中考英语作文满分冲刺(热点预测+范文赏析)

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范文1
Dear classmates,
With the fast development of the AI technology, more and more students start to use AI tools to help with their studies. There is no doubt that AI tools like DeepSeek can greatly improve our learning efficiency.They help solve problems quickly and provide useful resources.
However, overusing AI may reduce our critical thinking skills, as we might rely too much on ready-made answers. Thus, we have to use AI properly so that we can draw inspiration from it to organize our own mind.
Let's use AI as a helper, not a replacement. Balance is key to smart learning!
Thank you!
范文2
Good morning, everyone!
With the rise of AI tools like DeepSeek and Doubao, more students are using them to study. These tools help us learn faster, check grammar, and even translate languages. They save time and make learning easier.
However, relying too much on AI can make us lazy. We might stop thinking for ourselves or forget basic skills. Also, some answers from AI may not always be correct.
Let’s use AI wisely—as a helper, not a replacement. Work hard, think critically, and AI will truly benefit us!
Thank you!

AI工具对学习的积极影响(Positive Effects)

词组(Phrases)

1.improve learning efficiency(提高学习效率)
2.provide instant answers(提供即时答案)
3.help with grammar and spelling(帮助语法和拼写)
4.offer personalized learning(提供个性化学习)
5.explain difficult concepts(解释复杂概念)
6.save time on homework(节省作业时间)
7.simulate conversations(模拟对话练习)
8.expand vocabulary(扩大词汇量)
9.organize study notes(整理学习笔记)
10.make learning more fun(让学习更有趣)

句子(Sentences)

1.AI tools help students learn faster and understand difficult topics.
2.With AI, we can get instant feedback on our writing and speaking.
3.AI provides personalized exercises to improve our weak areas.
4.These tools make learning more interactive and engaging.
5.AI can translate languages quickly, helping us study foreign languages.

AI工具的潜在问题(Potential Problems)

词组(Phrases)

1.reduce critical thinking(减少批判性思维)
2.depend too much on AI(过度依赖AI)
3.copy answers without understanding(不理解就直接抄答案)
4.lose creativity(失去创造力)
5.may provide incorrect information(可能提供错误信息)
6.weaken problem-solving skills(削弱解决问题的能力)
7.less interaction with teachers(减少与老师的互动)
8.become lazy in studying(学习变得懒惰)
9.overuse affects memory(过度使用影响记忆力)
10.lack real practice(缺乏实际练习)

句子(Sentences)

1.If we rely too much on AI, we may stop thinking for ourselves.
2.Some AI answers are not always correct, so we need to check them carefully.
3.Copying AI’s work without learning can harm our progress.
4.AI cannot replace real communication with teachers and classmates.
5.Using AI for everything may make us forget basic skills.

呼吁合理使用(Call for Wise Use)

词组(Phrases)

1.use AI as a helper, not a replacement(AI当作助手,而非替代品)
2.balance AI and independent learning(平衡AI和自主学习)
3.think critically before accepting AI answers(在接受AI答案前批判性思考)
4.combine AI with hard work(AI与努力结合)
5.stay an active learner(保持主动学习)
6.Don’t let AI do all the work(不要让AI做所有事情)
7.use AI wisely(明智地使用AI)
8.Improve skills, not just get answers(提升技能,而不仅仅是获取答案)
9.ask teachers when unsure(不确定时请教老师)
10.keep practicing without AI(坚持不依赖AI的练习)

句子(Sentences)

1.AI is a useful tool, but we should still work hard and think independently.
2.Let’s use AI to support our learning, not replace our efforts.
3.Always check AI answers and ask teachers if you’re unsure.
4.Real learning comes from practice, not just copying AI’s work.
5.If we use AI wisely, it can truly help us improve.

总结(Summary)

✅ 积极影响(Pros)AI提高效率、提供帮助、个性化学习❌ 潜在问题(Cons):依赖AI、减少思考、可能出错��合理使用(Wise Use):平衡AI与自主学习,保持批判性思维
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【预测题目2】问题解决+建议分享
邮件申请类
84.Write a letter according to the give situation with at least 60 words (根据所给情境,写一封至少 60 个单词的回信。标点符号不占格)(共 20 )
花园中学最近成立了一个青少年建议专栏,为学生提供在生活中遇到问题的解决建议。学生陆遥在上周给专栏的求助信中描述了她遇到的问题,如:因为她弄丢了朋友的书而失去朋友的信件、因学习成绩下降而失去信心、因同学的误解而感到伤心。假如你是专栏的负责人李明,请你选择其中一个方面给陆遥写封回信,说说你的建议并结合自己的经历进行说明。
整理写作思路:
你的建议:
Ø弄丢了朋友的书而失去朋友的信件:可建议主动诚恳道歉;购买新书赔偿等
Ø因学习成绩下降而失去信心:可以分析原因,制定预习计划,请教老师同学等。
Ø因同学的误解而感到伤心:可建议找合适的时机沟通解释,请共同朋友帮忙调节等。

1.弄丢朋友的书而失去朋友(Lost a Friend’s Book & Friendship)

道歉与赔偿(Apology & Compensation)

词组/短语(Phrases)

·sincerely apologize(诚恳道歉)
·take responsibility for the mistake(为自己的错误负责)
·offer to buy a new book as replacement(主动提出买新书赔偿)
·write a handwritten apology letter(手写道歉信)
·promise to be more careful in the future(承诺以后更加小心)
例句(Sentences)
·I sincerely apologize for losing your book—it was my fault.
·I will buy you a new copy to make up for my carelessness.
·Please accept my apology; I promise to be more responsible next time.

