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天津市2018年中考英语书面表达
九、书面表达（本大题共15分）
86. 请你根据以下内容提示，以“The Story of Li Hua”为题，为学校广播站英语专栏写一篇短文，介绍发生在你班同学李华身上的一件事。
(1) 上周五放学后李华乘坐公交车回家，看到有人在吃橘子，并把橘子皮扔在车上。
(2) 李华把橘皮捡起，放进垃圾桶。
(3) 乘客用手机拍了照片，发布到网上。
(4) 老师知道后表扬了李华，李华说这是他应该做的。
(5) 你觉得......
参考词汇：
果皮 peel 垃圾桶 dustbin
发布 post 表扬 praise
要求：
(1)词数: 80~100个。
(2)短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
The Story of Li Hua
Last Friday, when my classmate Li Hua took a bus back home from school, ...
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高分范文：
The Story of Li Hua
Last Friday, when my classmate Li Hua took a bus back home from school, he noticed that someone simply threw the orange peels on the floor after finishing it. Thinking that it might cause environment pollution, Li Hua offered to pick the peels up and put them into the dustbin. What Li Hua had done was recorded by a passenger who put up the photos on the Internet soon after. Finding what Li Hua had done, the teacher praised him, while Li Hua said that it was only what he was supposed to do.
As far as I am concerned, Li Hua has set a good example for us, if we all spare no effort to protect the environment, the world will be sure to become cleaner and cleaner.
高分句型再学习：
第一个提示点，我们还可以这样写：
He noticed a man eating oranges and the man threw the peels on the ground after eating it.
董老师提示：
上面的范文中我们用到了宾语从句 notice that和who引导的定语从句，而在本句话中，我们用了两个小句子，这两个小句子之间必须加and连接，这是同学们容易忽略的。
注意“非谓语动词作状语” 的运用：
(1)Thinking that it might cause envionment pollution, ...
(2)Thinking that it may cause safety problems, ...
(3)Thinking that the peels may be dangerous to others, ...
董老师提示：
现在分词作状语时，分词必须与主干部分的主语（上面例句中，逗号之后的主语）保持主动关系（主谓关系）。
结尾部分我们还可以这样写：
As far as I am concerned, it is kind of Li Hua to pick up the peels just in time so that others won't get hurt/injured. Only when we all think more about others, just like Li Hua, will the world be warmer and warmer.
董老师提示：
Only when 位于句首时，主句部分需要采用部分倒装句型（改为一般疑问句语序）。
高分词汇 & 句型：
1. simply
ad. 就那么，仅仅；简直
2. cause environmental problems
引起环境问题
3. be recorded by
被...所记录
4. soon after, = shortly afterwards,
(放在句首加逗号，放在句尾无需加逗号；用于一般过去时) 不久之后，不久
5. praise
vt. 表扬 （blame的反义词）
6. while
conj. 然而（表示对比）；放在句首也可以翻译为“虽然”。
7. what + sb. + 谓语
（名词性成分）某人所做的事情
8. Only when + 陈述句，+倒装句（一般疑问句的语序）
Only when we all think more about others, just like Li Hua, will the world be warmer and warmer.
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