【命题情境一】
热爱，是前行的动力，是成长的光芒。一份热爱，能让我们坚持努力，收获快乐，成为更好的自己。请以 My Love 为题，写一篇英语短文，分享你的热爱。
写作要点：
1.你热爱的事物是什么（如阅读、运动、音乐、绘画等）； 2.你为何热爱它，它带给你什么； 3.你会如何坚守这份热爱。 写作要求： 1.词数 100-120 词； 2.条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名； 4.主旨积极，情感真挚。
二、满分范文一（热爱阅读角度）
My Love
My greatest love is reading books, which has been with me for many years.
I love reading because it opens up a new world for me. Through reading, I can learn plenty of knowledge and know different stories. Whenever I feel tired or upset, reading can make me calm and happy. It also enriches my mind and helps me grow into a better person.
Reading is my lifelong love. I will keep reading every day, learn more from books and let this love lead me to move forward all the time.
阅卷老师亮点点评
- 立意贴合：选取阅读这一正向爱好，贴合中学生身份，传递热爱学习、充实自我的积极态度，契合中考德育导向；
- 结构工整：三段式逻辑清晰，开篇点题、中间阐述热爱的原因与收获、结尾表决心，过渡自然，无跑题偏题；
- 语言出彩：运用 which 引导的定语从句、whenever 引导的时间状语从句，搭配 plenty of、enrich my mind 等高分短语，语法零失误，句式长短结合；
- 情感真挚：内容贴近学生日常，不空洞浮夸，文字朴实有温度，是阅卷场高分标配文风。
【命题情境二】（热爱篮球角度）
My Love
Among all kinds of hobbies, my love is playing basketball. It brings me great fun and makes my life more meaningful.
I love playing basketball not only for exercise, but also for the spirit it brings. Playing basketball with my friends teaches me teamwork and never gives up. When I play on the playground, all my worries go away. It also makes me stronger and more confident in my study and life.
I will stick to this love, keep practicing and enjoy the happiness that basketball brings to me forever.
中考阅卷老师亮点点评
- 角度新颖：选择运动类热爱，融入团队、坚持、自信等成长品质，立意比单纯写爱好更有深度；
- 句式高级：巧用 not only...but also... 并列结构，行文流畅，用词精准，贴合中考英语高阶表达要求；
- 主旨升华：将个人爱好与成长品质相结合，紧扣 “热爱促成长” 核心，符合中考作文分层赋分标准；
- 无语法瑕疵：全篇时态统一、拼写正确，衔接词使用恰当，完全满足满分作文语言要求。