2. 因成绩下降而失去信心(Lost Confidence Due to Poor Grades)

词组/短语(Phrases)
·identify the reasons for low grades(找出成绩下降的原因)
·create a study schedule(制定学习计划)
·preview lessons in advance(提前预习功课)
·ask teachers or classmates for help(向老师或同学求助)
·practice past exam papers(练习往年试题)
例句(Sentences)
·I realized I didn’t manage my time well, so I’ll make a study schedule.
·Previewing lessons helps me understand better in class.
·I’ll ask my teacher for advice on improving my weak subjects.

3. 因同学的误解而伤心(Upset Due to Misunderstanding)

沟通与调解:

词组/短语(Phrases)
·find a good time to talk privately(找合适时间私下沟通)
·explain the situation calmly(冷静解释情况)
·ask a mutual friend to help clarify(请共同朋友帮忙调解)
·avoid arguing and listen patiently(避免争吵,耐心倾听)
·rebuild trust through actions(用行动重建信任)
例句(Sentences)
·Let’s talk privately so I can explain what really happened.
·A mutual friend might help us understand each other better.
·I’ll prove through my actions that the misunderstanding was accidental.
结合自己的经历进行说明:
Ø若自己曾弄丢过朋友的东西,讲述如何解决恢复关系的。
Ø若成绩下滑,分享当时提升成绩的做法
Ø若被误解过,谈谈自己如何消除误会,通过自身经历增强说服力的。
【优秀范文】
Dear Lu Yao.
I'm Li Ming, in charge of the “Teenager Advice Column’ feeling blue/frustrated/down because of your declining grades. Don't worryI am writing to offer you some help.
I once met with the same problem. In the second semester of eighth grade, I failed an important test in math, which was my favorite subject.Although I was sad, I analyzed my weak points carefully and made a detailed study plan. Besides, when I faced something too hard, I actively asked teachers and classmates for help.You can try these suggestions. Analyze your situation, make a clear plan. and seek help bravely if necessary. I'm sure that you can improve your grades and become more confident.
Best regards.
Li Ming (116 words)
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【预测题目3】人际沟通
84.Writeatleast60wordsonthegiventopic.(根据以下提示写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
作为未成年人,我们往往和父母、祖父母住在一起。生活中,你与长辈是如何相处的请以 “How to get along with elders” 为题,分享你与长辈的相处之道,并用一个事例来说明。
相处方式:可从尊重长辈意见、主动交流沟通、关心长辈生活等方面入手。比如耐心倾听长辈讲述过去的经历,定期和长辈分享自己的生活学习情况,在日常生活中主动帮长辈做些力所能及的事等。
【优秀例文】
How to get along with elders.
As teenagers, we often live with parents and grandparents.In my opinion, respecting and communicating are the keys togetting along well with elders. We should listen to their experiences with patience and share our own lives sincerely.For example, once, my grandmother was upset about a family matter. Instead ofignoring it, I sat by her, held her hands, and listened carefully. Then I shared somefunny school stories with her. Gradually, she cheered up. Small actions like thesecan not only bring warmth and joy to their lives but also teach me how to get alongwith others.
All in all. let's cherish every moment with our elders, for these relationshipsmake our life truly meaningful.(118 words)
【预测题目4】传统文化介绍
假设你是刘伟,你的美国朋友MIKE 想通过你了解中国的传统节日。请你根据提示,给Mike 写一封e-mail,向他介绍我国传统节日春节的情况。
内容提示:1.春节是中国最重要的传统节日;2.春节期间人们的主要活动(节前、除夕、节日期间)。
提示词语:Spring Festival, traditional, decorate, on the eve of the festival, get together, set off fireworks, lucky money
根据中文大意和英语提示词语,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于80词的短文。所给英文提示词供选用。注意:不要写出你的真实姓名和校名。
【参考范文】
Dear Mike,
How are you? I’m really glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals. There are many traditional festivals in China, such as Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Day and so on. I’d like to introduce the Spring Festival to you.
Spring Festival is the most important traditional holiday in China. It usually lasts for 15 days.Days before the festival, people clean their houses. They think cleaning sweeps any bad luck. They decorate their houses with paper cuts. On the eve of the festival, family members get together and have big meals.Then they watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV.At midnight, they set off fireworks to welcome the New Year. During the festival, kids get lucky money from old people. People visit their relatives and friends. They wish one another a happy year and good luck. How happy we are.
Best wishes! 
Yours,
Liu Wei
【预测题目5】传统文化+建议类
84.Write at least 60 words according to the situation given. (请根据所给情境,写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。)近年来,全球掀起汉语学习的热潮,越来越多的人渴望了解中国文化和掌握汉语。英国留学生John是一名汉语爱好者,他在《跨文化对话》杂志上发布了招募启事,寻求一名汉语学习小顾问(adviser),帮助他解决汉语学习中的困惑:如记忆汉字(Chinese characters)、理解成语(Chinese idioms)及辨别文化差异(cultural differences)等。假如你是初三学生李华,请你给John写一封应征信,阐述你能胜任汉语学习小顾问的理由,并针对John汉语学习中的1-2个困惑提供合理的学习建议。
阐述胜任理由:
·要说明自己能胜任汉语学习小顾问的原因·
比如,可以提及自己对汉语的热爱,长期积累的汉语知识,包括对汉字、成语、文化习俗等方面的了解;
还可以说自己有帮助他人学习汉语的经验等
提供学习建议:针对John在汉语学习中的困惑,如记忆汉字、理解成语、辨别文化差异等,选择1-2个方面给出合理的学习建议
·对于记忆汉字,可以建议利用联想记忆法、制作识字卡片等对于理解成语,可以建议通过阅读成语故事、分析成语结构来理解;
·对于辨别文化差异,可以建议多参加文化交流活动、观看中文影视作品等。
【优秀范文】
Dear John,
Learning that you're in need of a Chinese-learning advisor, I'm writing to apply.
Born in a family of Chinese teachers, I have a special love for Chinese culture and a solid command of Chinese.
Although understanding Chinese idioms can be difficult, I do have effective ways to help. First, reading classic stories related to idioms is an ideal way. For example, knowing the story behind "jin shang tian hua" (锦上添花 / "add flowers to the brocade") makes its meaning clear. In addition, I suggest you try applying idioms to daily life, for it can not only improve your language skills, but also make your conversation more interesting.
I'm confident I can be a fantastic advisor for you. Looking forward to your reply.
Faithfully yours,Li Hua

