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「数字」是本单元的核心话题。翻看这 10 篇满分范文会发现,其中 7 篇都是图表、调查类作文——看懂数据、写清占比、再补一句自己的观点,是这个单元最该练熟的写作套路。
本文目录01 I Find Myself Really Good(图表 · 自我认识)02 Free Time Activities(表格 · 业余活动)03 AI 机器人调查报告(数据 + 观点)04 Amazing Numbers in My Eyes(话题作文)05 日常生活中的数字(话题作文)06 Activities on Holidays(调查报告)07 Free Time Survey(问卷调查)08 Traffic Accidents(新闻报道)09 Students' Hobbies(图表 · 爱好调查)10 Numbers in Our Daily Life(话题作文)

01

CHART & STORY · 图表 + 经历

题目

青春期对于每个人来说都是最能彰显生命本色的特殊时期。为了引导同学们正确地认识自我,某校"阳光心理驿站"的老师以"我发现自己真的很好"为主题,对 1127 名学生做了问卷调查。请结合图表,用两段话写一篇短文:① 简要说明图表内容;② 任选一项,结合自己的经历,谈谈它对你的生活产生了什么积极影响。不少于 80 词,开头已给出;不得出现真实人名、校名。

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参考范文

Our school did a survey among 1,127 students on the topic of "I Find Myself Really Good". Here are the results. 86 percent of the students believe they can see the world with kind eyes, while 53 percent consider themselves positive. 47 percent think they don't like to complain.

As for me, I find myself really positive. Last month, I was chosen to play a role in an English show. It was difficult for me to memorize the lines in a short time. However, I regarded it as a challenge, which was also a good chance to improve my English. So I made an effort to practice. Finally, I made it and received high praise. In fact, it is my positive attitude that brings out the best in me all the time.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态使用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:要求以“I Find Myself Really Good”为主题,结合提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,介绍调查结果;
第二步,结合自己的经历,谈谈它对你的生活产生了什么积极的影响。

 亮点词汇

as for
至于
play a role in
扮演角色
make an effort to
尽力去做某事
all the time
一直

高分句型

01I regarded it as a challenge, which was also a good chance to improve my English.which 引导非限制性定语从句,顺势补充说明 challenge

02In fact, it is my positive attitude that brings out the best in me all the time.it is … that 强调句,把"积极的态度"顶到重音位置

02

TABLE REPORT · 表格信息

题目

假如你是杨珊,最近你做了一项关于业余活动的小调查。请根据表格内容,用英语写一篇短文描述调查结果。80 词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。

同学
课外活动
频率
李玉
国际象棋
一周五次
贝蒂
踢足球
一周三次
迈克
看英语杂志
每天

参考范文

I'm Yang Shan. I asked my friends about their free time activities. Here are the results.

Li Yu is interested in chess. She started to play chess when she was little. Now she plays chess five times a week. She thinks it helps her relax. Betty loves sports and playing sports makes her strong. Her favourite sport is soccer. She plays soccer three times a week. Mike is a shy boy. He enjoys reading very much. Every day he reads English magazines. He thinks he can learn a lot of things from them.

I think all of their free time activities are good. Do you think so?

【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:内容要点已给出,考生应按要求进行写作,不可遗漏任何信息提示,适当添加细节,使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题(已给出);
第二步,结合表格内容,介绍调查结果;
第三步,给出评价。

亮点词汇

be interested in
对……感兴趣
enjoy doing sth.
喜欢做某事
learn a lot from
从……中学到很多

高分句型

01She started to play chess when she was little.when 引导时间状语从句,补上"从什么时候开始"

02She thinks it helps her relax.宾语从句,一句话写出这个活动对她的意义

03He thinks he can learn a lot of things from them.同样的宾语从句,换成"收获",与上句形成层次

03

DATA & OPINION · 数据 + 观点

题目

上周五,你们班就"AI 机器人能做什么"展开了讨论。请根据数据写一份调查报告,并回答老师的问题:"Will robots take the place of (替代) humans?",给出至少一点理由。须涵盖图表全部信息;不少于 90 词;不得出现真实姓名和校名。

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参考范文

  Last Friday we had a heated discussion about what AI robots can do in our English class. Here are the results.

