中考作文加油站 · 第41期（逐句修改）

Last weekend, Tony and I wanted to find his original English test paper.
上周末，我和Tony想找到他原来的英语试卷。

But after searching for a long time, we could only find the answer sheet.
但找了很久只找到了答题卡。

These days, teachers often organize mock exams in the afternoon.
最近，老师们下午经常组织模拟考试。

Although the paper was missing, luckily the writing topic was still on the answer sheet.
虽然卷子不见了，但幸运的是，作文题目还留在答题卡上。

So today, we can still continue our “sentence-by-sentence correction”.
所以今天，我们依然可继续进行“逐句修改”。

原句1
❌ In my home, ...
✅ At home, I have to follow my family rules.
“at home” 是更自然、更地道的表达。

原句2
❌ Let me tell you.
✅ Let me tell you something about them.
补充完整后，句子更自然。

原句3
❌ First, I have to finish my homework in our school.
✅ First, I have to finish my homework on time after school.
原句意思不清楚，修改后更符合真实语境。

原句4
❌ Second, I must ...before 11:00 pm.
✅ Second, I must go to bed before 11:00 p.m. every night.
加上 “every night” 后更加完整。

原句5
❌ There are also a lot of rules.
✅ There are also many school rules.
明确“学校规则”。

原句6
❌ I have to not be late for school.
✅ I mustn’t be late for school.
“mustn’t” 是中考高频表达。

原句7
❌ We should be friendly for ...
✅ We should be friendly to our teachers and classmates.
固定搭配：be friendly to sb.

原句8
❌ because it is very politely.
✅ because it is very polite.
polite 是形容词；
politely 是副词。

原句9
❌ we shouldn’t eat some junk food in the school.
✅ we shouldn’t eat too much junk food at school.
“too much junk food” 更自然；
“at school” 更地道。

原句10
❌ it can make us to success and good for our habits.
✅ it can help us develop good habits and succeed.
固定搭配：
help sb. do sth.

原句11
❌ some rules is good for us.
✅ some rules are good for us.
主语是复数，be动词也要用复数。