分析:

1.写信目的:应聘约翰的中文学习顾问。
2.个人优势:
1.出身中文教师家庭,热爱中国文化;
2.扎实的中文功底。
3.教学方法:
1.通过成语故事(锦上添花”)理解含义;
2.建议在日常对话中运用成语,提升语言能力。
4.结尾:自信能胜任,期待回复。
【预测题目6】心理健康与安全
为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以“Less Pressure, Better Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,与同学分享一些缓解压力的好办法,内容包括:1.同学们普遍存在的压力是什么;2.我的压力是什么;3.我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。
注意:文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。词数80-100
【参考范文】
Less Pressure, Better Life
Hello, boys and girls!
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.
I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends. Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last.
So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.
That’s all. Thank you!
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【预测题目7】文化介绍

【命题探索】

考查方向:主要聚焦于中国丰富多样的传统文化元素,像传统节日(春节、中秋节等)、传统技艺(剪纸、书法等)、历史典故、传统服饰(汉服等)以及地方特色文化等内容,要求考生用英语向他人介绍、描述这些传统文化相关的知识、意义或自身的感受等,考查考生对本国传统文化的了解程度以及能否用英语进行有效对外传播的能力。

【写作建议】

Ø深入了解文化内涵:在写作前要对所涉及的传统文化元素有较为准确、深入的认知,清楚其起源、发展、特点以及背后蕴含的意义等,这样才能在文中准确、全面地进行介绍和阐述,避免出现知识性错误。

Ø选好切入角度:可以从文化元素本身的介绍(如外观、形式等)、历史演变、庆祝或传承方式以及个人对它的理解和喜爱等角度切入,多维度地展现该传统文化,让文章内容丰富饱满。

Ø注重文化传播性:写作时要考虑读者可能对中国传统文化不太了解,所以尽量使用通俗易懂、生动形象的语言进行描述,把文化特色清晰地传达出来,同时适当融入自己的情感和观点,增强文章的感染力和吸引力。

【词汇句型积累】

1. 传统节日

春节:the Spring Festival

元宵节:the Lantern Festival

清明节:Qingming Festival / Tomb - sweeping Day

端午节:the Dragon Boat Festival

中秋节:the Mid - autumn Festival

重阳节:the Double Ninth Day

2. 节日相关活动

贴对联:paste couplets

吃团圆饭:have a family reunion dinner

包饺子:make dumplings

放鞭炮:set off firecrackers

守岁:stay up late

给压岁钱:give lucky money

拜年:pay a New Year’s visit to relatives or friends

吃元宵:eat Yuanxiao

观灯:watch lanterns

猜灯谜:guess lantern riddles

耍狮子:play the lion dance

舞龙灯:play dragon lantern dance

赛龙舟:race dragon boats

吃粽子:eat rice dumplings

赏月:admire the moon at night

爬山:climb mountains

敬老:respect the elderly

3. 传统文化相关词汇

唐诗:Tang Poetry

《红楼梦》:A Dream of Red Mansions

书法:calligraphy

水墨画:Chinese brush painting

造纸术:paper - making

印刷术:printing

指南针:compass

火药:gunpowder

灯笼:lantern

饺子:jiaozi /dumpling

粽子:zongzi /rice dumpling

月饼:mooncake

汤圆:sweet dumplings

面条:noodles

筷子:chopsticks

汉字:Chinese character

剪纸:paper cutting /paper - cuts

中国结:Chinese knot

传统戏曲:traditional opera

京剧:Beijing Opera

4. 句子积累

ØTraditionally, the festival usually has something to do with harvest.

传统上,这个节日通常会和丰收联系在一起。

ØThe Spring Festival is the most important traditional festival in China, which usually falls on the first day of the first lunar month.

春节是中国最重要的传统节日,通常在农历一月初一。

ØPeople celebrate the festival by having dinner together.

人们通过吃团圆饭来庆祝节日。

ØPeople have the tradition of enjoying the sweet dumplings.

人们有吃汤圆的习俗。

ØGuessing lantern riddles is an important part of the Lantern Festival.

