写作
A Growing-up Moment
Last term, our class held a speech competition in the school hall. I was chosen to represent our group, so I practised hard for a week. That was an important growing-up moment for me.
At first, I felt very nervous. When I stood on the stage, my voice became shaky and my hands got sweaty. I even forgot part of my speech. However, I kept calm and smiled at my classmates. Their warm smiles made me feel relaxed. As time went on, I grew more confident. Finally, I finished my speech and received warm applause.
Looking back, I have realised that courage grows out of practice. Whatever happens, I will stay positive and never give up.
①体裁：记叙文·成长感悟——按“时间地点人物+ 经过 + 感受 + 感悟”展开，开头交代时间地点，中间叙述经过与心理变化，结尾点明成长感悟
②语法：系动词表达变化与感受（became / got / grew / feel / stay）；时间状语连接事件（at first / as time went on / finally / looking back）
③结构：交代演讲比赛与成长瞬间（开头）→比赛经过与内心变化（中间）→ 成长感悟（结尾）
【亮点词汇】
a growing-up moment（成长瞬间）/ feel nervous（感到紧张）/ keep calm（保持冷静）/ grow more confident（变得更自信）/ warm applause（热烈的掌声）
【高分句型】
Last term, our class held a speech competition in the school hall.（以时间状语与事件开篇，交代时间地点人物）
When I stood on the stage, my voice became shaky and my hands got sweaty.（系动词表达变化+ 细节描写）
As time went on, I grew more confident.（as time went on 连接事件发展）
Looking back, I have realised that courage grows out of practice.（现在分词作状语+ 成长感悟）