  We find that more than half of the students think robots can help with housework. 37% of the students think that they can help us study and improve our grades. 23% of the students believe that robots can take care of the elderly. We are surprised to find that 12% of the students think robots can chat and play with us. Only ten percent of the students think robots can cook for us.

  Although robots can do so many things for us, I don't think robots can take the place of humans because they can never think like humans. Only humans can be creative.

【详解】[总体分析]
①文体:本文是一篇材料作文,就 AI 机器人相关话题进行阐述;
②时态:本文以一般现在时为主;
③提示:全面分析调查数据,并就题干所提问题表达意见,补充个人观点,使内容充实,并注意避免语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明话题,引出调查结果;
第二步,详细分析调查数据;
第三步,就 AI 机器人是否会替代人类表达自己的观点和理由,做总结。

亮点词汇

help with housework
帮忙做家务
improve one's grades
提高某人的成绩
take care of
照顾
take the place of
替代

高分句型

01We are surprised to find that 12% of the students think robots can chat and play with us.that 引导宾语从句,从句里又套一层 think 的宾语从句

02Although robots can do so many things for us, I don't think robots can take the place of humans because they can never think like humans.although 让步状语从句;I don't think 后面接宾语从句,否定前移

04

TOPIC ESSAY · 话题作文

题目

请以 "Amazing Numbers in My Eyes" 为题,写一篇短文:① 你认为令人惊奇的数字有哪些;② 这些数字令人惊奇的原因;③ 数字在生活中的重要性。不少于 60 词,语句通顺,可适当发挥。

参考范文

  Interesting numbers are all around us. From lucky numbers to important dates, numbers play a significant role in our lives. Here are a few examples of interesting numbers that I find fascinating.

  Firstly, the number 7 is often considered a lucky number in many cultures. It is believed to bring good fortune and is often associated with spirituality. Another interesting number is 13, which is often considered unlucky. This superstition is so strong that many buildings don't have a 13th floor, and some people avoid doing anything important on the 13th day of the month. However, in some cultures, such as Italy, 13 is considered a lucky number.

  Numbers are very important in our daily lives. We use numbers to count, measure, calculate, and understand the world around us. From simple tasks like checking the time to more complex activities like budgeting and financial planning, numbers play a crucial role in our decision-making processes.

【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:以“Amazing Numbers in My Eyes”为题,结合提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引入话题——令人惊奇的数字;
第二步,介绍有哪些令人惊奇的数字及原因;
第三步,表明数字在生活中的重要性。

亮点词汇

play a significant role in
在……中发挥重要作用
be associated with
与……相联系
such as
例如

高分句型

01Here are a few examples of interesting numbers that I find fascinating.that 引导定语从句,修饰 numbers

02Another interesting number is 13, which is often considered unlucky.which 引导非限制性定语从句,补充说明 13

05

OUTLINE · 提纲作文

题目

请以"日常生活中的数字"为题写一篇短文。① 你认为数字在我们日常生活中重要吗?② 日常生活中,我们都在什么时候会使用到数字?③ 假如我们的生活中没有了数字,那会是怎样的呢?80 词左右,可适当发挥。

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参考范文

Numbers are very important in our daily life. Maths teachers use numbers to teach us how to do calculation and solve problems. We read numbers from newspapers to know the information and facts. When we go to the supermarket, numbers can be seen everywhere to show the prices. Without numbers, the whole world will be in a mess, and it will be difficult for us to even tell the time. That's why numbers are so important that we can't live without it.