猜灯谜是元宵节的一个重要部分。

ØThe Lantern Festival, which is on the 15th day of the first lunar month, is a time for family reunions and enjoying various lantern - related activities.

元宵节在农历正月十五,是家人团聚和享受各种与灯笼有关活动的时刻。

ØThe Dragon Boat Festival, falling on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month, is in memory of the ancient poet Qu Yuan.

端午节在农历五月初五,是为了纪念古代诗人屈原。

ØThe Mid - autumn Festival, celebrated on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month, is a time for family members to get together and enjoy the full moon.

中秋节在农历八月十五庆祝,是家人团聚赏月的时刻。

ØThe Double Ninth Day, on the ninth day of the ninth lunar month, is a day to show respect for the elderly and often involves mountain - climbing activities.

重阳节在农历九月初九,是一个尊敬老人的日子,通常会有爬山活动。

ØIt’s a good chance to express love and thankfulness.

这是一个表达爱和感恩的好机会。

ØBehind all these things lies the true meaning of the festival.

在所有这些事情的背后隐藏着节日的真正意义。

ØIt’s our duty to respect the tradition and spread Chinese culture.

尊重传统并且传播中国文化是我们的责任。

ØIn a word, it’s time for us to protect and develop our own valuable culture.

总之,对我们来说,是时候去保护并发展我们自己有价值的文化了。

ØTraditional Chinese culture is considered as the cradle of civilization, which has a long - standing history and profound influence.

中国传统文化被认为是文明的摇篮,有着悠久的历史和深远的影响。

ØThese traditional festivals symbolize good luck and blessings, and they also play an important role in passing down our national spirit.

这些传统节日象征着好运和祝福,在传承我们的民族精神方面也起着重要作用。

ØPromoting cultural exchange is of great significance for better understanding between different countries and ethnic groups.

促进文化交流对于不同国家和民族之间的更好理解具有重要意义。

【写作指导】

五步写作法——审列扩连查

假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友 David 对中医很感兴趣。请你结合以下图示,用英语写一封电子邮件,向他推荐即将在你校举办的传统中医进校园的宣传日活动,说明推荐理由,并请他关注线上相关信息。词数 80 左右。

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注意事项:

1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;

2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;

3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。

第一步细审题定要点(五审法:审主题、审人称、审文体、审时态、审要点)

1)审主题:推荐即将举办的传统中医进校园的宣传日活动

2)审文体:应用文

3)审时态:以一般将来时为主

4)审人称:以第一人称、第二人称为主

第二步分段落列要点

首段 (Beginning)引出主题,点明传统中医进校园的宣传日活动的时间。

中间段 (Body)介绍宣传日活动内容:听报告、看展览和看一部《李时珍》的电影。

结尾 (Ending)活动的意义和联系方式。指出本次活动的意义,提供学校网址给 David

第三步扩句子精加工

首段:活动时间和地点

[一般句] It is going to take place on July 31, 2020. 

[高分句] I’d like to/It’s my great honor to share with you some information about Traditional Chinese Medicine Day in our school. It is going to take place on July 31, 2020. (I’d like to... / It’s my great honor to...) 

中间段:具体活动

【活动一】 a talk 

[一般句] On that day, a doctor will give us a talk on Chinese medicine.

[高分句] An amazing and popular talk about Chinese medicine will be given by a famous doctor in our school hall. ( 被动语态 ) 

【活动二】 a show 

[一般句] There will be a show. It is about the development of Chinese medicine. 

[高分句] There is going to be a show about the development of Chinese medicine. (about) 

【活动三】 a film 

[一般句] We will be able to watch the film called Li Shizhen. 

[高分句] The film Li Shizhen will be on to memorize Li Shizhen, a famous Chinese medicine doctor, and spread Chinese medicine culture. ( 句式灵活 ) 

结尾:活动意义和联系方式

[一般句] The activities will be very helpful. This is our school website www. intelschool. com.

[高分句(I’m sure, if) 

第四步连句子成短文

Dear David,   

I’m pleased to know that you’re interested in Chinese medicine. Now, I’d like to share with you some information about Traditional Chinese Medicine Day in our school, which is going to take place on July 31, 2020.

On that day, a famous doctor will give us a talk on Chinese medicine. And there will be a show about its development. Also, the film Li Shizhen will be on.

I’m sure the activities will be very helpful to you. I hope you can visit www. intelschool.com and have a better understanding of traditional Chinese medicine.

Best wishes. 

Yours, 

Li Hua

第五步查全文得高分

首先依次检查人称、时态是否正确,要点是否齐全;然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。

【实战演练1

艺术能激发人们的想象力和创造力,也能深化人们对生活和世界的理解,让生活更加美好。假如你是李华,你的国外朋友Jack向你了解中国文化,请你写一封邮件回复,推荐一种中国艺术,如诗歌、音乐、绘画、剪纸、戏剧等,结合自己的兴趣推荐并说明推荐的原因。

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提示:

1. 短文须包括上图所有信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

2. 文中不得出现真实姓名与地名;

3. 词数:80—100(开头已为你写好,不计入总词数)。

优秀范文

Dear Jack,

I’m glad you’re interested in Chinese culture. Chinese art can be quite surprising. One of the traditional Chinese art forms is paper cutting. People use scissors to cut paper into different shapes and patterns.

