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Some people think that researching the past is a waste of time and money. We should focus on the issues of today’s world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

02题目分析

本题是议论文一个观点的讨论题型。

题目包含两个主张:第一,研究过去是浪费时间和金钱;第二,我们应该专注于当今世界的问题。这两个主张是相互关联的,反驳第一个的同时,也需要回应第二个。

这道题容易犯的错误是只说"历史很重要",却没有直接回应"当下问题也需要关注"这一点。高分答案需要承认当今问题的紧迫性,但重点论证研究历史与解决当下问题并不矛盾,甚至相互支持。

03参考范文

Introduction 引言段

The claim that historical research wastes resources fundamentally misunderstands the relationship between past knowledge and present decision-making. I strongly disagree with this view and would argue that researching the past is among the most strategically valuable investments a society can make.

认为历史研究浪费资源的观点,从根本上误解了过去的知识与当下决策之间的关系。我强烈反对这一观点,并认为研究历史是一个社会所能做出的最具战略价值的投资之一。

Argument 1 论点一

The most compelling evidence against this claim lies in how directly historical research informs contemporary problem-solving. By studying the causes of past wars, for example, world leaders and international organizations have developed diplomatic tools and peace agreements to prevent similar conflicts from arising. In the same way, research into historical famines has enabled modern governments to build more effective food security policies, helping to protect vulnerable populations from hunger today. Historical research does not simply describe the past; it produces practical knowledge that societies can apply directly to the challenges they face in the present.

反驳这一观点最有力的证据,在于历史研究对当代问题解决的直接影响。例如,通过研究过去战争的根源,世界各国领导人和国际组织得以发展出外交工具与和平协议,从而预防类似冲突的再次发生。同样,对历史上饥荒的研究使现代政府能够制定更有效的粮食安全政策,帮助保护当今弱势群体免受饥饿之苦。历史研究并不只是描述过去,它产生的是各社会可以直接应用于当下挑战的实用知识。

Argument 2 论点二

Beyond its practical utility, studying the past helps societies understand their own culture and identity. When people learn about the traditions, struggles, and achievements of those who came before them, they develop a stronger sense of belonging and shared purpose. This sense of collective identity is particularly important in diverse societies, where a common understanding of history can bring people of different backgrounds together. Furthermore, confronting difficult chapters of the past, such as slavery or colonial rule, allows nations to acknowledge historical injustices, promote reconciliation, and build a more equal society. A country that ignores its history risks repeating the same social mistakes and leaving deep divisions unresolved.

除了实用价值之外,研究历史有助于社会理解自身的文化与身份认同。当人们了解前人的传统、奋斗历程与成就时,他们会产生更强烈的归属感与共同目标感。这种集体身份认同在多元化社会中尤为重要,因为对历史的共同理解能够将不同背景的人凝聚在一起。此外,正视历史上的黑暗篇章,如奴隶制或殖民统治,能够使国家承认历史不公,推动和解,并建立一个更加平等的社会。一个忽视历史的国家,有可能重蹈同样的社会错误,使深层的社会裂痕长期无法愈合。

Concession and Rebuttal 让步与反驳段

Admittedly, some people argue that governments should prioritize spending on urgent issues such as poverty, climate change, and healthcare, rather than funding historical research. This concern is understandable, as these are real and pressing problems that affect millions of people today. However, the cost of supporting historical scholarship is relatively small compared to other areas of public expenditure, and the benefits it brings are considerable. Moreover, understanding the historical roots of problems such as inequality and environmental damage can actually help governments design more effective and targeted solutions. Rather than competing with efforts to address today's challenges, historical research supports them.

诚然,一些人认为政府应当优先将资金投入到贫困、气候变化和医疗保健等紧迫问题上,而非资助历史研究。这种担忧是可以理解的,因为这些都是当今影响数百万人的真实且迫切的问题。然而,支持历史学术研究的成本与其他公共支出领域相比相对较小,而其带来的益处却相当可观。此外,了解不平等和环境破坏等问题的历史根源,实际上可以帮助政府制定更有效、更有针对性的解决方案。历史研究非但没有与应对当今挑战的努力相竞争,反而为其提供了支持。

Conclusion 结论段

In conclusion, researching the past is far from a waste of time and money. Historical knowledge helps societies solve present problems more effectively, preserves cultural identity, and promotes social unity. While it is important to address the urgent challenges of today, doing so without the guidance of historical understanding would leave governments and communities far less equipped to succeed. The past and the present are not competing priorities; they are inseparable.

总而言之,研究历史绝非浪费时间与金钱。历史知识帮助社会更有效地解决当下问题,保护文化身份认同,并促进社会团结。尽管应对当今的紧迫挑战固然重要,但若缺乏历史理解的指引,政府和社会将远远难以应对这些挑战。过去与现在并非相互竞争的优先选项,而是密不可分的整体。

注:杜斯迅老师原创参考范文仅供学习使用

04重点表达方式

fundamentally misunderstand 

从根本上误解

past knowledge and present decision-making 

过去的知识与当下的决策

strategically valuable investments 

具有战略价值的投资

inform contemporary problem-solving 

对当代问题解决产生影响

diplomatic tools and peace agreements 

外交工具与和平协议

prevent similar conflicts from arising 

防止类似冲突再次发生

food security policies 

粮食安全政策

vulnerable populations 

弱势群体

practical knowledge 

实用知识

apply directly to the challenges they face in the present 

直接应用于当下所面临的挑战

culture and identity 

文化与身份认同

a stronger sense of belonging and shared purpose 

更强烈的归属感与共同目标感

collective identity 

集体身份认同

people of different backgrounds 

不同背景的人

confront difficult chapters of the past 

正视历史上的黑暗篇章

acknowledge historical injustices 

承认历史不公

promote reconciliation 

推动和解

deep divisions unresolved 

深层裂痕长期无法愈合

prioritize spending on urgent issues 

优先将资金投入紧迫问题

real and pressing problems 

真实且迫切的问题

relatively small compared to other areas of public expenditure 

与其他公共支出领域相比相对较小

the historical roots of problems 

问题的历史根源

more effective and targeted solutions 

更有效、更有针对性的解决方案

rather than competing with, historical research supports them 

非但没有与之竞争,反而为其提供支持

far from a waste of time and money 

绝非浪费时间与金钱

preserve cultural identity 

保护文化身份认同

promote social unity 

促进社会团结

without the guidance of historical understanding 

若缺乏历史理解的指引

far less equipped to succeed 

远远难以应对挑战

the past and the present are inseparable 

过去与现在密不可分

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