【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态:时态为一般现在时。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点,逻辑清
晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点明主题,直接指出数字在日常生活中非常重要。
第二步,从数学老师教学、阅读报纸获取信息、超市价格展示这几个方面详细阐述数字的用途和重要性。
第三步,通过假设没有数字的情况,强调数字不可或缺,总结数字的重要性。

高分句型

01That's why numbers are so important that we can't live without it.so … that 引导结果状语从句,适合放在全文最后一句

06

SURVEY REPORT · 调查报告

题目

学校做了学生假期活动调查,下面图表是你们班的数据。请写一份调查报告,并谈谈你自己的想法。提示词 聊天 chat 义务性工作 voluntary work80 词左右,标题与开头已给出;不得出现真实姓名、校名;可适当增加细节。

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参考范文

Activities on holidays

Our school made a survey on students' activities on holidays recently. 30 percent of the students study by themselves during the holidays. They read books or do their homework. There're 30 percent of the students chatting or playing games online. Then, 25 percent of the students watch TV or listen to some music. 10 percent of the students like to do some sports, such as playing basketball and football. There're still 5 percent of the students. They travel or do some voluntary work.

I think we should have a meaningful holiday. Don't spend too much time playing online games. We should make good use of the holidays.

【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生要根据图表写一份调查报告,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“学生假期活动的调查”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。介绍几项假期活动的占比并谈谈自己的想法;
第三步,书写结语。表达“希望学生们好好利用假期,过一个有意义的假期”的愿望。

亮点词汇

study by themselves
自学
like to do sth.
喜欢做某事
do some voluntary work
做一些志愿工作
make good use of
好好利用

高分句型

01There're 30 percent of the students chatting or playing games online.There be 句型,用现在分词补充说明这些人正在做什么

02Don't spend too much time playing online games.祈使句,用于建议,语气比 you should 更直接

07

200 STUDENTS · 人数统计

 题目

假设你是 Tony,你们年级有 200 名学生。上周你做了一个关于 "What do you do in your free time?" 的调查。请根据数据写一篇短文:① 介绍图表中的调查情况;② 谈谈自己的休闲活动并发表看法。80 词左右,开头已给出。

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 参考范文

  Last week, I surveyed 200 students about "What do you do in your free time?". Here are the results.

  Ten percent of the students would like to read books when they are free. And 50 students prefer playing computer games. 30 students choose to do sports to keep healthy and half of the students choose to go out to have fun with their parents or friends.

  As for me, I like listening to music when I am free. I like to stay alone in my free time.

【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中调查结果的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开头已给出;
第二步,介绍图表中的调查情况;
第三步,谈谈自己的休闲活动并发表看法。

亮点词汇

would like to
想要、喜欢
prefer playing computer games
更喜欢玩电脑游戏
keep healthy
保持健康
have fun
玩得开心
as for me
对于我来说

高分句型

01Here are the results.倒装句,图表作文最省力的过渡句

02Ten percent of the students would like to read books when they are free.when 引导时间状语从句,补出使用场景

08

LINE GRAPH · 曲线图

题目

假定你是李华,请根据曲线图为"英语学习报"写一篇新闻报道:① 介绍图表大概内容;② 描述图表基本变化;③ 发表个人相关观点。80—100 词;开头已写出,不计入总词数。

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参考范文

The graph shows that the numbers of traffic accidents in our city from July to November.

In August, the number rises to 234 and then falls to 220 in September. In October, the number increases again to 239. It falls to 224 in November. There are the most traffic accidents in October and the fewest in July.

In my opinion, there are so many traffic accidents in our city. So it is important for us to obey traffic rules, and we should educate people about road safety and protect ourselves better in the life.