In Chinese culture, paper cuttings are often used as decorations during festivals and celebrations because they are believed to bring good luck and drive away evil spirits. I really enjoy paper cutting because the designs are incredibly beautiful and it is also a way to express creativity.

Paper-cutting has a long history and it represents Chinese culture. I hope more people can learn about it and appreciate its beauty. I feel proud of this traditional art form and I hope we can help preserve it for future generations.

Yours,

Li Hua

[总体分析]

题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;

时态:时态为一般现在时

提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏思维导图中给出的关键信息,写电子邮件推荐一种中国艺术。

[写作步骤]

第一步,开篇点题,推荐一种中国艺术;

第二步,谈谈自己对这种艺术的看法;

第三步,谈谈推荐这种艺术的原因。

[亮点词汇]

①traditional Chinese art forms传统中国艺术形式

②drive away驱赶

[高分句型]

In Chinese culture, paper cuttings are often used as decorations during festivals and celebrations because they are believed to bring good luck and drive away evil spirits.because引导原因状语从句)

【实战演练2

假如你的名字叫Lisa,你的笔友Tara来信告诉你,她下个月将要来中国旅游并且短暂寄住在你家,她对中国的礼仪很好奇,也非常想知道你家的家规。请你根据提示给她写封回信。

提示:

1. 介绍中国的见面问候方式、餐桌礼仪等。

2. 介绍家规(不被允许在空闲时间玩电脑游戏,不被允许熬夜等)及我的看法。

注意:

1. 词数80—100

2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。

优秀范文:

Dear Tara,

I’m very glad to hear that you will come to China next month.

Welcome to my home! Let me give you some suggestions and advice about Chinese customs. When you meet new friends, you should shake hands with them. You can also say “Ni Hao” to them, which means “Hello” in Chinese. In China, table manners are important. You are supposed to let the old start eating first. Also, you cannot talk too loud or laugh too crazily when you eat. If you live in a host family, you should follow their family rules. I am not allowed to play computer games in my spare time. I am not allowed to stay up late. It is necessary for us to follow the rules. If you have other questions, you can call me anytime.

I’m looking forward to meeting you soon. Wish you have a good vacation in China.

Yours,

Lisa

[总体分析]

题材:本文是一篇书信作文;

时态:以一般现在时为主;

提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏要点,并注意用第一人称书写。

[写作步骤]

第一步,介绍中国人打招呼的方式和餐桌礼仪;

第二步,介绍家规以及对家规的看法。

[亮点词汇]

①be supposed to do sth. 应该做某事

②shake hands with ……握手

③stay up late 熬夜很晚

[高分句型]

①When you meet new friends, you should shake hands with them.(when引导的时间状语从句)

②If you have other questions, you can call me anytime.(if引导的条件状语从句)

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【预测题目8】环保话题
一、考情分析

全国考查角度

• 目前的环境问题

• 如何保护环境

• 保护环境的意义

二、写作指导

近年来,我国全面展开蓝天、碧水、净土保卫战。为了号召同学们参与环保行动,学校将组织一次主题为“Let’s Go Green”的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇 80 词以上的演讲稿。内容要点:

1. 谈谈你为环保做过什么及感受;

2. 制定你的环保计划。

注意事项:

1. 开头已给出,不计入总词数;

2. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。

五步写作法——审列扩连查

第一步细审题定要点(五审法:审主题、审人称、审文体、审时态、审要点)

1)审主题:环保

2)审文体:应用文

3)审人称:以第一人称为主

4审时态:一般过去时;经历

5定要点 1:环保的经历和感受

6定要点 2:未来的计划

第二步分段落列要点

首段 (Beginning)提出环保倡议:重新使用、减少用量和回收利用。

中间段 (Body)环保的经历及其未来计划

结尾 (Ending)表达希望和呼吁:希望有一个更加美好的地球。

第三步扩句子精加工

首段:提出环保倡议

[一般句] As middle school students, we can reuse, reduce and recycle. 

[高分句] As middle school students, it’s our responsibility to reuse, reduce and recycle.(灵活句式)

中间段:

【要点一】环保经历和感受

[一般句] Last winter, I collected used paper and bottles. I turned them into a rocket. I gave it to my brother. He felt amazed at my work. 

[高分句] I still remember that during the winter vacation, I made good use of wasted things such as paper and bottles by turning them into a handmade rocket. Later I gave it to my brother as a gift. His amazed facial expression impressed me deeply. make good use of, 详细描述)

【要点二】环保的未来计划

[一般句] I’ll reuse things instead of throwing them away. I will reduce the use of energy. I’ll sort the rubbish to recycle it. 

[高分句] (运用连接词分条阐述

结尾:表达希望和呼吁

[一般句] If everyone takes part in protecting the environment, the earth will become better and better. 

[高分句] If everyone takes part in protecting the environment, the earth will be a better place for all of us to live on. Take action now! / I believe that if everyone makes great efforts to protect our environment, our earth will be a beautiful place for us to live on. Effective action needs to be taken now! (不定式

第四步连句子成短文

[优秀范文]

As we all know, China is making every effort to protect the environment. As middle school students, it’s our responsibility to reuse, reduce and recycle.

I still remember that during the winter vacation, I made good use of wasted things such as paper and bottles by turning them into a handmade rocket. Later I gave it to my brother as a gift. His amazed facial expression impressed me deeply. I was proud, too. The waste was brought back to life with just a little creativity. Inspired by this experience, I plan to do more in the future.

