深圳中考英语写作主题语境学案

 ​    课标修订、教材更新，深圳中考英语​写作备考需要新视角。本​次分享来自跨学段教研思考，聚焦初高中一体化主题语境写作教学。依托《义务教育英语课程标准（2025年修订）》，把高中主题语境教学实践经验落地到深圳中考写作备考，整合主题语境积极语料，破解写作备考碎片化难题，为2027届考生与初中英语教师提供可实操的写作教学方案。

学案使用指​引

分层使用：同一份学案，三种用法——基础层只做 ①② 变式与 so…that / it 形式主语等基础句式，目标“写对、写通”；进阶层完成从句改写与定语从句仿写，目标“写好、写活”；优生层挑战倒装升格与文体迁移，目标“写出彩”。练习前标有 ★ 层级，可按层布置。

答案呈现：各板块练习后紧跟“参考答案 · 教师版”青绿框，印发学生版时删去该部分即可。

板块一 · 主题语境词汇清单（含深圳特色）

使用逻辑：按三大主题语境 + 深圳特色专项建档，共 11 个话题。每个话题三样东西——核心词汇表、高频短语表、母本基准句。母本基准句是本周“一句多变”（板块二）的种子，词不离句、句不离境。建议每周聚焦 1 个话题，随堂 10 分钟：听写词汇 → 口头造句 → 朗读并背诵母本基准句。

1. 人与自我

A · 校园活动（科技节 / 艺术节 / 运动会）

核心词汇：

高频短语：

母本基准句（背诵）：Aimingto raise students' interest in science, our school held a Science Festival last week.

B · 成长经历与梦想

核心词汇：

高频短语：

母本基准句（背诵）：This experience helped me gain much personal growth.

C · 健康生活与心理

核心词汇：

高频短语：

母本基准句（背诵）：Taking regular exercise, eating a healthy diet and getting enough sleep can help us stay healthy.

2. 人与社会

A · 志愿服务与公益慈善

核心词汇：

高频短语：

母本基准句（背诵）：What we did not only brought joy to others but also enriched our own lives.

B · 传统文化与国际交流

核心词汇：

高频短语：

母本基准句（背诵）：A Chinese knot can be in the shape of an animal with a special meaning.

C · 科技创新与智慧校园

核心词汇：

高频短语：

母本基准句（背诵）：With the development of science, we live a better life.

3. 人与自然

A · 环境保护（第一高频）

核心词汇：

高频短语：

母本基准句（背诵）：As long as everyone does a small part, our world will be more beautiful.

B · 动物保护与自然体验

核心词汇：

高频短语：

母本基准句（背诵）：To protect animals is to protect ourselves.

4. 深圳特色与城市名片

A · 城市地标与人文

核心词汇：

高频短语：

母本基准句（背诵）：From a small fishing village to a modern international city, Shenzhen has created a miracle in just forty years.

B · 科技创新之城

核心词汇：

高频短语：

母本基准句（背诵）：Shenzhen, well-known as a city of technology and innovation, is full of energy and creativity.

C · 志愿者之城与绿色生活

核心词汇：

高频短语：

母本基准句（背诵）：In this "City of Volunteers", millions of people devote their spare time to helping others.

板块练习

练习 1 · 语境归类（基础层）　将下列 16 个词组归入所属主题语境（每个语境 4 个）。

① make one's dream come true / take up a hobby / guard against stress / turn out to be a great success / raise money for the children in need / keep this traditional art form alive / be aware of social responsibility / learn about Chinese culture and history / use both sides of the paper / advocate garbage sorting / set up a nature reserve / get close to nature / win the title of National Civilized City / a city of technology and innovation / the Greater Bay Area / the City of Volunteers.

练习 2 · 语块运用（进阶层）　用所给词块将下列句子译成英语（每句至少使用一个本板块词块，注意深圳特色话题）。

1. 深圳被誉为一座科技与创新之城。（be known as）

2. 作为一名深圳市民，我们应该为创建文明城市做贡献。（make a contribution to）

3. 上周我们学校举办了一场以“绿色生活”为主题的艺术节。（with the theme of）

4. 我们应该采取行动保护环境。（take action to）

5. 这项活动结果是一场巨大的成功，丰富了我们的校园生活。（turn out; enrich）

6. 我们的志愿工作不仅给他人带去了欢乐，也丰富了我们自己的生活。（not only ... but also）

7. 只要每个人都尽一份力，深圳就会变得更加美丽。（as long as）

8. 红树林是许多珍稀鸟类的家园。（be home to）

【参考答案 · 教师版】

练习 1 · 语境归类：

人与自我——make one's dream come true / take up a hobby / guard against stress / turn out to be a great success

人与社会——raise money for the children in need / keep this traditional art form alive / be aware of social responsibility / learn about Chinese culture and history

人与自然——use both sides of the paper / advocate garbage sorting / set up a nature reserve / get close to nature

