【2024年高考百日备考英语读后续写研讨3】李晓婷 |人与自然 山洞遇险(2024届广东省高三六校联考)

  "Wow,  these  trees  are  so  tall!" William  shouted  excitedly,

while walking  with  his classmates in a forest near his school. They were on a field trip to the forest as part of a science lesson.

  Over there, they met the forester(护林人), Victor. When William learned Victor lived in a simple wooden house there for years, he laughed at him with his friends.

    Then, they passed by an entrance to a cave. William wanted to explore inside the cave, but his teacher didn't allow it. "I'll come back here," he thought. On the way back to school, he remembered the exact location of the cave.

   The next  day, William  asked his  four  friends to the  cave together. They told their parents they would go to the library and return home in the evening. None of the teenagers told their parents about their plan to visit the cave.

    When the teenagers reached the cave, they left their school bags outside to reduce the burden. One by one, they entered the cave. Just when they took a few steps inside, some rocks from the cave wall fell and blocked the entrance.

   "How are we going to get out now?"one of the teenagers Sarah shouted. William had an idea and said, "Maybe we can try digging through the fallen rocks with our hands to reach the entrance.”But realizing getting out of the cave only by their hands was impossible, they had great fear. The sun was about to go down. The teenagers started calling for help, but nobody could hear them. The teenagers were losing hope.

    Victor happened to pass by the entrance to the cave, and five school bags caught his attention. He also heard some sounds coming from inside the cave. "Who's in there?" Victor shouted.

   "I'm William! We  came here yesterday with our teacher!" William replied instantly. "Help us, please! We are stuck! Sarah can't breathe here because of fear."

     "Okay, calm down, children!" Victor said. "I'll help you get out!"

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Para.1 Victor immediately called the first-aid center and rushed home.                                     

Para.2 Soon, the teenagers walked outside the cave and took a deep breath in the fresh air.

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  本文是篇记叙文，主题是人与自然。一次科学课的野外考察，让William萌生了山洞探险的念头。第二天，他和他的四个朋友在没有告知父母实情的情况下去了他记住的那个山洞。出人意料的是他们刚一进去就被困在里面，情急之中，碰巧被他们曾经嘲笑过的救生员发现，拨打了救援中心的电话。William和他的朋友既经历了山洞探险也经历了一次生活的洗礼。文章是一篇好故事，把历险和个人成长结合起来，它告诉我们说谎、不尊重人才是更大的冒险。续写文章体现了友善、诚信和尊重的道德观和价值观，适合高中生写作。

1. This incident is profound, through which teenagers were given a perspective that they shouldn't take such an adventure again. 超健

2. The medical staff gave the teenagers a thorough check, only to find that they were safe and sound without any wounds. At the same time, they learnt that they can't do any dangerous things without parents’ permission. 东晓

3. There was no doubt that this unforgettable experience waslike an everlasting flower, blooming in the river of his memories.

4. The teenagers nodded and guaranteed that they wouldn't do it again. 依依

5. They promised that we, as a teenager, shouldn't be too naughty and stubborn. 瑶琪

6. Five teenagers realized that they shouldn'tjump to the action without careful consideration. 静如

7. Sensing the boy's integrity and bravery, he gave him a hug as a reply. After all, it was the boy's growth and health that play the best part. 喜喜

8. Because of this experience, William experienced a memorial lesson that safety is the most important one and we should not let our beloved one worry us. 铭怡

9. William and their friends wore a burning face, guaranteeingthat they won't go into a place where it was full of the unknown thing乾澄

10. He dug through the rocks with his bare handwholeheartedly.华英

11. At this moment, the teenagers cast an eye on Victor who had helped them out guiltily. 华英

12. How warm-hearting the scene was!华英

13. He didn't give a second thought to spring into action. 建沄

14. Along the process, though he met a lot of barriers and obstacles, he still kept his mind on the target, kept his feet on the ground and kept going towards it. 建沄

15. The instant he arrive d at home, he fetched the tools to assist the teenagers. 雪英

16. Although there was a long distance between the cave and Victor's home, he still spared no efforts to take actions. 翔尹

17 This arduous task seemed impossible to be finished by him, but victor didn't give up. 棋骐

18. After endless repetitions, the enter entrance to the cave was opened. 海碧

19. Intimidated though they felt, they tried their best to save themselves. 超健

   Sample writing 1

    Victor immediately called the first-aid center and rushed home.Anxious and concerned，Victor described the specific location in detail, urging that they come to rescue instantly. Meanwhile, he fetched spades and other tools in haste，fully aware that time was critical to rescuing those teenagers trapped in the cave. Occasionally he made interactions with the students inside, hoping to relieve their anxiety. With Victor accompanying him outside, William felt assured, encouraging his friends to stay awake. ln no time did professional staff from the first-aid centre come. Familiar with the complex geographical environment,Victor assisted the working staff efficiently,who with their joint efforts,got the rocks collapsed without hurting a single man.

    Soon, the teenagers walked outside the cave and took a deep breath in the fresh air. No sooner had they stepped outside the cave than all the rescue crew present heaved a sigh of relief. Staring at the rescuers outside, the teenagers couldn't help shedding tears of gratitude. Never have they felt so terrified before.Ashamed and guilty,William strode towards Victor directly and made a sincere apology to the faithful forester for his previous rude manners. Each individual knew if it hadn't been for Victor's sharp reaction and effective measures, the rescue work would not have progressed so smoothly. Exhausted though Victor was, his heart swelled with a sense of pride. Bathed in the natural scenery,William engraved it in his mind that any occupation shouldn't be underestimated for its unique value.

   Sample writing 2

    Victor immediately called the first-aid center and rushed home. Several minutes later, he returned with a hoe, sweat dropping down his face. No sooner had Victor got back to the entrance of the cave than he began to swing the hoe, digging hard into the ground, hoping to loosen the rocks and lower the height“Step away from the rocks!” shouted Victor, afraid the falling rocks might hurt the young. Hearing Victor's voice again and knowing Victor was trying to remove the rocks, William and his classmates felt relieved, and they tried to comfort Sarah. Finally, hard work paid off. The rocks in the bottom rolled into the pit Victor had dug allowing light to shine through the gap into the cave, which sparked hope in the hearts of the teenagers.

    Soon, the teenagers walked outside the cave and took a deep breath in the fresh air. Just then the first-aid personnel arrived at the spot and checked if they were fine. Luckily, Sarah felt much better after getting out of the cave. William and his classmates showed sincere gratitude to the forester for his timely help Regretful for what he had done when meeting the forester for the first time, William made a bow to Victor and apologized for his rudeness. Then the teenagers promised they would never lie to their parents and risk their lives to do something dangerous without permission any more. After all, safety is more important than anything else.

   Sample writing 3

   Victor immediately called the first-aid center and rushed home. Arriving at his wooden house, Victor jumped onto a small digger and started it, heading towards the cave without hesitation.“Kids, be calm!Victor yelled outside the cave,“Step away from the entrance!”“Ok!”responded William with all his might, as the digger was roaring. Victor, sparing no effort, drove the digger close to the entrance, hit the rocks stuck at the entrance and dug out the falling rocks to make a small gateway for the kids inside.

   Soon, the teenager walked outside the cave and took a deep breath in the fresh air. Catching sight of Victor beside the digger, they all rushed to hug him tightly.“Thank you!” They gazed admiringly up at him with tears welling up in their eyes. Victor rubbed their heads,“Keep in mind that safety always comes first while exploring the forest!” Touched deeply, William made his apology for laughing at him previously and murmured “You are areal hero!”Vitor smiled shiningly for the kids' respect for him.