First of all, I’ll continue to reuse things instead of throwing them away. Secondly, I can ride a bike to school rather than taking a bus and turn off the light when I’m not using it. Lastly, I’ll sort the rubbish and send the recyclable materials to the recycling center.

If everyone takes part in protecting the environment, the earth will be a better place for all of us to live on. Take action now! 

第五步查全文得高分

首先依次检查人称、时态是否正确,要点是否齐全;然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。

素材积累

目前环境问题:

1.乱扔垃圾 throw rubbish about

2.砍伐树木 cut down trees

3.倒废水 pour waste water

4.全球变暖 global warming 

如何保护环境:

5.植树 plant trees

6.及时关灯turn off the lights in time

7.节约用水/用电 save water/electricity 

8.过低碳生活 live a low-carbon life

9.节省能源 save energy

10.绿色出行 travel in a green way 

保护环境的意义:

11.Water and food are important and necessary resources.

水和食物是重要且必要的资源。

12.It’s everyone’s duty to protect animals.

保护动物,人人有责。

13.When the well is dry, we know the worth of water.

井枯方知水珍贵。

实战演练

假如你是李雷,上周参观了以“Working the Waste into Magic”为主题的环保作品展。请你根据以下信息,写一篇短文,在英语课上介绍相关展品并分享自己的想法与感受。词数100左右。

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注意事项:

1. 短文须介绍至少两项展品,可适当发挥;

2. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数; 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。

参考答案

【高分句】

First of all, I'll continue to reuse things rather than throwing them away.Moreover, I decide to ride a bike to school instead of taking the bus and turn off the lights in time to save energy.Lastly, it's also a good idea to sort the rubbish and send the recyclable materials to the recycling center.

【实战演练】

时态:一般过去时、一般现在时 

人称:以第一、三人称为主 

要点:展示物品、物品材质、自己的感受

Hello, everyone! I’d like to tell you something about the show “Working the Waste into Magic” .

A number of creative works were on show, including clothes made from waste paper and model planes made of used wood and glass.Another fascinating work is a chair that is made of plastic bottles.They are glued together and painted in different colors.

I was most interested in a backpack for computers.It is made out of a pair of old jeans! With the zipper of the jeans on the top, two pockets on two sides, the backpack looks both useful and fashionable.It even has a logo!

I felt amazed how waste could be put into such good use.It really helps to save energy and build a greener future.

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【预测题目9】校园生活
角度一:介绍校园活动
你校将举行春季运动会(Spring Sports Meeting)。假如你是李华,请给美国笔mike 写邮件邀请他观看比赛并参加友谊赛。
提示词语:relayrace,highjump,medal提示问题:
运动会具体安排?5
可以参与哪些项目?
需要准备什么?注意:1.词数 100 左右(开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数);2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
思路点拨
①审主题:邀请笔友参加学校春季运动会并介绍相关安排;
②审文体:应用文(电子邮件);
③审人称:第三人称为主;④审要点:a.邀请笔友参加学校春季运动会;b.介绍运动会具体安排;.可以参与的项目及准备;d.表达期望;
⑤审时态:发出邀请用一般现在时;介绍运动会相关安排用一般将来时;表达希望和期待用一般现在时。
高分素材
  1. The Spring Sports Meeting of our school is scheduled to be held on the playgroundfrom April 20thto 21st.
    我校春季运动会定于 4月 20 日至 21日在操场举行。
2.You can either compete in the exciting relay race or cheer enthusiastically from thestands.
你可以参加激动人心的接力赛,也可以在看台上热情加油
3.If you decide to compete, all you need to prepare is a pair of comfortable sportsshoes.
如果你决定参加比赛,你所需要准备的就是一双舒适的运动鞋。
4It is advisable to do some wam-up exercises before the event to prevent anypotential injuries.
在比赛前做 一些热身运动是明智的,以防止任何潜在的伤害。
5.The medals are designed so beautifully that they’il serve as lasting mementos ofour friendship.
奖牌设计得如此精美,将成为我们友谊的永恒纪念。
【参考范文】
Dear Mike,
I'm writing to invite you to our school's Spring Sports Meetingwhich will be held on the playground from April 15th to 16th.
During the meeting, there wil be various events, such as the relay race, long jump, and high jump. Additionally,there is a special event just for you the friendship match,which is a 100-meter race only for guests. You can enjoythis race without the stress of winning because it's all about having fun and making new friends. If you want to participate, all you need to prepare is a pair of comfortable sports shoes and clothes.
I hope you can accept my invitation and join us. This will surely create a wonderful friendship between us.
Yours,Li Hua
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【预测题目10】校园生活校园经历分享
在充满活力的校园里,每一次活动都是青春绽放的精彩瞬间。假如你是李华,你校广播站计划推出一期名为“Unforgettable Campus Activities”的专题节目。现在请你依照图示内容,写一篇短文分享你记忆深处那次难忘的校园活动经历。
高分素材
  1. The unforgettable campus activity that I'd like to share took place on a sumnyaftemoon 1ast month in the school hall.
    我想分享的这次难忘的校园活动于上个月一个阳光明媚的下午,在学校礼堂举行。
2.At the beginning of the activity, we were divided into groups and signed differenttasks, such as picking up rubbish and planting trees.
在活动开始时,我们被分成小组并签署了不同的任务,如捡垃圾和植树。
3.During the English speech contest, not only did I have the chance to showcase my language skills,butIalso made many fiends.
在英语演讲比赛期间,我不仅有机会展示我的语言技能,还结识了许多朋友。
4.Looking back, I realize it was the collective effort of our team that tumed thisperfommance into acherishedmemory.
回首往事,我意识到正是我们团队的共同努力,才使这次表演成为珍贵的回忆。
5.As I fully engaged myself in these activities, felt a sense of achievement andsatisfaction, as if I had discovered anew world full of possibilities.
当我全身心地投入到这些活动中时,我感受到了一种成就感和满足感,仿佛我发现了一个充满可能性亮点赏析的新世界。
【参考范文】
I want to share my most memorable experience --the perfomance at school art festival last spring. The festival took place in our schoolhall on March 15th. As a violinist,I played a key role in creating harmonious melodies. Before the art festival, we spent lots of time practisingtogether. When the big day amived, I was excited but a bit nervous. However, as soon as I started playing the first note, all my nervousness disappeared. l was completely lost in the music, as if I were in a world ofmy own. When the perfomance ended, the audience clapped loudly. It was a successful activity that greatly improved my musical skills and built up my confidence on stage.

