考前冲刺技巧
在高考的最后冲刺阶段，每一分每一秒都显得格外宝贵。在模拟题和押题中徘徊的同学们，可以利用这份考题回顾，复盘和深化已经学过的读后续写技巧，为高考注入强心剂。
考题回顾
真题（人与自我篇）
（长跑与认识校园）
2024年模拟题（人与自我篇）
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梗概：篮球比赛破纪录
反思：打篮球的动作不会写怎么办？
梗概：鼓起勇气参加艺术夏令营
反思：能否发现上文的意象情节（松树）并针对性描写对应的心理突破？
梗概：受老师鼓励参加中国文化交流项目
反思：在无明显冲突的情况下，如何写出对比与成长？
梗概：数学考试忘记带计算器
反思：是否兼顾冲突的主题与前文的铺垫：考试的诚信VS备考的毅力？
急救素材
这份急救素材将人与自我类故事分为“信心建立”、“道德困扰”、“克服恐惧”、“自我期望与现实”四类，以①冲突解决前的负面情绪--②解决中的行为--③解决后的积极情绪--④主题升华为框架，能够帮助我们更有条理地组织思路，丰富我们的文章内容。
1.信心建立
故事模板：主人公面对自我怀疑，最终通过努力和坚持建立信心，完成挑战。
1.1 负面情绪（自我怀疑）
He felt a sinking feeling of self-doubt.
他感到一种沉甸甸的自我怀疑。
Her lack of confidence made her voice tremble.
由于缺乏自信，她的声音有些颤抖。
Doubt clouded his mind, making every step uncertain.
疑云笼罩着他的心，让他的每一步都充满了不确定性。
She questioned her abilities, feeling inadequate.
她怀疑自己的能力，觉得自己不够格。
1.2 解决过程（积极自我对话）
She reminded herself of past successes to boost her confidence.
她提醒自己要记住过去的成功，以增强信心。
He practiced in front of the mirror to build his self-esteem.
他对着镜子练习，以建立自尊。
Positive affirmations helped him regain his confidence.
积极的自我肯定帮助他重拾自信。
She sought advice from mentors to strengthen her resolve.
她向导师寻求建议以增强决心。
1.3 解决后的情绪（成就感）
A wave of pride washed over him as he succeeded.
成功后，他感到一阵自豪。
She felt a warm glow of accomplishment.
她感到一阵温暖的成就感。
His heart swelled with satisfaction.
他的心因满足而膨胀。
A triumphant smile spread across her face.
她的脸上露出胜利的微笑。
1.4 主题升华（内在力量）
True confidence comes from within, not from external validation.
真正的自信来自内心，而不是外界的认可。
Building self-confidence is a journey of self-discovery.
建立自信是自我发现的旅程。
Inner strength is forged through overcoming self-doubt.
内在的力量是通过克服自我怀疑锻造出来的。
Embracing one's flaws can lead to greater self-assurance.
接受自己的缺陷可以带来更大的自信。
2. 道德困境
故事模板：主人公在道德选择中挣扎，最终选择正确的道路。
2.1 负面情绪（内疚）
She felt a heavy burden of guilt.
她感到了沉重的负罪感。
His heart was heavy with remorse.
他的心因悔恨而沉重。
She couldn't shake off the feeling of shame.
她无法摆脱羞愧的感觉。
Guilt gnawed at his conscience.
内疚啃噬着他的良心。
2.2 解决过程（道德选择）
He decided to confess his mistake, despite the consequences.
他决定不计后果，承认自己的错误。
She chose to do the right thing, even if it meant personal loss.
她选择做正确的事，即使这意味着个人损失。
He sought forgiveness to lighten his burden.
他寻求原谅以减轻负担。
She made amends by helping others.
她通过帮助别人来弥补。
2.3 解决后的情绪（解脱）
A sense of relief washed over him after he confessed.
坦白后，他感到如释重负。
She felt lighter, as if a weight had been lifted from her shoulders.
