假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Kevin发来邮件，对天津著名景点和热门活动很感兴趣，请你回复邮件，内容包含：
1.天津之眼：2008年建成；高出海河120米；可以欣赏美丽景色
2.黄崖关长城：1400多年历史；爬长城；亲近大自然
3.天津受欢迎的休闲活动
4.谈谈你对天津的看法
参考词汇：
天津之眼the Tianjin Eye
黄崖关长城the HuangyaguanGreat Wall
分值15分；邮件应用文；词数80‑100；开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数开头：
Dear Kevin,
I’m glad to receive your email and know you’re interested in famous places and popular activities in Tianjin.
结尾：
Waiting for your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
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Dear Kevin,
I’m glad to receive your email and know you’re interested in famous places and popular activities in Tianjin.
At the first place,the Tianjin Eye was completed in 2008. It is 120 metres high, and you can enjoy beautiful sights there.What is more, the HuangyaguanGreat Wall has a history of over 1400 years. You can climb it and get closer to nature.Last but not least,there are many popular activities in Tianjin, such as playing volleyball, and many people help each other to play volleyball in Tianjin.
In my opinion, there is a famous English saying which goes on that many trees together can make the forest. So, we need to try ourbest to help each other andmake our lifebetter and better.
Waiting for your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
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亲爱的凯文：
很高兴收到你的邮件，也了解到你对天津的著名景点和热门活动很感兴趣。
首先，天津之眼于2008 年建成，高120 米，在那里你可以欣赏美丽的景色。其次，黄崖关长城已有1400 多年的历史。你可以攀登长城，亲近大自然。最后天津还有不少热门活动，比如打排球，在天津有很多人打排球时会相互帮助。
在我看来，有一句著名的英语谚语是这么说的：独木不成林。所以我们要尽最大努力互相帮助，让我们的生活变得越来越好。
期待你的回信！
李华
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In my opinion, there is a famous English saying which goes on that many trees together can make the forest. So, we need to try ourbest to help each other to make our life better and better.
在我看来，有一句著名的英语谚语是这么说的：独木不成林。所以我们要尽最大努力互相帮助，让我们的生活变得越来越好。
得分要点（天津阅卷标准）
1.单词数不得少于70，或多于120，否则酌情扣分
2.时态：一般现在时为主；天津之眼建成用一般过去时was completed
3. 书写工整，错词轻轻划去可，不要涂成黑团
高频易错点
1. was completed（被动语态，2008年被建成）
2. over 1,400 years 一千四百多年
3. get close to nature 亲近自然