预测话题11《科学与技术》

【考情分析】

考查角度

• 介绍新科技

• 发表对新科技的看法

【素材积累】

现代发明 modern invention

探索太空 explore space

改变我们的生活方式 change our way of life 

最重要的发明之一 one of the most important inventions

充分使用 make good use of

……制成 be made of...

用来做……be used for... 

享受社会的进步 enjoy the progress of society

……扮演了重要的角色 play an important role in... 

培养学生对科学技术的兴趣 develop students’ interest in science and technology 

……产生很大的影响 make a great difference to

使做某事成为可能 make it possible to do sth. 

我对技术的创新和美观感到震惊。I was amazed at the innovation and beauty of technology. 

它们让我们的生活变得更加便利。They make our life more convenient. 

它们给我们的社会带来了极大的便利和进步。They bring great convenience and progress to our society.

【写作指导】

五步写作法——审列扩连查

假定你是李华,收到英国笔友 Harry 的邮件,获悉他在机器人制作比赛中获奖。请根据邮件内容给他回复。词数80左右。

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参考词汇:congratulation 祝贺

注意事项:

1. 回复邮件时可适当发挥,邮件格式已给出,不计入总词数;

2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;

3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。

第一步细审题定要点(五审法:审主题、审人称、审文体、审时态、审要点)

1)审人称:以第二人称、第一人称为主

2)审文体:应用文

3)审主题:对机器人的看法和机器人的用途

4)审时态:以一般现在时为主

第二步分段落列要点

首段 (Beginning)祝贺对方(congratulations)。

中间段 (Body)回答对方在邮件中的提问:对机器人的看法、是否想有一个机器人和原因 (helpful)

结尾 (Ending)表达祝愿。希望对方取得更大进步(make progress)。

第三步扩句子精加工

首段:祝贺对方

[一般句] Congratulations! I am glad to share your good news! 

[高分句] Congratulations! How excited and surprised I am to share your wonderful news! (感叹句

中间段:

【要点一】对机器人的看法

[一般句] Robots are helpful. They’ll play an important role in our daily life. 

[高分句I think robots are helpful in many ways. And in the future they’ll play more important roles in our daily life. (I think...) 

【要点二】是否想有一个机器人

[一般句] I wish to have a robot of my own one day. 

[高分句] I’m dying to have a robot of my own. / I long for owning a robot.(be dying to / long for) 

【要点三】想拥有机器人的原因

[一般句] They can help us do some housework. 

[高分句] 1.(such as) 

结尾:祝愿取得更大进步

[一般句] I hope you’ll make greater progress. 

[高分句] 2.(and连接并列成分

第四步连句子成短文

Dear Harry,   

Congratulations! How glad I am to share your good news!   

I think robots are helpful in many ways. And in the future they’ll play more important roles in our daily life. What’s more, I’m dying to have a robot of my own. I can have it take care of my grandparents when we are not at home. You see, my grandparents are old and cannot move easily. It can help them do some housework such as cooking, cleaning the house and so on.

Hoping you’ll make greater progress.

Yours, 

Li Hua 

第五步查全文得高分

首先依次检查人称、时态是否正确,要点是否齐全;然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。

【实战演练1

春节申遗成功后,2025年中国蛇年春晚的《秧BOT》节目吸引了全世界的目光,传统艺术与现代科技的巧妙结合,让中华优秀传统文化焕发了全新生命力。DeepSeek的横空出世更是让世界看到了中国科技的发展与进步。人工智能AI(Artificial Intelligence) 自诞生起,已经极大地改变了我们的生活。最近学校英语杂志发起了“What does AI Bring to Us?”为主题的征文,假如你是李华,请你按照下面的提示,并适当拓展,写一篇英语短文投稿。

要求:

1. 80词左右(标题和开头都已给出,不计入总词数)

2. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。

What does AI Bring to Us?

AI is widely used in many fields   and brings a lot of benefits (益处).

For example,

1. ...allows us to find   information...

2. learning apps uses AI to   help....

AI also brings worries and   challenges.

1. ...lose jobs...

2. ...depend too much on...

I think...

I hope AI will...in the future.

