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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
At age sixty-one, "Daddy" Bruce Randolph opened Daddy Bruce's Barbecue Restaurant in the "Five Points" area, a poor section of Denver. He was a kind and generous man, who helped numerous people — not just his customers, but the poor and the homeless.
Every Thanksgiving, Bruce and his son would completely engage themselves in cooking for the thousands of homeless. He wanted them to have a great and free dinner on this special day. About a week before, Bruce began preparing all the food. In the early years of his project, he paid for everything out-of-pocket. But as time went by, the costs skyrocketed as the crowds grew. That's when Bruce's customers stepped in to help. They donated tons of turkeys, potatoes, yams and ribs. And they donated their time to stand behind and beside the old man. They volunteered to cook and serve. It was a rare moment to see a gentleman serving food to a man who lived in a cardboard box underneath a viaduct（高架桥）.
Due to the participation of various people, it seemed there was an endless supply of food to feed those homeless people. No one ever walked away hungry from Bruce's restaurant. It was Bruce who started the whole thing and supervised it until a few years ago when he edged towards ninety. He had become too old to work anymore. He was one of the few people who lived to see a city street named in his honour. Mayor Federico Peña renamed East 34th Avenue "Bruce Randolph Boulevard."
Bruce's story touched a local high school student, Jake. One Thanksgiving, Jake passed by Bruce's restaurant and saw crowds of homeless people waiting patiently for food. He made up his mind to carry on Bruce's spirit.
注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好。
Jake went into the restaurant and asked how he could lend a hand.
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Years later, the tradition of free Thanksgiving dinner still went on.
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一、文本分析
1. 角色
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2. 视角
第＿＿＿人称
3. 时空线
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4. 细节问答
Who was "Daddy" Bruce?＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
What did Bruce do every Thanksgiving?＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
How did Bruce's customers help him? ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
What did the city do to honor Bruce?＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
What touched Jake when he passed by the restaurant?＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
What did Jake decide to do?＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
5. 情节线
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6. 情感线
Jake: touched and inspired→＿＿＿＿＿＿→admiring and eager→＿＿＿＿＿＿→warm and devoted→＿＿＿＿＿＿→proud and determined→＿＿＿＿＿＿→grateful and fulfilled→＿＿＿＿＿＿（续写）→＿＿＿＿＿＿（续写）
7. 综合概括（中英各一句）
中文：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
英文：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
8. 句式
宾语从句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
状语从句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
非谓语动词：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
并列句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
定语从句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
9. 本文主题
温情成长类：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
二、情节构造
Paragraph 1: Jake went into the restaurant and asked how he could lend a hand.
衔接句1——How did the staff respond? What did Jake do?
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Paragraph 2: Years later, the tradition of free Thanksgiving dinner still went on.
衔接句2——How did the tradition continue? What had Jake become?
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三、段落续写框架
第一段：杰克走进餐馆，询问自己如何能帮上忙。
→①________→②________→③________;
第二段：多年以后，免费感恩节晚餐的传统仍在延续。
→④________→⑤________→⑥________.
四、段落续写
Jake went into the restaurant and asked how he could lend a hand.
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Years later, the tradition of free Thanksgiving dinner still went on.
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参考答案
一、文本分析
1. 角色
"Daddy" Bruce Randolph（善良慷慨、毕生以美食温暖穷人与流浪者的烧烤店老板）；his customers（踊跃捐物捐时、与老人并肩劳作的客人们）；Jake（被布鲁斯精神打动、立志传承这份善意的高中生）；the homeless people（被免费晚餐温暖的无家可归者）
2. 视角
第三人称
3. 时空线
At sixty-one, "Daddy" Bruce opened his Barbecue Restaurant in a poor part of Denver--- Every Thanksgiving, he and his son cooked for thousands of homeless people--- Bruce paid for everything at first; later his customers donated food and time--- With everyone's help, no one walked away hungry from Bruce's restaurant--- When Bruce grew too old to work, the city named a street after him--- Bruce's story touched high school student Jake, who decided to carry on the spirit---（续写）Jake went into the restaurant and asked how he could lend a hand---（续写）Years later, the tradition of free Thanksgiving dinner still went on
4. 细节问答
Who was "Daddy" Bruce? A kind and generous man who opened a barbecue restaurant in a poor part of Denver and helped the poor and the homeless.
What did Bruce do every Thanksgiving? He and his son cooked for thousands of homeless people, giving them a great and free dinner.
How did Bruce's customers help him? They donated tons of food and volunteered their time to cook and serve.
What did the city do to honor Bruce?Mayor Federico Peña renamed East 34th Avenue "Bruce Randolph Boulevard" in his honour.
What touched Jake when he passed by the restaurant?He saw crowds of homeless people waiting patiently for food.
