写作
My Trip to Beijing
On 15 August last year, my parents took me to Beijing. It was the most memorable trip I have ever had.
There were visitors from all over the world, and I had never seen so many street performances. As I walked along the street, a show called Around the World in 80 Days caught my attention. Standing on the Great Wall, I felt proud of my country. We didn't know where to go first, so we asked the guide for help. We stayed there for three days and tried many local snacks. They were delicious.
I will never forget this trip. I hope I can go there again to explore more places.
【总体分析】
①体裁：游记——按行程顺序展开，含时间地点、见闻、特别之处与感受，开头点明时间地点，结尾表达难忘与期待
②语法：疑问词+ 不定式（where to go first）；There be 结构；as 引导时间状语从句；现在分词作状语（Standing on the Great Wall）
③结构：点明时间地点与总体印象（开头）→行程见闻与特别之处（中间）→ 感受与展望（结尾）
【亮点词汇】
the most memorable trip（最难忘的旅行）/ from all over the world（来自世界各地）/ street performances（街头表演）/ catch one's attention（引起注意）/ local snacks（当地小吃）
【高分句型】
It was the most memorable trip I have ever had.（关系从句省略关系代词）
As I walked along the street, a show called Around the World in 80 Days caught my attention.（as 引导时间状语从句 + 过去分词作定语）
Standing on the Great Wall, I felt proud of my country.（现在分词作状语）
