文章主题:心理健康、内在幸福|散文式社科文本
难点:大量抽象心理名词、比较结构、宾语从句、代词指代、名词转动词转换
(46) We don’t have to learn how to be mentally healthy; it is built into us in the same way that our bodies know how to heal a cut or mend a broken bone.
句子拆分:
分号并列两个分句;that引导方式状语从句;✅【阅卷采分点(满分2分)】
1. mentally healthy 心理健康(0.5)
2. built into us 与生俱来、根植于我们体内(0.5)
3. heal a cut 愈合伤口(0.5)
4. mend a broken bone 修复骨折(0.5)
核心词汇
mentally adv.心理层面;❌典型易错点
built into us直译为“建造在我们里面”;参考译文:我们无需刻意学习如何保持心理健康;这种能力与生俱来,就像我们的身体能够自主愈合伤口、修复骨折一样。
(47) Our mental health doesn’t really go anywhere; like the sun behind a cloud, it can be temporarily hidden from view, but it is fully capable of being restored in an instant.
句子拆分:
✅【阅卷采分点(2分)】
1. temporarily hidden from view 暂时遮蔽、看不见(0.5)
2. be capable of 能够(0.5)
3. restore v.恢复(0.5)
4. in an instant 瞬间(0.5)
核心词汇
temporarily adv.暂时地;❌典型易错点
被动语态生硬直译“被恢复”;参考译文:我们的心理健康并不会真正消失;如同云层背后的太阳,它可能暂时隐没不见,但完全可以在一瞬间恢复如常。
(48) Mental health allows us to view others with sympathy if they are having troubles, with kindness if they are in pain, and with unconditional love no matter who they are.
句子拆分:
✅【阅卷采分点(2分)】
1. sympathy 同情;kindness 善意(0.5)
2. unconditional love 无条件的关爱(0.5)
3. having troubles 身处困境(0.5)
4. no matter who 无论何人(0.5)
核心词汇
sympathy n.同情;❌典型易错点【全年最高频失分坑】
三组并列结构翻译层次混乱;sympathy误译成“共鸣”;重复啰嗦,不会精简句式。参考译文:拥有健康的心理状态,我们便能在他人陷入困境时心怀体恤,在他人承受痛苦时心怀善意,并且无论对方是谁,都能给予无条件的关爱。
(49) Although mental health is the cure-all for living our lives, it is perfectly ordinary as you will see that it has been there to direct you through all your difficult decisions.
句子拆分:
although让步状语从句;主句嵌套that宾语从句✅【阅卷采分点(2分)】
1. cure-all 万能良药(0.5)
2. perfectly ordinary 十分平常、稀松平常(0.5)
3. direct you 指引你(0.5)
4. difficult decisions 艰难抉择(0.5)
核心词汇
cure-all n.万能灵药;❌典型易错点
cure-all直译“全部治愈”;参考译文:尽管心理健康是我们应对生活的万能良方,但它其实十分寻常。你会发现,它一直都在,指引你做出每一个艰难抉择。
(50) As you come to see and trust the constant presence of mental health in your life, you will be able to use it fully to weather life’s hardships.
句子拆分:
✅【阅卷采分点(2分)】
1. constant presence 持续存在(0.5)
2. come to see and trust 逐渐认识并相信(0.5)
3. fully 充分地(0.25)
4. weather hardships 渡过困境(熟词僻义,0.75)
核心词汇
constant adj.持续的;❌典型易错点
weather只认识名词“天气”,识别不出动词含义;参考译文:当你逐渐意识到并相信心理健康始终伴随左右时,你就能充分依靠它渡过人生的重重难关。
2016年翻译考点总结
1. 核心语法考点
分号并列句、类比状语、多组平行并列结构、although让步从句、as引导时间状语从句;
2. 词汇难点
心理类抽象名词;顶级熟词僻义:
weather(v.渡过难关);固定搭配 built into sb;
3. 考场普遍问题
短句容易轻视,忽略逻辑连接;动词熟词僻义失分严重;比喻句式直译缺少美感;
注:仅供参考学习。