可参考词汇:

AI-driven chatbot 聊天机器人;

personalized study 个性化的学习;

smart devices 智能设备

优秀范文

What does AI Bring to Us?

Whether we like it or not, AI has become a more and more important part of our daily lives, changing the way we live and work.

AI is widely used in many fields and brings a lot of benefits. For example, smart devices allow us to find information about all kinds of topics. What’s more, learning apps uses AI to help students achieve personalized study. However, AI also brings worries and challenges. More and more people lose jobs because of AI. Besides, we depend too much on smart devices.

I think as long as we use AI in a right way, we will get benefits from it. I hope AI will be more helpful in the future.

[总体分析]

题材:本文是一篇材料作文;

时态:主要为一般现在时

提示:写作提示已给出,考生应注意不要漏写你的看法,适当发挥,使上下文连贯。

[写作步骤]

第一步,说明人工智能带来的益处;

第二步,说明人工智能带来的担忧和挑战;

第三步,谈谈你的看法。

[亮点词汇]

①benefit 益处

②all kinds of 各种各样的

③personalized study 个性化的学习

④depend 依赖

[高分句型]

I think as long as we use AI in a right way, we will get benefits from it.(省略that的宾语从句,as long as引导的条件状语从句)

I hope AI will be more helpful in the future.(省略that的宾语从句)

【实战演练2

如今,科学技术正在以一种前所未有的速度向前发展,各类科学产物已经渗透到人类生活的方方面面。比如手机的使用给我们带来了诸多便利,也引发了不少争议。为了让同学们能客观、理性地看待科技两面性的问题,学生会围绕学生是否可以借助学习APP来解决学习中的问题展开了辩论。假设你是正方或反方的一员(只需选择一方),请围绕你的观点,结合自己的亲身经历并说明理由来说服同学们。

I think students can solve the problems in their study with the help of learning apps.

I don’t think students can solve the problems in their study with the help of learning apps.

Word Bank:

effective (有效的)

instant feedback (即时反馈)

rely on (依赖)

critical thinking (批判性思维)

【优秀范文】

In our class, we’re having a debate about whether students should use learning apps to help with their studies. I firmly believe that students should use learning apps to tackle academic problems.

Despite concerns about distractions, my own experience has shown that these apps provide quick access to reliable information and detailed explanations, which have helped me understand complex concepts better. Moreover, they offer personalized learning plans tailored to individual needs, making study more efficient.

In my math study, for instance, I often got stuck on difficult problems. But with a learning app, I could get detailed explanations and similar examples instantly. It not only saved my time but also deepened my understanding.

In a word, learning apps really boost our learning efficiency and are reliable helpers. Let’s embrace technology and use it wisely to boost our academic performance!

[总体分析]

题材:本文是一篇议论文,为话题作文;

时态:时态主要为一般现在时一般过去时

提示:文章应该包括所有提示要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第一人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。

[写作步骤]

第一步,介绍最近班级围绕学生是否可以借助学习APP来解决学习中的问题这一问题进行了讨论,表明自己的观点;

第二步,阐述原因;

第三步,结合自身经历证明自己的观点;

第四步,写总结。

[亮点词汇]

①get stuck on 被困住

②tailor to 根据……调整……

[高分句型]

①It not only saved my time but also deepened my understanding.(not only … but also … )

I firmly believe that students should use learning apps to tackle academic problems. (宾语从句)

【实战演练3

从生物的解构、科幻小说的涌现、太极奥秘的探索、嫦娥四号与玉兔的中国式太空浪漫再到智能家居的日益普及。从古至今,人类对科学的追求从未止步。科学的不断发展给你的生活带来了怎样的影响?请以“Science Shapes Our Life”为题写一篇英语文章。内容应包括:

1. 你对该问题的理解;

2.你的一次亲身经历;

3.你对未来科学的畅想。

注意:

1. 词数100

2. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。

【优秀范文】

Science Shapes Our Life

In the last few decades, science has developed at high speed, and played an important role in our daily lives. It is the development of science that allows us to understand ourselves and the world around us better, create many inventions that help us live better.

Recently, my family decided to embrace the future of transportation by purchasing a new energy vehicle. I find the electric car seems to be faster and smoother compared with a petrol car. Furthermore, new energy vehicles use electric energy as a power source. Electricity can be obtained through a variety of ways, including renewable energy such as solar and wind energy, so the popularity of electric vehicles has a positive impact on the environment.

Looking ahead, the future of science appears promising, with endless possibilities waiting to be explored and discovered. Advances in fields such as artificial intelligence, biotechnology, and space exploration hold the potential to revolutionize the way we live, work, and interact with the world around us.

[总体分析]

题材:本文是一篇材料作文;

时态:时态为一般过去时一般现在时

提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息,可适当补充细节,并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步,总体介绍科学发展带给生活什么样的影响;

第二步,讲述科学发展影响自身生活的经历;

第三步,表达对未来科学的畅想。

[亮点词汇]

①play an important role in ……中起重要作用

②allow sb. to do sth. 允许某人做某事

③compared with ……相比

④have a positive impact on ……有积极的影响

[高分句型]

It is the development of science that allows us to understand ourselves and the world around us better, create many inventions that help us live better.(强调句)

I find the electric car seems to be faster and smoother compared with a petrol car.(省略that的宾语从句)

③…hold the potential to revolutionize the way we live, work, and interact with the world around us.(省略that的定语从句)

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