What did Jake decide to do?To carry on Bruce's spirit.
5. 情节线
六十一岁的“布鲁斯老爹”在丹佛贫民区开了家烧烤店，善良慷慨，帮助无数穷人与无家可归者→每逢感恩节，他都要为成千上万的流浪者做一顿免费丰盛的晚餐，起初全部自掏腰包→随着人潮增多开支剧增，客人们纷纷捐火鸡、土豆、红薯与排骨，并自愿前来帮忙烹饪端菜→在众人的参与下，食物供应源源不断，没人饿着离开布鲁斯的餐馆→布鲁斯年届九旬不再工作，市长将东34大道更名为“布鲁斯·兰道夫大道”以示敬意→布鲁斯的故事打动高中生杰克，一次路过他看见排队等候的流浪者，决心传承布鲁斯的精神→（续写）杰克走进餐馆，询问自己如何能帮上忙→（续写）多年以后，免费感恩节晚餐的传统仍在延续
6. 情感线
Jake: touched and inspired→admiring and eager→warm and devoted→proud and determined→grateful and fulfilled→（续写）hopeful and caring→（续写）proud and moved
7. 综合概括（中英各一句）
中文：“布鲁斯老爹”在丹佛贫民区经营烧烤店，每逢感恩节都为成千上万的流浪者免费做一顿丰盛晚餐，客人们也纷纷捐物出力；即便年迈退休，这座城市仍以他的名字命名一条大道。这份善意打动了高中生杰克，他决心把免费感恩节晚餐的传统一代代传承下去。
英文：“Daddy" Bruce, who ran a barbecue restaurant in a poor part of Denver, cooked a free Thanksgiving dinner for thousands of homeless people every year, with his customers donating food and time. Even after he grew too old to work, the city honored him by naming a street after him. His kindness moved high school student Jake, who decided to carry on the tradition of the free Thanksgiving dinner for years to come.
8. 句式
宾语从句：Jake asked how he could lend a hand.
状语从句：As time went by, the costs skyrocketed as the crowds grew.
非谓语动词：Moved by Bruce's story, Jake decided to carry on his spirit.
并列句：Bruce began preparing the food, and his customers volunteered to help.
定语从句：He was a man who helped the poor and the homeless.
9. 本文主题
温情成长类：一个人的善举能汇聚众人的善意，化作温暖一座城的传统；心怀大爱并愿意传承，就能让这份温暖在岁月中生生不息。
二、情节构造
Paragraph 1: Jake went into the restaurant and asked how he could lend a hand.
衔接句1——How did the staff respond? What did Jake do?
The staff warmly welcomed him and put him to work peeling potatoes; Jake worked happily alongside the volunteers, feeling the same joy of giving that had filled Bruce.
Paragraph 2: Years later, the tradition of free Thanksgiving dinner still went on.
衔接句2——How did the tradition continue? What had Jake become?
Jake grew up and, with his friends and family, kept organizing the free dinner every year; standing in the warm kitchen, he remembered Bruce and knew the tradition would live on for generations.
三、段落续写框架
第一段：杰克走进餐馆，询问自己如何能帮上忙。
→①员工们热情地欢迎他，给他安排了削土豆的活儿→②杰克和志愿者们一起忙碌，干得格外起劲，体会到与布鲁斯一样的给予之乐→③看着流浪者们吃上热饭、露出笑容，杰克更加坚定要传承这份善意；
第二段：多年以后，免费感恩节晚餐的传统仍在延续。
→④杰克长大成人，与朋友和家人在每个感恩节都继续张罗免费晚餐→⑤前来帮忙的人越来越多，爱心在这座城市里越传越广→⑥站在温暖的厨房里，他想起布鲁斯老爹，深知这份温暖会代代相传、永不熄灭。
四、段落续写
Jake went into the restaurant and asked how he could lend a hand. The volunteers welcomed him warmly and handed him an apron and a peeler. "You can start with these potatoes," one of them smiled. Jake worked happily alongside the others, peeling, stirring and serving until his arms ached — yet he felt a deep joy he had never known before. As he watched the homeless people enjoy hot meals and smile with gratitude, he understood the secret of Bruce's kindness: giving freely fills your own heart with light. That night, Jake promised himself he would never let this tradition end.
Years later, the tradition of free Thanksgiving dinner still went on. Jake, now a grown man, organized the dinner every year with his friends and family, just as Bruce had done. Word of his kindness spread, and more volunteers came to help each Thanksgiving, carrying on the old man's spirit. Standing in the warm, busy kitchen, Jake watched the crowded tables and the smiling faces and felt a quiet pride. He knew Bruce was looking down and smiling, too. This was not just a meal — it was a flame passed from hand to hand, burning ever brighter, and Jake was determined to keep it lit for generations to come.
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