孙老师讲解七上创优检测配套试卷unit3作文《我的校园生活》

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主题《我的校园生活………》

适合于五六年级、七年级学生

范文仅供参考，作文需要多次训练，老师指导写作方法

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以下范文写作严格按照三段论结构，句式结构多样化，简单句，并列句，主从复合句，有机结合起来。

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题目：My School Life is ____

提示要点：上学方式、科目、老师同学、校园活动、个人感受；开头固定给出：

My name is Li Hua. I’m a student of Class 1, Grade 7. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life.

要求：七年级词汇，简单句+并列句+主从复合句结合，词数≥60，贴合思维导图五个板块。

范文一（中等生稳妥版）

题目：My School Life is colorful

第一段：

My name is Li Hua. I’m a student of Class 1, Grade 7. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life.

第二段：

I go to school by bike every day. We have many subjects at school, such as English, math and history. My teachers are kind and my classmates are friendly, so I’m happy to stay with them.When we finish our classes, we can take part in many activities. I often play basketball with my friends after school.

第三段：

I really love my school life because it brings me lots of fun.

✅亮点句式

1.并列句：My teachers are kind and my classmates are friendly, so I’m happy to stay with them.

2.时间状语从句：When we finish our classes, we can take part in many activities.

3.原因状语从句：I love my school life because it brings me lots of fun.

覆盖全部要点：上学方式、科目、师生、课后活动、个人感受。

范文二（优等生进阶高分版）

My School Life is wonderful

My name is Li Hua. I’m a student of Class 1, Grade 7. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life.

I take the bus to school every morning. There are many useful subjects for us to learn. Although some lessons are a little difficult, our teachers always help us patiently. My classmates are nice and we often help each other.After school, we have different kinds of activities. I join the reading club because I enjoy reading books.

I can learn and grow here.I think my school life is great.

✅亮点句式

1.让步状语从句：Although some lessons are a little difficult, our teachers always help us patiently.

2.原因状语从句：I join the reading club because I enjoy reading books.

3.宾语从句：I think my school life is great. A

覆盖全部要点，复合句加分，词汇不超七年级范围。

🍎🍎🍎范文三（简洁考场版，不容易写错）

My School Life is busy but happy

My name is Li Hua. I’m a student of Class 1, Grade 7. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life.

I walk to school every day. We learn many interesting subjects at school. My teachers are great and my classmates are good partners.When we have free time, we can do sports or join clubs. I often run on the playground with my classmates.

I am busy every day, but I still love my school life because I can learn and grow here.

✅亮点句式

1.并列句：I am busy every day, but I still love my school life.

2.时间状语从句：When we have free time, we can do sports or join clubs.

3.原因状语从句：…because I learn and grow here.