【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,要求写一篇新闻报道。
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示:写作信息和要点已给出,考生应注意观察曲线图所提供的信息,并将其完整地表达,可适当增加内容,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
①第一步,概括曲线图的信息,即为“7 月至 10 月的交通事故数量”。
②第二步,具体阐述曲线图信息,表达出 7 月至 10 月交通事故数量及变化情况。
③第三步,发表个人相关观点并总结全文。

亮点词汇

increase
增加
obey traffic rules
遵守交通规则
educate sb. about sth.
就某事教育某人

高分句型

01There are the most traffic accidents in October and the fewest in July.形容词最高级,一句点出两个极值

02It is important for us to obey traffic rules.It's adj. for sb. to do sth. 句型,观点句的万能外壳

09

HOBBY SURVEY · 爱好调查

题目

下图是对某所中学 300 名学生业余爱好的调查结果,请写一篇短文。① 调查结果;② 你自己的爱好、选择的原因及带来的益处。80—100 词;不得出现真实校名和人名;开头已给出。

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 参考范文

Many students have hobbies. Here is the result of the survey about what 300 students usually do in their free time.

Nearly half of the students like music, a quarter of them usually spend their time playing sports on weekends, and twenty percent enjoy reading books. A few students like collecting things they like, such as stamps, coins and so on. Few students have other hobbies.

As for me, I prefer listening to music. Because it can give me pleasure when I'm unhappy and make me relaxed after hard study. Sometimes I listen to English songs. I can learn English words or phrases from them. It really improves my English a lot.

【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,属于材料作文写作;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章开头以及要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,不要遗漏提示中的“带来的益处”这一要点,可以
适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接短文开头,引出话题;
第二步,先根据图表说明调查的结果,要列举具体的数据;
第三步,接着说明自己的爱好、选择的原因以及带来的益处并书写结语。

亮点词汇

half of
……的一半
a quarter of
四分之一
prefer doing sth.
更喜欢做某事

 高分句型

01Nearly half of the students like music, a quarter of them usually spend their time playing sports on weekends, and twenty percent enjoy reading books.and 连接的并列句,三项数据合成一句

02A few students like collecting things (that) they like, such as stamps, coins and so on.省略引导词 that 的定语从句,修饰 things

03Because it can give me pleasure when I'm unhappy and make me relaxed after hard study.when 引导时间状语从句,because 引导原因状语从句,两个从句并置

10

SHORT VERSION · 同题再练

题目

Write a passage of at least 55 words on the topic “Numbers in our daily life”. (以“日常生活中的数字”为题写一篇短文,词数不少于 55 个):

Suggested outlines: 
* Do you think numbers are important in our daily life? 
* When do we use numbers in our daily life? 
* What will our life be like without numbers?

参考范文

Numbers in our daily life

Numbers are very important in our daily life. Maths teachers use numbers to teach us how to do calculation and solve problems. We read numbers from newspapers to know the information and facts. When we go to the supermarket, numbers can be seen everywhere to show the prices. Without numbers, it will be difficult for us to even tell the time. That's why numbers are so important that we can't live without it.

【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇话题作文。本文以“日常生活中的数字”为题展开描述,文中介绍日常生活中什么
时候会用到数词,以及如果没有数字,我们的生活会是什么样子的。
2.例文点评:本文主要采用的是第一人称,时态采用的是一般现在时。准确运用时态,并保持主谓一致。逻辑性强,语句表达通顺。

两句高分短语use sth. to do sth. 用某物做某事be difficult for sb. 对某人来说很困难

句子:When we go to the supermarket, numbers can be seen everywhere to show the prices 句中 when 引导的时间状语从句;That’s why numbers are so important that we can’t live without it 句中 so…that 引导的结果状语从句。

THE END

范文是用来拆的,不是用来背的。

背下来的范文,换一道题就废了。拆出来的结构,换十道题还在。这十篇里反复出现的,其实只有四件事。

一、审题 数清要写几段、必须包含几点,圈出"不能出现真实姓名"这类限制。二、列要点 每个要点先想好一个短语,再决定用哪个句型包住它。三、接过渡 However / As for me / In my opinion,三个就够用一学期。四、回头查 拼写、时态、主谓一致、词数——最后两分钟只做这件事。

写到这里,Unit 2 的十道典型例题就全过完了。下一篇 Unit 3,我们接着梳理。

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