她感到轻松，好像肩上的重担被卸下。
His heart felt free after making things right.
在事情解决后，他的心感到自由。
She was at peace with herself.
她的内心很平静。
2.4 主题升华（道德力量）
Integrity means doing the right thing, even when no one is watching.
正直意味着在没有人看见时也要做正确的事。
True courage is standing by your principles.
真正的勇气是坚守你的原则。
Ethical decisions define one's character.
伦理决策定义一个人的品格。
Living with a clear conscience brings inner peace.
问心无愧的生活会带来内心的平静。
3. 恐惧克服
故事模板：主人公面对内心的恐惧，通过激发内在力量，战胜恐惧、实现目标。
3.1 负面情绪（恐惧）
Fear paralyzed him, making it hard to move.
恐惧使他瘫坐在地上，难以动弹。
She felt her heart race with fear.
她感到心惊肉跳，恐惧不已。
His hands trembled with anxiety.
他的手因焦虑而颤抖。
She was gripped by an overwhelming sense of dread.
她被一种压倒性的恐惧感所控制。
3.2 解决过程（面对恐惧）
He took a deep breath and faced his fears head-on.
他深吸了一口气，直面自己的恐惧。
She visualized success to overcome her anxiety.
她通过想象成功来克服焦虑。
He broke down his fear into manageable steps.
他把恐惧分解成一个个可以控制的步骤。
She sought support from friends to bolster her courage.
她寻求朋友的支持以增强勇气。
3.3 解决后的情绪（释然）
He felt a surge of confidence after overcoming his fear.
克服恐惧后，他感到一阵自信。
She was filled with a sense of liberation.
她感到一种解放的感觉。
His fear transformed into a feeling of accomplishment.
他的恐惧转化为成就感。
She experienced a newfound sense of freedom.
她体验到一种新的自由感。
3.4 主题升华（勇气）
Courage is not the absence of fear, but the triumph over it.
勇气不是没有恐惧，而是战胜恐惧。
Facing fears is the first step to conquering them.
面对恐惧是战胜它们的第一步。
Overcoming fear builds inner strength.
克服恐惧建立内在力量。
Bravery is finding the strength to move forward despite fear.
勇敢是尽管恐惧也要前进。
4. 自我期望与现实
故事模板：主人公在追求自我期望的过程中，面对现实的挑战，最终通过自我调整实现目标。
4.1 负面情绪（失望）
He felt crushed by the weight of unmet expectations.
他感到被未能实现的期望压垮。
Her disappointment was palpable.
她的失望是显而易见的。
He struggled with the reality of his limitations.
他为自己的局限而挣扎。
She felt a deep sense of frustration.
她感到深深的挫败感。
4.2 解决过程（调整目标）
He reassessed his goals to align with his abilities.
他重新评估了自己的目标，使之符合自己的能力。
She learned to appreciate small victories.
她学会了欣赏微小的胜利。
He set realistic milestones to track his progress.
他设定了切实可行的里程碑来跟踪自己的进展。
She focused on self-improvement rather than perfection.
她注重自我完善，而不是追求完美。
4.3 解决后的情绪（满足）
He felt content with his achievements, big or small.
无论成就大小，他都感到满足。
She was proud of her progress.
她为自己的进步感到自豪。
He embraced his journey with a sense of fulfillment.
他满怀成就感地迎接自己的旅程。
She found joy in the process of growth.
她在成长的过程中找到了快乐。
4.4 主题升华（自我接纳）
Real success is measured by personal growth, not external standards.
衡量真正成功的标准是个人成长，而不是外部标准。
Embracing one's journey is more important than the destination.
拥抱自己的旅程比目的地更重要。
Self-acceptance paves the way for genuine happiness.
自我接纳为真正的幸福铺平道路。
Learning to balance expectations with reality is key to a fulfilling life.
学会在期望与现实之间取得平衡，是过上充实生活的关键。
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