中考写作 | 情感类作文怎么写?

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中考写作 | 情感类作文怎么写?

你的心目中，有独属于你的“英雄”吗？

你能把他真切地写出来吗？

写这类英语作文，同学们往往容易堆砌人物事迹，或是空喊赞美，忽略细节里的真情实感，很难让阅卷老师产生共鸣。其实，把“英雄”的闪光点和你的真实感受结合起来，就能让人物跃然纸上。

今天我们就从技巧点拨、好词好句入手，一步步带你写出有温度、有亮点的心中“英雄”。

『写作题目』

在我们成长的道路上，总有一些人像灯塔一样照亮我们的心灵。无论是在危难时刻挺身而出的勇者，默默坚守岗位的普通人，还是用知识或信念影响世界的伟人，他们都用真诚、坚韧或善良诠释着 “英雄” 的意义。请以“The hero in my heart”为题，用英语写一篇100词左右的文章，介绍一下你心目中的英雄。

要点：1. Who is your hero?

2. What did he/she do?

3. What can you learn from your hero?

『写作素材库』

① 技巧点拨

这个话题要从自身角度出发，根据要点逐条拆解题目：

首先，清晰交代你心中的英雄是谁，不必局限于名人伟人，也可是文学作品中的人物，身边的普通人等，注重真情实感和人物背景的准确性；

其次，这个人物之所以让人敬佩，一定是因为他/她的某些行为、品质打动了你，这部分是文章的核心，要通过具体事例来体现；

最后，总结你对这位英雄的情感以及你可以从其身上学到什么，点出你心目中的英雄对你的意义等。

② 重点词汇

......之一	one of ...
致力于	devote oneself to ...
为......骄傲	be proud of
坚强的意志	a strong will
无论什么	no matter what
永不放弃	never give up
克服困难	set an example for ...
为......树立榜样	set an example for ...
模范榜样	a role model
被......激励	be inspired by ...

③ 写作金句

人物介绍

人物事迹

榜样力量

My hero is ... She/He is a great ...
The hero in my heart is ...
She is not famous, but in my mind, she is the bravest woman in the world.

He works tirelessly to provide for our family and always puts us first.
He devoted his life to researching hybrid rice. His great success helped solve the hunger problem for millions of people in China and around the world.
She does more than just teach grammar; she opens a window to the world for us. She always encourages us to dream big and believe in ourselves.

From my mother, I learned the importance of kindness.
From him, I learned the power of never giving up and having big dreams. He proved that with hard work, one can truly make the world a better place, which encourages me to keep trying.
She taught me that knowledge is power and kindness can light up a student’s future.
He inspires me to be brave and always try to do the right thing.