📚汉堡三段式英语作文各段落详细写作要求
对于基础较为薄弱的孩子来说，汉堡三段式英语作文模式要更容易上手，操作起来也更简单一些。
（一）顶层面包 —— 开篇引入话题（2 句话）
核心原则：简洁直白，不啰嗦，快速切入主题，避免冗余铺垫
常用写作方向：
现象引入：描述题目相关的日常现象 / 背景
（二）多层夹心馅料 —— 主体详述要点（8-10 句话）
核心原则：要点齐全，层次分明，衔接自然，是作文核心得分部分
写作技巧：
巧用连接词：firstly, besides, what's more, finally 等，让逻辑更清晰 简单句为主，复合句锦上添花，避免句式单一，提升文采
（三）底层面包 —— 结尾升华主题（2-3 句话）
核心原则：总结全文，升华主旨，传递积极情感，收尾利落
常用写作方向：
总结概括：重申核心观点 / 内容 抒发情感：表达喜爱、感受、建议等 展望未来：对话题相关的未来提出期许、倡议
1.推荐：要求学生针对一个给定的类别，结合自身实际推荐该类别内的具体对象，介绍其特点、优势或价值并阐述推荐理由，传递其使用价值或意义。
2.自荐：要求学生根据自我优势等，向学校、社团等展现自我，表达加入活动的意愿。
（1）文化体验类：书籍（2022）、旅行/研学地点、课外实践活动等
（2）实用建议类：礼物、运动健身方式、沟通方式等
2. 自荐：
（1）校园活动类：报杜小记者（2020）、班干部、晚会主持人等
（2）社会实践类：申请志愿者项目、社区服务活动、博物馆讲解员等
文体：以应用文和说明文为主（自荐一般应用文）
时态：以一般现在时为主人称：多用第一人称和第三人称
内容：1.点明目的，表明对象：用简洁语句点明对象，吸引读者兴趣；
2.推荐/自荐理由，要点补充：分条阐述理由，配以具体事例增强说服力；
3.重申推荐/自荐，表达期望：强调理由，呼应开篇目的，并表达期待对方的反馈。
1️⃣（2022安徽中考）假定你是李辉。你的英国朋友Mike想阅读中国经典名著。请你写封邮件，向他推荐《西游记》。要点如下：
（1）风趣幽默，深受喜爱；
（2）团队合作，历险克难；
（3）追逐梦想，永不言弃。
注意：（1）词数 80~100；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：character n. 人物overcome .克服
Dear Mike,
Since you want to read Chinese classic works, I'd like to recommend Journey to the West to you.
Yours,
Li Hui
Dear Mike,
Since you want to read Chinese classic works, I'd like to recommend Journey to the West to you.
The characters in Journey to the West are humorous and funny, especially Sun Wukong and Zhu Bajie. Sometimes they fight with each other, but when danger comes, they help each other and fight against the enemies. All the the four characters are popular with people, and children like them best. Besides, the most important thing is that they have the team spirit. Whatever difficulties they meet on the way, they work together and overcome them. Although they get into trouble over and over again, they never lose heart. In order to realize their dream,they never give up in the face of any difficulties.
You will enjoy yourself while reading the novel and you can share your opinions with me whenever you like.
Yours,
Li Hui
2️⃣ (2023北京中考)假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Peter 计划暑假来中国，想向你咨询旅行的建议。请你给他写一封邮件，推荐一个你喜欢的地方并说明理由。
提示要点：
1.推荐地点
2.推荐理由
3.你的祝福
My Travel Recommendation
Dear Peter,
I am thrilled to learn that you will visit China during the summer vacation. I'd like to recommend a wonderful place to you—Yunnan Province.
Yunnan is located in the southwest of China. It is famous for its beautiful scenery and diverse cultures. You can visit Lijiang Old Town, see the Jade Dragon Snow Mountain, and experience the local ethnic customs. The weather there is comfortable in summer, and the food is also delicious.
If you come to Yunnan, I promise you will have an unforgettable experience!
Looking forward to your coming!
Yours,
Li Hua
3️⃣（2023江苏中考）为了让学生们身体健康，学校正在推广校园体育活动。请根据以下提示，以"Healthy Lifestyle"为题写一篇短文。
提示要点：
Healthy Lifestyle
In today's fast-paced world, keeping healthy is more important than ever. Among all the sports, I like running best.
Running is a simple and effective exercise. It doesn't require any special equipment or places. All you need is a pair of running shoes and an open space. Moreover, running can help us stay fit, reduce stress, and improve our sleep quality.
I started running last year when I felt tired from studying all day. Now I run around the playground every morning. After a few months, I found myself more energetic and focused in class.
Let's start running together and enjoy a healthy life!
4️⃣（2024中考题改编）假设你是李华，学校将举办元旦联欢晚会，正在招募主持人。请你写一封自荐信申请这个职位。
提示要点：
参考范文：
Application for Host of New Year Party
Dear Principal,
I am Li Hua from Class 3, Grade 9. I am very interested in being the host of our school's New Year party, so I'd like to recommend myself.
I have a strong confidence and excellent speaking skills. I have hosted several class activities before, and all the classmates were satisfied with my performance. Moreover, I can speak English fluently, which will help me connect with international guests.
If I can be chosen as the host, I will prepare carefully and do my best to make the party a great success.
Thank you for considering my application. I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
5️⃣（2023 湘潭中考）湘潭市博物馆正在为"讲好湘潭故事，传播本土文化"的大型宣传活动招募英语讲解员。假设你是李华，你想参加此次活动，请根据以下提示用英语向活动负责人写一封自荐信。
提示要点：
个人基本情况（姓名、年龄等） 自荐的原因（性格、特长等） 对活动的认知（感想或意义等）
参考范文：
Application for Museum Guide
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'd like to be a volunteer in this "Telling Xiangtan Stories, Spreading Local Culture" activity.
I am Li Hua, a 15-year-old student from Xiangtan Middle School. I am outgoing, friendly, and I love sharing stories. My English is good, which allows me to communicate with foreign guests smoothly. I have visited many museums and I am familiar with Xiangtan's local culture.
I think this activity is very meaningful. It helps introduce our hometown to the world and promotes cultural exchange. I hope to take part in this activity and share the beauty of Xiangtan with others.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
📚类别二书面表达模板|推荐
📚类别二书面表达模板|自荐
📚类别二改编演练
1、淮南寿县"美丽古城"项目吸引了不少外宾，暑假期间需要数名擅长英语的小导游。假定你是李华，希望成为其中的一员。请你结合以下表格提示，给该项目的外事负责人王先生写一封英文自荐信。词数80左右。
注意事项：
参考要点：
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am Li Hua. I am glad to know that you are in need of some tour guides.
Yours,
Li Hua
2、假如你是李华，你所在的阳光社区将于下个月开放社区图书馆，现面向全社区招募志愿者。请根据以下要点，用英语写一封自荐信。
要点提示：
1.做志愿者的原因
2.你的优势
3.工作设想（如：encourage people to read more, recommend a good book every week等）
注意事项：
1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数
2.可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名
参考词汇： voluntary work
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua. I'm writing to recommend myself to be the volunteer of the library in our community.
I will be thankful if I get the chance.
Yours,
Li Hua
