上周考题是关于“商业发展-全球化问题”，本身话题非常简单，在我们的话题词汇库中也包含相关的积累。
首先，我们看一下这道题目简单，且符合6 分要求的写法：
Introduction：改写双方的话题和观点
Body-1：（支持 transportation，注意cheap and fast的限定）
Body-2：（支持 technology）
Conclusion：表明我的看法-两者都重要
文章能够结构清晰，并且运用话题词汇，对话题做出了相关的讨论，基本就能及格，获得 6 分。
但是这道题也有难点，想冲 7 分的同学需要仔细思考：
难点1：容易出现空洞的论证，尤其是“支持 technology”这个段。如果没有写出包含“具体的商业场景”、“具体的功能体现”、以及“具体的影响链条”的逻辑推进；而只是写“Technology makes business more convenient.”，然后做大量现象的罗列，那基本就止步 6 分。（具体差异请见：“罗列现象和建立逻辑之间的区别”）
难点2：逻辑更清晰的立场选择。Transportation和Technology当然可以说两者都很重要，但是我们也应该可以想到：Transportation是包含于Technology的，所以这道题更好的立场应该是赞成 B 方：虽然Transportation重要，但是Technology的影响更广泛、更深层。
所以整篇文章，难点基本上都集中在了 body-2 的写作。我们需要在这个段做出有逻辑推进的论证，还需要突出两者之间的对比。
我们就着重分析body-2的写作：
On the other hand, modern technology has transformed nearly every aspect of international business and therefore plays a more important role.
先提出段落的核心观点句—technology 是更重要的，因为它影响了国际贸易的方方面面。
With advanced digital systems, such as communication platforms and AI analysis tools, companies can coordinate international operations more efficiently and respond to market changes much faster than before. Furthermore, e-commerce platforms allow even small companies to reach customers worldwide without opening physical stores abroad.
然后，具体写出哪些技术会影响到国际贸易，以及更重要的是写清楚这些技术的功能是体现在贸易的哪些方面。（解决难点 1）
communication platforms👉 coordinate efficiently
AI analysis tools👉 respond faster
e-commerce platforms👉 reach customers worldwide
Compared with transportation, technology influences not only delivery but also management, marketing and customer service. As a result, it provides broader and more long-term benefits for international companies.
最后通过对比transportation，得出结论技术的影响是更长期的。（解决难点 2）
完整的body-2呈现：
On the other hand, modern technology has transformed nearly every aspect of international business and therefore plays a more important role. With advanced digital systems, such as communication platforms and AI analysis tools, companies can coordinate international operations more efficiently and respond to market changes much faster than before. Furthermore, e-commerce platforms allow even small companies to reach customers worldwide without opening physical stores abroad. Compared with transportation, technology influences not only delivery but also management, marketing and customer service. As a result, it provides broader and more long-term benefits for international companies.
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In today’s globalised world, international business is becoming increasingly competitive. Some people believe that cheap and fast transportation is the key to successful international trade, while others argue that modern technology is more important. Although transportation plays a vital role, I believe technology has a greater overall impact on international business.
On the one hand, affordable and efficient transportation is essential because it allows companies to move goods quickly and at a lower cost. This helps businesses reduce expenses and sell products at more competitive prices. Fast delivery services are particularly important for industries such as food, fashion and electronics, where delivery speed can directly affect customer satisfaction. For example, multinational companies like Amazon rely heavily on efficient logistics systems and air freight services to meet customer expectations for rapid delivery. In addition, improvements in transportation networks make it easier for businesses to enter overseas markets and expand their customer base. Without reliable transport systems, global trade would become slower and less efficient.
On the other hand, modern technology has transformed nearly every aspect of international business and therefore plays a more important role. With advanced digital systems, such as communication platforms and AI analysis tools, companies can coordinate international operations more efficiently and respond to market changes much faster than before. Furthermore, e-commerce platforms allow even small companies to reach customers worldwide without opening physical stores abroad. Compared with transportation, technology influences not only delivery but also management, marketing and customer service. As a result, it provides broader and more long-term benefits for international companies.
In conclusion, while cheap and fast transportation is necessary for international trade, I believe modern technology is more important because it improves a wider range of business activities and creates stronger long-term advantages.（300 字）
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