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When I was a young girl, I used to love going adventuring. My dad always took me down to the bush every weekend and we collected many sticks and stones to add to our collection. I wasn’t like any ordinary girl as 1 loved the outdoors even as a young kid. I was never into dolls and tea parties.
Soon I became old enough to venture out on my own. When I ventured forth through the Australian bush land, I felt as if I was in heaven. There was nothing more beautiful than feeling the cool air brushing across my back. The leaves crushed beneath my feet at every step. I felt as if I was home.
As the sun dipped down beyond the horizon, there was nothing more to do than to head back home.On my way I heard a screeching(尖叫声). It was the most horrible sound I had ever heard in my life.Sure enough, I just had to investigate. In the dead of night, I headed towards the screech and came across a lake or river of some sort. Looking up and down the river, I couldn’t find a way to cross it. In much shame I decided to give up. It was about one o’clock in the morning and I thought my dad must be getting worried.
As I moved away from the lake, there was only one problem that I did not remember which direction I came from. My brain told me left but my instinct(直觉) told me right. In my past experiences I had always gone with my instinct. So of course I went with my instinct. As I walked off into the distance, I could see the sun breaking out in my distant view.
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After what seemed like hours, I felt a sigh of relief rush through my body.
“You are alive!” my dad shouted, “You are alive!”
一、试题分析 1 文章故事梗概和情节走向 文章以一位女孩的回忆为起点，讲述她小时候热爱冒险，经常和父亲一起在澳大利亚的丛林中捡拾树枝和石头。与普通女孩不同的是，她从小就喜欢户外活动，对布娃娃和茶话会没有兴趣。随着年龄的增长，她开始独自探险。在澳大利亚的丛林中，她感受到了轻松自由和自然的美丽。 当太阳即将消失在地平线下时，她回家了。在回家的路上，她听到一阵尖叫声，这是她一生中听过的最可怕的声音。尽管感到害怕，她还是决定去查看一下，最终她来到了一个湖泊亦或是河流的地方，但没法过去。无奈之下，她决定放弃，因为已经是凌晨一点了，她想到父亲可能会担心。 然而，当她离开湖泊时，她却忘记了自己来时的方向。尽管她的大脑告诉她往左走，但她的直觉告诉她往右走。她选择相信自己的直觉，最终看到了太阳在远处升起。 情节走向：“我”小时候热爱冒险，经常和父亲一起在丛林中捡拾东西。→长大后，“我”独自去丛林冒险，感受到大自然的美丽。→一次在回家的路上，“我”听到丛林里传来一声可怕的尖叫声，决定前往调查。→“我”来到湖边，但无法找到过河的方法，在失望中放弃并准备回家。→“我”发现自己迷失了方向，在决定回家方向时，“我”选择相信自己的直觉。→“我”沿着自己直觉选定的方向一路走下去，直到看到远处太阳在升起。 2 故事主题及象征意义 这篇文章结合了“人与自我”和“人与自然”两大主题语境，讲述了一个年轻女孩对冒险的热爱以及她在自然环境中的成长与发现。通过她在澳大利亚丛林中的探险，展现了她对大自然的热爱与融入，并通过意外的困境展现了她勇敢、果断的一面。 文章中的森林和大自然可以象征着生命的旅程和成长，主人公在这片未知的丛林中冒险，代表着她在成长过程中面对的挑战和探索未知的勇气，而她听到的尖叫声和迷失方向，象征着成长过程中遇到的困难和迷茫。最终，她选择相信自己的直觉，这代表着在成长过程中要相信自己的内在力量和直觉，才能找到自己的方向并走向成功。 3 续写思路 【续写思路一】主题上表达主人公在黑暗中的挣扎和对直觉的信任，强调对未知的勇敢探险，以及人生中每一次冒险都可能成为成长和重生的契机。 续写的第一段可以描述“我”在一处熟悉的地方停下来，发现周围散落着曾经与父亲收集过的树枝和石头。“我”意识到自己回到了曾经和父亲一起来过的地方。熟悉的环境让“我”确信自己离家不远。这时“我”看到了前方有一位模糊但熟悉的身影向“我”走来。 续写的第二段可以描述父亲的欢呼声打破了黎明前的宁静，成为一束希望的灯塔。泪水在“我”眼中涌动，“我”蹒跚地走向他，双腿因疲惫和释然而颤抖。在那一刻，他的拥抱宛如世界上最安全的地方。回家的路上，黎明的第一缕光芒将天空染上了粉红和金色，照亮着我们前行的道路。尽管“我”曾陷入黑暗，但人生中每一次冒险都是成长和重生的契机。 【续写思路二】主题上突出主人公在困境中的坚韧与勇气，以及父爱、亲情和自我坚持的重要性。 续写第一段可以描述主人公在荒野行走过程中对于选择正确方向的挣扎，以及在绝望中依然坚持前行的决心。为更好地与第二段首句衔接，可在本段构思一个场景：附近传来的沙沙声让“我”不禁停了下来。“我”的心脏怦怦跳着，紧张地努力透过黑暗想看清楚是什么，“我”不知道那是野兽潜伏在阴影中，还是风在“我”耳边耍花招，“我”屏住呼吸，静待变化。 续写的第二段描述主人公与父亲重逢时的感人一刻，并对主题进行升华。可以承接第一段描写当“我”听到父亲的喊声时，心中涌起了一种无法言喻的喜悦和安心。原来“我”听到的沙沙声是父亲在寻找我时发出来的。本段可通过强调家庭的力量和父爱的重要性，以及主人公从这次经历中所得到的成长和启示来进行结尾。 【续写思路三】主题上可表达亲情和坚持的主题，突出主人公面对困境时的勇气和坚持，以及父亲的关心和支持。 在第一段中可续写主人公最终在疲惫和不安中找到了家的方向。熟悉的环境和凉爽的空气使她确信自己离家很近。在迷雾中，模糊但熟悉的身影站在家前的高大树木下，原来是她的父亲！她鼓足勇气朝着家跑去。这段时间似乎漫长无尽，但最终她感到一阵如释重负的宽慰，因为她坚信自己的选择是正确的。 在第二段中可续写主人公被父亲发现的情景。父亲可能会表现出担心和紧张，但同时也充满了对女儿终于能平安回来的喜悦和庆幸。他可能会温柔地安慰主人公，告诉她一切都会好起来，并且承诺会永远保护她。这时，主人公感受到一股温暖和安心，知道自己不再孤独，因为有父亲的陪伴和支持。 