Moved by the kids in the village, I decided to donate all my money to them.被汶川的孩子们感动了，我决定把我所有的钱都捐给他们。Seeing Dad working so hard, I could not help bursting into tears.看到父亲工作这么辛苦，我忍不住怆然泪下。点评：
分词作状语可以用来替代时间、条件、原因等状语从句，让文章显得更加简洁，同时功底更深。
分词作状语的用法：当状语从句的主语与主句的主语一样时，可直接省略从句的主语，并把从句的谓语改成分词（主动语态改成现在分词，被动语态改成过去分词），从而构成分词作状语结构。【例1】When I see Dad working so hard, I could not help bursting into tears. → Seeing Dad working so hard, I could not help bursting into tears.【例2】Because I was moved by the kids in Wenchuan, I decided to donate all my money to them.→Moved by the kids in Wenchuan, I decided to donate all my money to them.
句型二
副词提前
Obviously, one of the best ways to keep healthy is to do sports.显然，保持健康最好的方法之一是做运动。Eventually, every child will leave home to lead his own life as a fully independent adult.最终，每一个孩子都会离开家庭去过自己的生活，成为一个完全独立地成年人。点评：
注意事项：用来提前的必须是——副词！除了上面给出来的2个例句之外，再分享一篇作文里一个较难的句子，作文题目是“我最难忘的回忆”。【例】... Oddly enough, my most precious memory lies in the days when I was ill in hospital...非常奇怪的是，我最珍贵的回忆发生在我生病住院的那些日子里。
句型三
动名词做状语
Listening to music enables us to feel relaxed.听音乐可以让我们感觉放松。Doingexercise keeps us healthy.做运动让我们保持健康。点评：
大家可能觉得上面给出来的两个例句并不是十分精彩，但是动名词作主语只要合理使用，还是会让人眼前一亮的。请看下句：【例】Besides, taking some small sports equipment along with you can help you do exercise whenever you are free. 另外，随身携带一些小型运动器械可以让你利用任何空闲的时间来运动。
句型四
强调句
It is in recent years that people begin to realize the importance of environmental protection.最近这些年人们才开始意识到保护环境的重要性。点评：
强调句型是一种规律性极强、非常好用的高级句型，在做文档中使用一个非常有利于增进文章的感情色彩。
强调举行的基本模式是：It is/was + 一个句子要强调的部分 + that + 句子中剩余的部分。例如，原本我们想写的句子是：Eric found a beautiful vase in the cave.要强调主语Eric，则为It was Eric that found a beautiful vase in the cave.要强调宾语a beautiful vase，则为 It was a beautiful vase that Eric found in the cave.
句型五
同位语or同位语从句
Beijing, the capital of China, has a great many places of interests.北京是中国的首都，有很多的旅游景点。The fact is clear that our planet is becoming warmer and warmer.很显然，地球正在变暖。点评：
同位语从句的基本结构是：抽象名词+that+抽象名字的内容（从句）+主句剩余部分。【例】I have just recieved the message that a serious earthquake struck a county of Taiwan yesterday.我刚收到一个消息：昨天台湾某县发生了严重的地震。关于同位语从句的效果，且看《独立宣言》中的名句：
We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are equal, that they are endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable Rights, that among these are Life, Liberty and the pursuit of Happiness.
Aswinter comes, more and more leaves fall off the trees, yellow and sad.随着冬天的来临，越来越多悲伤地黄叶从树上落下。The pollution is getting worse as the economy develops.随着经济的发展，污染正在变得更加严重。Mom's hair is not as black as it used to be.妈妈的头发不再像过去一样乌黑亮丽。点评：
初中阶段我们要求同学们掌握as的一共5种意思或用法：
① 当，随着
as time goes by 随着时间的流逝
② 作为
regard A as B 把A当做B
as a result 结果是……
③ 正如，就像
as we all know/ as everyone knows 正如我们都知道的
as we had expected 正如我们期待的那样
as is know to all 众所周知
as is mentioned before 正如前面所提到的
as the saying goes 就像谚语说的那样
as it turns out 正如结果所展示的那样
④ 因为
⑤ 比较
as...as it used to. 和过去一样……
句型七
宾语从句
The man, who is called father by me, is trying to ensure us a better life with all his effort.那个被我称作父亲的人，正在竭尽全力为我们提供更好的生活。I seldom waste any time during the classes, which helps me to be highly efficient while studying.在课堂上，我很少浪费任何时间，这帮助我在学习的时候更加高效。点评：
