2026华师一附中高三英语5.26临门一脚
假定你是李华，发现有同学在走廊踢足球或打篮球，你觉得不妥。请给校英文报“Reader's voice”栏目写一封信，内容包括：
陈述现象；
说明问题；
提出建议。
注意：
写作词数应为 80 词左右；
请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：走廊 corridor
答题卡格式：Dear editor,I am Li Hua from Grade 3.
Yours,Li Hua
这是一道非常经典的校园安全与规则类应用文写作题。
需要给校英文报“Reader's voice”栏目写一封信，内容包括：
陈述现象（走廊踢球/打球）
说明问题（为什么不妥）
提出建议（如何解决）
范文1
Dear editor,
I am Li Hua from Grade 3. I am writing to draw your attention to a serious phenomenon in our school. It is not uncommon tosee some students playing football or basketball in the corridors,regardless of the safety rules.
Werethis situation allowed to continue, it would pose a significant threat to both the players and passers-by.Not onlycan the narrow space lead to accidental collisions, but the loud noise also disturbs students studying in nearby classrooms.
To address this problem, I strongly recommend that the school designate specific outdoor areas for sports activities. Meanwhile, stricter supervision should be implemented during break times. I sincerely hope my suggestions will be taken into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
词汇
Designate sth (as) sth/ ~ sth (as being sth)命名；指定
This area has been designated (as) a National Park.本区已定为国家公园。
This floor has been designated a no-smoking area.这楼层已定为无烟区。
语法亮点详细解析（阅卷老师加分项）：
1. 虚拟语气（极具高级感）
Were this situation allowed to continue, it would pose... (虚拟条件句的倒装省略)：
2. 倒装句（打破模板限制）
Not only can the narrow space lead to accidental collisions, but the loud noise also disturbs... (Not only 引导的部分倒装)：
3. 非谓语动词（连贯且简洁）
...regardless of the safety rules. (介词短语作状语)：无论/不管安全规则，简洁地说明了他们违规的行为。
...to draw your attention to... (不定式作目的状语)：写信的目的很明确。
...leading to...（替代方案：如果你的倒装句想换，也可以在句中加入 ...causing injuries to passers-by, leading to... 这种现在分词作结果状语的用法）。
4. 从句与固定高级表达
...that the school designate specific outdoor areas... (虚拟语气在宾语从句中的运用)：在 recommend/suggest 后面跟 that 从句时，谓语要用 (should) + 动词原形。这里用的 designate 就是原形，非常地道。
It is not uncommon to see...：双重否定表示肯定，意为经常能看到……，比 It is common to see 语气更强烈且更有文采。
范文2
Dear editor,
I am Li Hua from Grade 3. I am writing to express my deep concern about students playing football or basketball in the corridors. Neverhave I seen such a disregard for our school safety rules.
Werethis unsafe practice to continue, it would inevitably result in severe injuries to both players and passers-by. Besides, the deafening noise largely disturbs the academic atmosphere of nearby classrooms.
To put an end to this, I suggest the school designate safe playgrounds for ball games. Only by raising our safety awareness can we create a harmonious campus environment. I look forward to your positive response.
Yours,
Li Hua
高级句型详细解析：
1. 倒装句一：否定词提前 (Never...)
Never have I seen such a disregard for our school safety rules.
(我从未见过如此无视学校安全规则的行为。)
2. 倒装句二：Only + 状语提前 (Only by...)
Only by raising our safety awareness can we create a harmonious campus environment.
(只有通过提高我们的安全意识，我们才能创造一个和谐的校园环境。)
3. 虚拟语气：条件句倒装 (Were...)
Were this unsafe practice to continue, it would inevitably result in severe injuries...
(如果这种危险行为继续下去，必将导致严重受伤……)
语法点：这是 If this unsafe practice were to continue 的省略倒装形式。将 If 省略，Were 提前。
4. 高级从句与非谓语
...students playing football... (现在分词作后置定语)：后置定语修饰 students，比 who play... 定语从句更简洁。
...to express my deep concern... (不定式作目的状语)：清晰地表明写信意图。
...I suggest the school designate... (虚拟语气在宾语从句中的运用)：suggest 后的宾语从句要用 (should) + 动词原形，这里直接用 designate，非常准确。
