托福邮件真题范文15|经理,老旧健身器材要劝退我了

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真题档案

Write an Email

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You are a member of a local gym called Fitness Zone. Recently, you have noticed that some of the exercise equipment is problematic. You want to suggest this to the gym manager, Ms. Taylor.

Write an email to Ms. Taylor. In your email, do the following:
  • Describe the issues you have noticed withthe current equipment.
  • Provide reasons for why adding new equipment would improve the gym experience.
  • Explain the consequences on membership of not improving the services.
Write as much as you can and in complete sentences.
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🤔 健身房器材会有哪些问题?

机器老化故障

数量太少,等待太久

……

🤔 新器械为什么体验更佳?

① 减少受伤风险

② 可以和智能设备同步数据

……

🤔 不改善当前状况会对会员数量产生哪些影响?

① 损害品牌形象

② 会员跑到竞品机构

……

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Dear Ms. Taylor,

I hope this email finds you well. As a dedicated member of Fitness Zone, I am writing to express concerns about the current state of the gym's exercise equipment.
During my cardio workouts yesterday, I noticed that several treadmills and stationary bikes were showing significant signs of wear and malfunction. These issues not only hinder the effectiveness of workouts but also present potential safety risks for members using this equipment. Investing in new equipment would ensure a safer environment, which would likely lead to improved member retention and satisfaction.
Without timely updates or replacement of this equipment, member satisfaction may decline considerably. More concerning is the increased risk of injuries that could result in medical expenses. Such incidents could damage Fitness Zone's reputation and lead members to seek alternative fitness facilities.
Thank you for your attention to this problem.
Best regards,
Loopy (144 words)

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