深圳特色——win the title of National Civilized City / a city of technology and innovation / the Greater Bay Area / the City of Volunteers

练习 2 · 语块运用：

1. Shenzhen is known as a city of technology and innovation.

2. As citizens of Shenzhen, we should make a contribution to building a civilized city.

3. Last week, our school held an art festival with the theme of "Green Life".

4. We should take action to protect the environment.

5. The activity turned out to be a great success, enriching our campus life.

6. Our voluntary work not only brought joy to others but also enriched our own lives.

7. As long as everyone does a small part, Shenzhen will become more beautiful.

8. The mangroves are home to many rare birds.

板块二 · 母本句一句多变（40 句）

方法回顾（讲座核心方法）：同一母本句，五个变式维度——① 同义替换（基础）、② 逻辑衔接（基础）、③ 从句改写（进阶）、④ 倒装升格（优生）、⑤ 文体迁移（优生）。学生练的不是“改错”，而是“同一个意思，我能说出几种地道版本”。

热身 · 讲座母本句五变式（教师示范用）

母本：This experience helped me gain much personal growth.（这次经历帮助我获得个人成长）

母本句训练库（40 句）：以下按 8 个话题分组，每组 5 句。左边是学生写得出的“母本基准句”，右边标注本句要练的升格手法——学生按手法改写，教师版附升格参考句。建议每周 1 组：周一至周五每天 1 句，随堂 5 分钟“一句多变”。

训练库 · 40 句

话题 1 · 人与自我：校园活动

【参考答案 · 教师版】

1. Aiming to raise students' interest in science, our school held a Science Festival last week, which attracted over five hundred students and teachers.

2. The robots were so amazing that they could move up and down the stairs freely.

3. We actively took part in the activities, learning a lot from them.

4. The activity turned out to be a great success and was highly thought of by both teachers and students.

5. How meaningful the Science Festival is! It not only broadens our horizons but also plants a seed of innovation in our hearts.

话题 2 · 人与自我：成长经历

【参考答案 · 教师版】

1. No matter how many difficulties I met, I never gave up.

2. What I gained from this experience was not only knowledge but also the courage to face challenges.

3. I will never forget the days when we studied and played together.

4. It was this failure that taught me an important lesson: never give up halfway.

5. As long as I keep working hard, my dream will come true one day.

话题 3 · 人与自我：健康与心理

【参考答案 · 教师版】

1. It is of great importance for us teenagers to take regular exercise.

2. When I feel stressed, I listen to music so that I can calm down quickly.

3. To keep fit, we'd better stay away from junk food and eat more vegetables and fruit.

4. Not only should we care about our physical health, but we should also pay attention to our mental health.

5. I was too nervous to fall asleep the night before the exam.

话题 4 · 人与社会：志愿服务

【参考答案 · 教师版】

1. Last Sunday, I went to Sunshine Nursing Home, where I spent a meaningful afternoon with the elderly.

2. We cleaned the windows carefully, chatting and singing songs with the elderly from time to time.

3. Not only did the activity bring joy to the elderly, but it also enriched our own lives.

4. Helping others is a rewarding experience, from which we can gain a great sense of achievement.

5. If everyone is willing to lend a helping hand, our community will surely become a warmer place.

话题 5 · 人与社会：传统文化

【参考答案 · 教师版】

1. Chinese red is not only a color but also a symbol of happiness and good luck.

2. Red paper is usually cut into different shapes to express people's best wishes.

3. The Mid-autumn Festival, which is regarded as a symbol of family reunion, is one of the most important traditional festivals in China.

4. With the development of China, an increasing number of foreigners are attracted by Chinese culture.

5. As Chinese teenagers, it is our duty to spread traditional Chinese culture to the world.

话题 6 · 人与社会：科技创新

【参考答案 · 教师版】

1. Shenzhen, well-known as a city of technology and innovation, is full of energy and creativity.

2. With the rapid development of the Internet, our life is becoming more and more convenient.

3. AI is expected to be widely used in every field of our life in the near future.

4. With the help of advanced equipment, teachers and students can surf the Internet freely in the classroom.

5. Only when we master science and technology can we make our country stronger.

话题 7 · 人与自然：环境保护

【参考答案 · 教师版】

1. The Earth is the only home for us, so it is everyone's duty to protect it.

2. As we all know, water is one of the most valuable resources, so we should never waste it.

3. Riding bikes to school can not only keep us healthy but also help protect the environment.

4. As long as everyone does a small part, our world will be a better place to live in.

5. Many wild animals are in danger of dying out, so we must take action to protect them before it is too late.

话题 8 · 深圳特色：城市名片

【参考答案 · 教师版】

1. From a small fishing village to a modern international city, Shenzhen has created a miracle in just forty years.

2. Shenzhen is known as the "City of Parks", where people can always find a green space to relax.

3. In this "City of Volunteers", millions of people devote their spare time to helping others.

4. As a Shenzhen student, I'm really proud of my hometown, and I believe it will embrace an even brighter future.

5. If you come to Shenzhen, you will not only enjoy the beautiful sea views but also feel the speed and passion of this young city.

