Para 1 写信原因+写信目的
句式1:(适用于朋友间)Learning that you have been confronted with difficulties in sth. and sought my help in your previous letter, I’m writing to put forward some constructive suggestions in this regard.获悉你在……方面遭遇难题,并于上封信中寻求我的帮助,我特此写信就此提出若干建设性的建议。
情境1:你的朋友 Tom 来信,说英语写作总是失分,向你求助。请写建议信开头。
Learning that you have been confronted with difficulties in English writing and sought my help in your previous letter, I’m writing to put forward some constructive suggestions in this regard. 获悉你在英语写作方面遭遇难题,并于上封信中寻求我的帮助,我特此写信就此提出若干建设性的建议。
情境 2:好友 Jack 来信,难以平衡学业和社团活动,感到压力很大,向你寻求建议。请写建议信开头。
Learning that you have been confronted with difficulties in balancing study and after-school activities and sought my help in your previous letter, I’m writing to put forward some constructive suggestions in this regard. 获悉你在平衡学习与课外活动方面遭遇难题,并于上封信中寻求我的帮助,我特此写信就此提出若干建设性的建议。
句式2:(适用于老师/学校/或某负责人)Considering the existing state of..., I’m writing to put forward my opinions with a view to its further advancement. 考虑到…… 现存状况,我特此提出我的看法,以期使其得到进一步发展完善。
情境1:你发现学校课外阅读活动开展效果不理想。请给校英文报编辑写一封邮件的开头段,反映学校课外阅读活动现状。
Considering the existing state of school after-class reading activities, I’m writing to put forward my opinions with a view to their further advancement. 考虑到学校课外阅读活动的现存状况,我特此写信提出我的看法,以期使其得到进一步发展完善。
情境2:你发现校园体育锻炼活动参与度不高,请给校长写一封建议信的开头段。
Considering the existing state of campus physical exercise activities, I’m writing to put forward my viewpoints with a view to their further advancement. 考虑到校园体育锻炼活动的现存状况,我特此写信提出我的看法,以期使其得到进一步发展完善。
Para 3 希望采纳建议
句式1:I am firmly convinced that you will regain confidence through your continuous efforts. Should you have any further questions, do not hesitate to get in touch with me. 我坚信凭借持续的努力,你一定能够重拾信心。倘若你还有其他疑问,欢迎随时与我联系。
句式2:I hope you will take my suggestions into serious consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you with encouraging news in the near future. 希望你能认真斟酌我的建议。期待不久之后收到你的佳音。
句式3:I would appreciate it if you could make some slight adjustments. 倘若您能做出些许微调,我将不胜感激。