校园是一个充满“美”的地方。为了感受、记录、分享校园之“美” ，你校英语俱乐部将开展以“The beauty of our school”为主题的小组实践活动，请你根据以下提示和要求用英语完成一份小组活动计划。
提示：
(1) What do you record? (choose one point: views/people/activities… )
(2) How do you record and share it? And why?
(3) What do you expect to get from this group activity? (list at least two points)
要求：
(1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
(2) 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
(3) 词数：100词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
To present the beauty of our school, we plan to record ...
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【答案】
参考例文：
To present the beauty of our school, we plan to record the people. We will mainly focus on our teachers and classmates during their daily activities, like teaching, studying together, or helping each other. We plan to take photos and write short notes about these heartwarming moments. Photos capture real expressions and feelings instantly, making the beauty vivid. Then, we will share them on the school website or our club’s social media page. This way, more people inside and outside school can see the warm human spirit in our school.
From this activity, we expect to understand our school community better and learn to appreciate the kindness around us. We also hope to work better as a team.
【详解】
[总体分析]
① 题材：本文属于材料作文写作；
② 时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生需围绕“记录的内容、记录和分享的方式及原因、预期收获”展开叙述，注意使用第一人称，并适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，明确记录的对象（people），并简要说明具体内容（teachers and classmates）；
第二步，具体阐述记录方式（photos and short notes）和分享渠道（school website/social media），并解释原因（capture real expressions, spread warmth）；
第三步，总结预期收获（understand community better, appreciate kindness, teamwork），呼应主题。
[亮点词汇]
①heartwarming moments暖心时刻
②capture real expressions捕捉真实表情
③human spirit人文精神
④appreciate the kindness感恩善意
[高分句型]
① Photos capture real expressions and feelings instantly, making the beauty vivid.（现在分词作状语）
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