imports and exports among countries without being restricted by prohibitive logistics expenses and long distances.
Explanation - 论述
（突出cheap transportation的必要性）
将货物从原产地运往国外目标市场往往成本高昂，因为这通常涉及化石燃料的消耗、包装材料的使用以及劳动力成本的支出。
Transporting goods from their origins to foreign target markets can be costly, since it usually involves the consumption of fossil fuels, the use of packaging materials, and labor costs.
Example - 举例
（具体化）
当对大宗产品（如铁矿石、原油和农作物）存在需求时，尤其需要考虑经济因素——这些商品通常依赖海运以获得具有竞争力的价格优势。
The economic considerations are especially significant when there is demand for bulk products, such as iron ore, crude oil and crops, all of which may typically rely on sea freight to gain a competitive price advantage.
Explanation - 论述
（突出fast transportation的必要性）
此外，缩短运输时间不仅能避免货物在运输过程中变质、损耗或损坏，还能及时满足消费者的需求。
Moreover, shortening delivery time may prevent spoilage, wastage or damage of goods in transit, and also meet consumers’ needs in a timely manner.
Example - 举例
（an imaginary situation）
例如，海外买家通常期望农产品尽快送达，因为新鲜度是衡量高品质食品（包括牛奶、肉类、水果和蔬菜）的重要指标。
For example, overseas buyers usually expect their produce to arrive as soon as possible, because freshness is a major indicator of high-quality foods, including milk, meat, fruit and vegetables.
Body paragraph
支持观点1
cheap and fast transportation is required for successful international business
The development of modern transportation is the cornerstone of world trade, as it has enabled easier access to imports and exports among countries without being restricted by prohibitive logistics expenses and long distances. Transporting goods from their origins to foreign target markets can be costly, since it usually involves the consumption of fossil fuels, the use of packaging materials, and labor costs. The economic considerations are especially significant when there is demand for bulk products, such as iron ore, crude oil and crops, all of which may typically rely on sea freight to gain a competitive price advantage. Moreover, shortening delivery time may prevent spoilage, wastage or damage of goods in transit, and also meet consumers’ needs in a timely manner. For example, overseas buyers usually expect their produce to arrive as soon as possible, because freshness is a major indicator of high-quality foods, including milk, meat, fruit and vegetables.
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