2. What made you change?
3. What do you think about your changes?
注意:1.短文须回答上面所有问题,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名:
3.词数:80~100(题目为你写好,不计入总词数)。
题目 3 个问题就是作文三段式固定骨架,严格对应开头 - 主体 - 结尾,词数完美卡在 80-100 词,所有中考高分作文通用逻辑:
- 开头段(点题)
总结初中三年时光,直接回答第 1 问 How did you change?(你发生了什么改变) - 主体段(叙事核心)
用具体事例,回答第 2 问 What made you change?(是什么让你改变)(学业困难 / 朋友帮助 / 老师鼓励 / 社团活动,任选一个素材) - 结尾段(升华感悟)
总结成长,回答第 3 问 What do you think about your changes?(你如何看待自己的成长变化),加对未来的展望
一、分模块万能金句库(开头 + 主体 + 结尾,直接背诵套用)
(一)开头万能句(3 个版本,全部点题 + 写清自身变化)
对应问题:How did you change?
基础稳妥版:Time flies! My three-year middle school life is coming to an end. I have changed a lot during these years. I used to be shy and afraid to speak in class, but now I become confident and outgoing. 简洁高分版:My middle school life is nearly over. I have grown up greatly in the past three years. I used to be weak in study, and now I can make progress through hard work. 文采高级版:Three years’ middle school life is full of warm memories. I have experienced many changes. I am braver, more hard-working and better at getting on with others than before.
(二)主体万能叙事句(4 类中考高频素材,全部对应 What made you change? 带具体事例)
二、考试任选一类素材直接套,自带转折、原因、故事细节,符合题目 “具体事例展现成长转折点” 要求
素材 1:老师鼓励 + 学业成长(最稳妥不出错)
My English teacher’s help made me change. At first, I was poor in English and wanted to give up. She patiently taught me learning ways and encouraged me all the time. With her help, I kept practicing and became better at my lessons.
素材 2:朋友陪伴 + 性格蜕变(校园人际交往素材)
My good friends made me a better person. I used to be quiet and had few friends. They invited me to take part in group activities. I learned to share and communicate with others, and I finally made many close friends.
素材 3:课外活动 + 勇气突破(社团 / 运动会素材)
School activities brought me great changes. I used to be nervous to show myself in public. When I joined the sports meeting, I learned to face challenges and never give up easily.
素材 4:自我坚持 + 习惯养成
My hard work made me change myself. I used to be lazy and put off my homework. Later I made strict plans for myself. Step by step, I developed good learning habits and improved my grades.
(三)结尾万能升华句(3 个版本,对应 What do you think about your changes? 感悟 + 未来展望,中考加分收尾)
标准版: I really value these great changes. They teach me that growth comes from efforts. I will keep moving forward and face new challenges in my future high school life. 简洁高分版: These changes make me grow into a better teenager. I will cherish the memories and keep working hard for my future dreams. 高级文采版: I am thankful for all the changes in my middle school life. Every progress makes me stronger. I will carry these gifts with me and have a wonderful future.
三、完整高分范文(3 篇,全部 80-100 词、覆盖全部设问、中考满分档次,可直接背诵默写)
范文 1(老师鼓励・学业成长版,考场最通用稳妥款)
My middle school life
Time flies! My three-year middle school life is coming to an end. I have changed a lot. I used to be weak in English and afraid to open my mouth in class, but now I am confident enough to speak up and make great progress.
My English teacher made all these changes. She always encouraged me and told me useful learning skills. I kept reading and practicing every day.
I feel proud of my changes. They tell me never to give up. I will carry the lessons with me and keep moving on in my future life.(词数:92)
范文 2(朋友相处・性格蜕变版,人际交往素材)
My middle school life
My middle school life is nearly over. I have grown and changed much in these three years. I used to be a shy boy/girl with few friends, but now I am outgoing and good at getting on with my classmates.
My warm friends made me change. They invited me to join group games and school activities. I learned to talk, share and help others around me.
I really cherish my growth. These changes make me a better person. I will keep kind and brave for my coming high school life.
(词数:88)
范文 3(自我努力・习惯养成版,简洁好背,低分逆袭万能款)
My middle school life
Three years has passed quickly in my middle school. I have changed greatly. I used to be lazy and careless with my study, but now I have good habits and my grades become better.
My own hard work made me change. I made clear study plans and never put off my tasks. Little by little, I made progress every day.
I am thankful for my growth. All changes come from efforts. I will keep working hard and achieve my dreams in the future.
(词数:85)