【梁师亦友聊英语】温馨提示
阅读范文对英语书面表达的作用是提供样例和参考，帮助我们理解和掌握正确的表达方式和结构。
范文不仅展示了语法和词汇的正确用法，还展示了如何组织思路和逻辑，以及如何使用恰当的语言风格和表达技巧。
通过仔细研究范文，我们可以学会模仿、运用和创造自己的表达方式。此外，阅读范文还可以帮助学习者积累词汇和短语，增强语言的流畅性和准确性。
总之，阅读范文是提高英语书面表达能力的重要途径。
【题典在线】推荐与校园文化生活相关的活动
假如你是李华，你所在的学校将开设更多课外活动. 请你代表班级向学生会主席David 写信，推荐一项团体活动，并给出理由。
内容如下：1、推荐项目：2、推荐理由 词数100字左右.
【范文赏析】
Dear David,
I am writing on behalf of our class to recommend a group activity for our school's extracurricular program. We suggest organizing a volunteering event to help clean up our local park.
The reason we recommend this activity is that it not only benefits our community, but also promotes teamwork and leadership among our classmates. By working together to clean up the park, we can learn to communicate effectively, delegate tasks, and solve problems as a team. Additionally, it gives us the opportunity to make a positive impact on our environment and build a sense of pride in our community.
Thank you for considering our suggestion.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【题典在线】推荐与校园文化生活相关的活动
假定你是班长李华，你班计划与新西兰姊妹学校的某班级在线共上一堂介绍本国音乐文化的交流课。请你代表班级写封邮件给对方班长Hans，内容包括：
1、交流的内容和方式；
2、征求对方意见。
注意：写作词数不少于100；
Dear Hans,
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear Hans,
I’m Li Hua, monitor of our class. We are all excited about the upcoming online lesson to introduce our native music culture. I’m writing to propose some ideas and confirm related details about it.
The lesson is expected to promote our cultural exchange in an informative and effective way. So for our part, we are planning to adopt presentations and videos to introduce typical music styles including folk songs and pop music. As for the schedule, we wonder if it would be convenient for you to have the lesson on June 17, which is to begin at 1:00 pm (Beijing Time) and last 3 hours.
Does our proposal work well on your side? Looking forward to your earliest reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
1、词汇积累
促进：promote→improve
开始：begin→start
有关的：related→relevant
本土的：native→local
2、句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：The lesson is expected to promote our cultural exchange in an informative and effective way. So for our part, we are planning to adopt presentations and videos to introduce typical music styles including folk songs and pop music.
拓展句：Since the lesson is expected to promote our cultural exchange in an informative and effective way, we are planning to adopt presentations and videos to introduce typical music styles including folk songs and pop music.
【高分句型1】So for our part, we are planning to adopt presentations and videos to introduce typical music styles including folk songs and pop music.(运用现在进行时)
【高分句型2】As for the schedule, we wonder if it would be convenient for you to have the lesson on June 17, which is to begin at 1:00 pm (Beijing Time) and last 3 hours. (运用了if引导宾语从句)
【题典在线】
假设你叫李津，你的英国朋友Chris所在的学校要组织来中国进行主题夏令营活动，每个学生可以从以下三个主题营中选择一个参加：1、唐诗学习夏令营; 2、乒乓球训练营; 3、剪纸学习夏令营。Chris来信希望你能给他推荐一个。请你给他回信，内容包括：
(1) 对Chris的来访表示欢迎;
(2) 你推荐的课程及推荐理由;
(3) 对这次学访提一些生活方面的建议。
注意：
(1) 词数不少于100词;
(2) 可以适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯;
(3) 文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：唐诗(Tang poems); 剪纸(paper-cutting)
Dear Chris,
Yours,
Li Jin
【范文赏析】
Dear Chris,
I am glad that you are going to join in summer camps in China. Of the three themes, I suggest that you should choose to learn to play table tennis. My reasons are as follows.
In the beginning, it is easy to learn table tennis. Table tennis can help you build up your strength and make you become more energetic. Besides, table tennis is popular among Chinese people. By participating in this table tennis training class, not only can you make some friends with the same interest but also you can get some professional guidance and improve your skills. By the way, you can visit some tourist attractions in your free time to experience local conditions and customs.
I hope you will enjoy your summer camp. I am looking forward to meeting you in China.
Yours,
Li Jin
【写作构思】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给要来中国参加主题夏令营活动的英国朋友Chris写信，向他推荐三个主题营中的一个活动，内容包括：1.对Chris的来访表示欢迎；2.你推荐的课程及推荐理由；3.对这次学访提一些生活方面的建议。
【详解】
1、词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
参加：join in→take part in
此外：besides→what’s more
游玩：visit→pay a visit to
2、句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Table tennis can help you build up your strength and make you become more energetic.
拓展句：Table tennis is a good sport, which can help you build up your strength and make you become more energetic.
【高分句型1】
Of the three themes, I suggest that you should choose to learn to play table tennis. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】
By participating in this table tennis training class, not only can you make some friends with the same interest but also you can get some professional guidance and improve your skills. (运用了部分倒装结构)