二、参考范文 01 范文1： After what seemed like hours, I felt a sigh of relief rush through my body. Emerging from the dense bush, I found myself standing in a familiar place, the collection of sticks and stones from our weekend adventures with my dad scattered around. It was then that I realized I had circled back to our special spot. The familiar rustling of leaves and the cool air on my back reassured me that I was indeed near home. In the foggy distance, a fuzzy but familiar figure stood still beneath the tall tree in front of my house. It was my dad! I gathered all my strength and ran towards the house. “You are alive!” my dad shouted, “You are alive!” My dad’s voice echoed through the early morning, filled with a mixture of relief and concern. I threw myself into the warm embrace of my worried father, exhausted but relieved. He had been searching crazily for me as the night wore on. I shared my adventure, from the mysterious screech to the challenging encounter with the river. My dad, though relieved, couldn’t help but chuckle at my determination to explore even in the dead of night. From that day forward, our weekend adventures became even more special, filled with stories the Australian sky. 02 范文2： After what seemed like hours, I felt a sigh of relief rush through my body. The night enveloped me in its dark, unsettling atmosphere, with only the faint glow of the stars above to light my way. Every step I took felt heavy with uncertainty, and fear gnawed at the edges of my mind. But I pressed on, determined to find my way back home. Suddenly, a rustling sound nearby made me freeze in my tracks. My heart pounded in my chest as I strained to see through the darkness. Was it a wild animal lurking in the shadows, or just the wind tricks on my ears? I held my breath, waiting for any sign of movement. “You are alive!” my dad shouted, “You are alive!” His voice cut through the silence like a beacon of hope, guiding me towards safety. With a surge of relief, I stumbled towards the familiar sound, tears of gratitude streaming down my cheeks. My dad rushed to embrace me, his strong arms wrapping around me in a protective hug. In that moment, all my fears melted away, replaced by overwhelming gratitude for his unwavering love and support. As we made our way back home together, I vowed never to underestimate the power of instinct and the importance of family in guiding us through life's darkest moments. 03 范文3： After what seemed like hours, I felt a sigh of relief rush through my body. Lost in the dense Australian bush, surrounded by unfamiliar sounds and shadows, fear had gripped me tightly. But as I continued to follow my instinct, the path lit by morning sun light eventually led me to a familiar clearing. The relief flooded over me like a warm wave, washing away the panic and uncertainty. It was a moment of triumph, a testament to the resilience of the human spirit in the face of adversity. “You are alive!” my dad shouted, “You are alive!” His voice echoed through the trees, filled with a mixture of relief and concern. Rushing towards me, he enveloped me in a tight embrace, his warmth and familiar scent comforting me like nothing else could. Tears welled up in my eyes as I realized how close I had come to danger, how fortunate I was to have found my way back. In that moment, I knew that no matter where life's adventures took me, I would always find my way home, guided by the love and support of those who cared for me. 04 范文4： After what seemed like hours, I felt a sigh of relief rush through my body. Despite the darkness enveloping me and the uncertainty of my surroundings, I pressed on, guided only by my instinct. Every step I took felt heavier than the last, as if the weight of my decision to trust my gut was bearing down on me. The cool morning air whispered secrets as I walked forward, my heart pounding in my chest with each passing moment. “You are alive!” my dad shouted, “You are alive!” His voice breaking through the stillness of the dawn like a beacon of hope. Tears welled up in my eyes as I stumbled towards him, my legs trembling with exhaustion and relief. In that moment, his embrace felt like the safest place in the world. As we made our way back home, the first light of dawn painted the sky with hues of pink and gold, illuminating our path forward. Though I had wandered into the darkness, I emerged with a newfound appreciation for the guiding light of family and the resilience of the human spirit.
