2025 济南中考英语作文|议论文类「模板句」+ 三步结构

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2025 济南中考英语作文|议论文类「模板句」+ 三步结构
先记住这一句:2025 年这道题,25 分里最容易丢的就是第一段。

为什么?因为绝大多数学生会写 I think ...。而阅卷的时候,一句 I strongly suggest that ... 就能把文章的分层拉出来。

这篇我把 2025 那道题的模板句全列出来了,能抄的直接抄。

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先看题目

假定你是李华,你校英语社团发起了关于“激励青少年进行体育运动”的主题论坛活动。请你根据思维导图做出两种最佳选择,并用英语写一篇文章,发表在论坛上。

内容包括:1. 你的选择;2. 陈述理由;3. 发出倡议。

注意:词数 100 左右,题目已给出,不计入总词数;可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

参考词汇:encouraging 激励人的

题目给的思维导图,五个选项:P.E. classes 体育课、Ball games 球类比赛、Sports meetings 运动会、Jogging 慢跑、National fitness centers 全民健身中心。

注意「两种」这两个字。

五个选项里必须精确选两个,不能多选、不能少选、也不能选图外的。这是最容易白送分的地方——写了一个,25 分直接掉到 15 分档。

最容易丢分的一个地方

suggest 后面接从句,从句里必须用 (should) + 动词原形。

正确:I strongly suggest that we teenagers engage in jogging and ball games.

错误:I strongly suggest that we teenagers to engage in jogging.

错误:I strongly suggest that we teenagers engages in jogging.

这个错,学生几乎年年犯。但只要在考场上多写一个 should,句子就永远不会错:

I strongly suggest that we teenagers should engage in jogging and ball games.

should 可以省略,但写出来绝对不扣分。这是我给每个学生都强调的一招——用一个多写不扣分的小词,换掉一整类语法错误。

三步结构(照着写,25 分能拿 18 分以上)

段落
任务
模板句
首段
亮观点选什么 + 为什么选这两个
I strongly suggest that we teenagers should ______.These two forms of exercise are easy to start and ______.
中段
理由一 + 理由二
First, ______, helping us ______.Second, ______ such as ______ help us ______.By taking part in such sports, we can ______.
末段
倡议
Let's encourage everyone around us to ______and create a ______ community together!

能抄的句型清单

这一栏建议你抄在本子上,早读念三遍。议论文的分数就是这么一句一句堆出来的。

用途
英文
开篇亮观点
I strongly suggest that we teenagers should ______.
补充理由
These two forms of exercise are easy to start and boost both our physical and mental health.
分述一
First, ______ can be done almost anywhere, helping us ______.
分述二
Second, ______ such as ______ help us develop teamwork and communication skills.
方式状语
By taking part in such sports, we can reduce stress from our studies.
动宾并列
reduce stress from our studies and enjoy quality time with friends
倡议
Let's encourage everyone around us to participate in sports!
收尾升华
and create a healthier community together!

三档范文对照

满分版(21—25 分)

Enjoy Sports, Keep Fit!

I strongly suggest that we teenagers engage in jogging and ball games. These two forms of exercise are easy to start and boost both our physical and mental health.

First, jogging can be done almost anywhere, helping us build patience and improve our heart health. Second, ball games such as basketball help us develop teamwork and communication skills. By taking part in such sports, we can reduce stress from our studies and enjoy quality time with friends.

Let's encourage everyone around us to participate in sports and create a healthier community together!

降一档(16—20 分)

Enjoy Sports, Keep Fit!

I think teenagers should do sports. I choose running and ball games.

First, running is easy. We can run anywhere. It is good for our health. Second, ball games are fun. We can play with friends. We can also learn teamwork.

Let's do sports together and keep healthy!

降两档(11—15 分)

Enjoy Sports, Keep Fit!

Sports are good for us. I like basketball. I play basketball every day. It is interesting. We should do more sports. Let's go!

两档都掉在哪

降一档:观点太弱 + 理由太浅。

首句 I think teenagers should do sports —— 语气平,阅卷看不出立场。理由停在 easy / good / fun,没有一层“为什么好”。改法:首句换成 I strongly suggest that we teenagers should ______,理由加上 boost both our physical and mental health。

降两档:两个要点都不完整——最典型的就是「只选了一种」。

降两档版写的是 I like basketball. I play basketball every day.题目要求「做出两种最佳选择」,它只选了一个——三分之一的分数直接没了。而且缺“倡议”的展开,只有一句 Let's go!。改法:首句必须出现两个运动;末句必须是 Let's ... together! 的号召。

给学生一句可以背的话:

写之前先在草稿纸上写三个数字:选了什么(一、二)、为什么(两条)、怎么号召(一句)。动笔前把这三个数字列出来,逐条打钩。考完再看,这题没有"漏要点"这个丢分项。

今晚可以做的三件事

  1. 把上面那八句抄一个本子上。明天早读念三遍。这是议论文的全部弹药。
  2. 把三档范文抄一遍,只抄英文。抄完盖住满分版,只看降两档,问自己:它少写了哪两个要点?
  3. 找出你上次写的议论文(或者任何带建议的作文),标一遍 suggest / suggest that 后面动词的形式。写错一个,改一个。

一个只有一线老师才给得出的提醒:

“suggest 后面的动词形式”这类错误,机器改卷本改不出来,只能靠人看。你孩子每次考完试,最该自己看的就是这一页——不是看分数,是看动词形式对不对。错一个,扣的分比你以为的多。

你家孩子最近写议论文了吗?留言告诉我,我挑几个回。

如果你也在攒中考作文的模板句,点个「赞」让我知道——后面我会继续按题型更新这个清单。

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