中考作文加油站 · 第38期（高分范文）

In the last episode, Tony finished a mock-exam composition about friendship.
上期，Tony完成了一篇关于“友谊”的模考作文。

However, there are still many small problems with grammar, tense and fixed expressions.
不过，语法、时态和固定搭配方面，仍然还有不少小问题。

Luckily, the most important thing before the Zhongkao is to discover problems and improve little by little.
好在，中考前最重要的事情，就是不断发现问题，再一点一点改进。

✨高分范文
Last weekend, our school organized a mountain-climbing activity, and it became one of the most unforgettable experiences in my life.
上周末，我们学校组织了一次爬山活动，那成为了我人生中最难忘的经历之一。

Early in the morning, my classmates and I took the first subway to the mountain.
一大早，我和同学们坐第一班地铁去了山里。

When we arrived there, we were deeply attracted by the fresh air, beautiful flowers.
当我们到达那里时，新鲜的空气、美丽的花朵深深吸引了我们。

Xiao Hua and I decided to climb the tallest mountain together.
我和小华决定一起攀登最高的那座山。

At first, everything went well. However, after climbing for about twenty minutes, I became so tired that I almost wanted to give up.
一开始一切都很顺利。然而，爬了大约二十分钟后，我累得几乎想放弃。

Xiao Hua encouraged me patiently and taught me some useful ways to save energy while climbing.
小华耐心地鼓励我，并教了我一些爬山时节省体力的方法。

With his help, I felt much more confident and finally reached the top with him.
在他的帮助下，我变得更加自信，并最终和他一起到达了山顶。

Standing on the top of the mountain, I realized that friendship is like a light in the dark.
站在山顶时，我意识到友谊就像黑暗中的一束光。

Whenever we face difficulties, true friends always encourage and support us.
每当我们面对困难时，真正的朋友总会鼓励和支持我们。

I will never forget this meaningful activity.
我永远不会忘记这次有意义的活动。