Directions: Suppose you are a university student. Write an email to the university library to express your appreciation and suggest improvements to their services. You should write about 100 words. Do not use your own name; use "Li Ming" instead. (假设你是一名大学生，请给大学图书馆写一封电子邮件，表达感谢并对他们的服务提出改进建议。约100词。)
1. 范文 (Model Essay)
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this email to express my sincere gratitude for the quality services provided by our student canteen, and to offer a few practical suggestions for further improvement.
Firstly, it would be highly appreciated if the canteen could enrich the variety of dishes, particularly by introducing more healthy options to accommodate the diverse dietary habits of students. Secondly, upgrading the ventilation system is essential, as the dining hall is occasionally stuffy during peak hours, which hinders a pleasant dining experience. Lastly, introducing an online pre-ordering system would greatly reduce the waiting time.
Thank you for taking the time to consider my proposals. I look forward to your favorable reply.
Yours sincerely, Li Ming
2. 翻译 ( Translation)
尊敬的先生/女士：
我写这封邮件是为了对我们学生食堂提供的优质服务表达诚挚的感谢，并为进一步的改进提供一些实用的建议。
首先，如果食堂能丰富菜品的种类，特别是引入更多健康的饮食选择以适应学生多样化的饮食习惯，我们将不胜感激。其次，升级通风系统是必要的，因为在就餐高峰期大厅偶尔会有些闷热，这阻碍了愉快的就餐体验。最后，引入在线预订系统将大大减少排队等候的时间。
感谢您抽出时间考虑我的建议。期待您的答复。
敬上， 李明
3. 核心亮点提炼
- enrich the variety of dishes（丰富菜品种类）
- 得分要点：校园生活类作文的极品“得分眼”。阅卷老师经常看到考生写 "give us more food"，这太口语化了。用 enrich the variety 这个结构，不仅词汇高级，还能体现出清晰的书面逻辑。
- hinders a pleasant dining experience（阻碍了愉快的就餐体验）
- 得分要点： 抱怨/建议信中的黄金万能句型。不要再用 "makes me unhappy" 这种初中生句型。hinder (阻碍) 配合抽象名词 experience (体验)，可以直接套用到任何服务不满意的场景（如：阻碍了阅读体验、阻碍了学习效率等），一句话拉开分差。
4. 后台领取资料
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