原题：

Kevin was pretty bored. His mother was at work, and his father had been away on business. Therefore, he was left in the care of Mrs. Hill, an old lady who lived next door. His parents had raised the 12-year-old to be a good boy. He never got into trouble, though sometimes he wanted to do risky things. Mrs. Hill was asleep. Kevin sighed(叹息) and hoped something exciting would happen. Suddenly, a movement outside caught his eye.

Mrs. Hill's front window faced Mr. and Mrs. Green's house across the street. The couple had both gone to work, so it was strange that someone was over there. Kevin stared at the man at their front door. Suddenly, the man jumped through an open window into the house. With his heart in his mouth, Kevin grabbed Mrs. Hill's home phone and called the police.

Thinking that the man might get away with whatever he wanted before the police arrived, Kevin decided to do something. He rushed out of Mrs. Hill's house and crossed the street quickly. Grabbing a branch from a cut-down tree, he jumped in through the window. “Stop right there! You must leave right now!” he called out, holding the branch with both hands.

The man froze for a second, but when he saw the skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief. “Hey, kid, put that down. It was my home. My parents used to live here and my father's watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard.

At that moment, the sounds of a police car echoed (回响) in the air. The man stood up in a panic, then ran through the house toward the window and jumped out. Kevin followed out and told the arriving police officers what had happened. They pursued and arrested the man.

Kevin went back to Mrs. Hill's house. Somehow he wasn't sure he had done the right thing. “What if he has told the truth?” he thought to himself. The man's words sounded pretty convincing.

Paragraph 1:When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them.

Paragraph 2:Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station.

（一）故事回顾（情节元素分析法）

（二）续写情节设计

（三）语块积累

（四）最终写作

Paragraph 1: When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them.

Paragraph 2: Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station.

（五）范文

Paragraph 1:

凯文鼓起全部勇气，敲响了门。脚步声渐近，门吱呀一声开了，格林先生和格林太太出现在眼前。“格林先生，您不在的时候出事了，”凯文结结巴巴地说，解释说他看到有人闯入了他们家。格林先生惊讶得瞪大了眼睛，但很快恢复了平静。在凯文颤抖的手指的指引下，他们来到了凯文看到那个人试图撬开地板的地方。格林先生跪下身，小心翼翼地把它打开了。令他们吃惊的是，里面躺着一块手表。“我们必须去警察局，把一切都告诉他们，”格林先生说，他的声音充满了决心。

Mustering up all his courage, Kevin knocked on the door. The sound of footsteps approached, and the door creaked open to reveal Mr. and Mrs. Green. “Mr. Green, something happened while you were away,” Kevin stammered, explaining that he had witnessed someone breaking into their house. Mr. Green’s eyes widened in shock, but he quickly regained his calmness. Guided by Kevin's trembling finger, they made their way to the spot where Kevin had seen the man trying to lift the floorboard. Mr. Green knelt down and carefully opened it.To their astonishment, there lay a watch. “We have to go to the police station and tell them everything,” Mr. Green said, his voice filled with determination.

Paragraph2:

格林先生把手表递给了一名警官，并解释了情况。警官聚精会神地听着，眼睛眯起，陷入沉思。“凯文，你做得对。这件事我们会彻底调查的，”警官向他们保证，并热情地拍了拍凯文的肩膀。凯文深吸一口气，一股释然之情涌上心头，过去几个小时的重负瞬间烟消云散。离开警察局时，凯文忍不住回想起当天的事件。他意识到，即使感到害怕，也要坚持做正确的事，这一切的恐惧和不确定都是值得的。他的勇气起到了作用，这是一种他将永远珍惜的感觉。

Handing the watch to an officer, Mr. Green explained the situation. The officer listened attentively, his eyes narrowing in thought. “You did the right thing, Kevin. The matter would be looked into thoroughly,” the officer assured them, giving Kevin's shoulder a hearty pat. With a deep sigh, Kevin felt a wave of relief wash over him, the weight of the past few hours melting away.As they left the station, Kevin couldn't help but reflect on the day's events. He realized that standing up for what was right, even when it was scary, was worth every moment of fear and uncertainty. His courage had made a difference, and that was a feeling he would cherish forever.

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