板块三 · 长难句仿写（20 组 × 4 句中译英）

使用逻辑：每组三步走——看结构公式，读典型长难句（多取自福田区资源与深圳中考范文），做4 句话题中译英。全部 80 句围绕深圳中考高频语境。课堂操作：每周 1–2 组，5 分钟微写作，投影两三份学生作品当堂讲评。★ 为分层标记：★★★ 为优生层挑战句式。

二十组高频句式 · 仿写任务

1. so + adj. + that 结果状语从句　★☆☆

结构公式：主语 + be + so + adj. + that + 从句

典型长难句：The robots were so amazing that they could move up and down the stairs freely.　（福田资源 · 2021 科技节范文）

仿写任务 · 4 句中译英

① 这场才艺展示如此吸睛，以至于吸引了一大群观众。（提示：eye-catching; attract a large audience）

② 我们如此忙于准备考试，以至于几乎没有时间锻炼。（提示：be busy doing; hardly）

③ 老人们看到我们时如此高兴，以至于紧紧握住了我们的手。（提示：tightly）

④ 这部电影如此感人，以至于许多同学都忍不住哭了。（提示：can't help doing）

【参考答案 · 教师版】

① The talent show was so eye-catching that it attracted a large audience.

② We were so busy preparing for the exams that we hardly had time to take exercise.

③ The elderly were so happy to see us that they held our hands tightly.

④ The film was so moving that many students couldn't help crying.

2. such + a/an (+ adj.) + n. + that　★☆☆

结构公式：主语 + be + such + a/an (+ adj.) + 名词 + that + 从句

典型长难句：It is such a nice picture that I chose it for the photographic contest.　（2024 深圳中考范文）

仿写任务 · 4 句中译英

① 这是一次如此有意义的经历，以至于我永远不会忘记它。（提示：meaningful）

② 那是一个如此炎热的日子，以至于我们不得不到树荫下休息。（提示：in the shade）

③ 他取得了如此大的进步，以至于老师当众表扬了他。（提示：make great progress; praise）

④ 深圳是一座如此充满活力的城市，以至于每年吸引大量游客。（提示：full of energy）

【参考答案 · 教师版】

① It was such a meaningful experience that I will never forget it.

② It was such a hot day that we had to take a rest in the shade.

③ He has made such great progress that the teacher praised him in public.

④ Shenzhen is such a city full of energy that it attracts a large number of visitors every year.

3. It 形式主语（It is + adj. + for sb. to do）　★☆☆

结构公式：It is + adj. + for sb. + to do sth.

典型长难句：It is necessary for all of us to take part in it.　（福田资源）

仿写任务 · 4 句中译英

① 对我们来说，在日常生活中养成绿色习惯很重要。（提示：develop green habits）

② 对中学生来说，学会如何应对压力很有必要。（提示：deal with stress）

③ 保护红树林对每个深圳市民来说都很重要。（提示：mangroves; citizen）

④ 与人交流对他来说曾经是一件很难的事。（提示：used to）

【参考答案 · 教师版】

① It is important for us to develop green habits in our daily life.

② It is necessary for middle school students to learn how to deal with stress.

③ It is important for every citizen in Shenzhen to protect the mangroves.

④ It used to be difficult for him to communicate with others.

4. It is believed / known that ...　★☆☆

结构公式：It is + 过去分词 + that 从句（“人们认为/众所周知”）

典型长难句：It is commonly believed that this vibrant color not only stands for happiness, but also can bring good fortune.　（福田资源 · 2019“中国红”范文）

仿写任务 · 4 句中译英

① 众所周知，水是最宝贵的资源之一。（提示：valuable）

② 人们普遍认为，阅读能为我们打开一个新世界。（提示：open up a new world）

③ 我们相信，只要共同努力，深圳会变得更美。（提示：with our joint efforts）

④ 花太多时间在手机上是没有好处的。（提示：spend ... on; no good）

【参考答案 · 教师版】

① It is known to all that water is one of the most valuable resources.

② It is commonly believed that reading can open up a new world for us.

③ It is believed that Shenzhen will become more beautiful with our joint efforts.

④ It is no good spending too much time on mobile phones.

5. not only ... but also（陈述语序）　★☆☆

结构公式：A + not only + 谓语1 + but also + 谓语2

典型长难句：Riding bikes to school can not only keep us healthy but also help protect the environment.　（自撰示范）

仿写任务 · 4 句中译英

① 志愿工作不仅帮助了他人，也教会了我们关爱。（提示：voluntary work）

② 这次科技节不仅开阔了我们的视野，还点燃了我们对科学的热情。（提示：broaden; light up the passion）

③ 深圳不仅有美丽的风景，还有浓厚的创新文化。（提示：a strong culture of innovation）

④ 阅读不仅能给我们带来知识，还能带来快乐。（提示：bring sb. sth.）

【参考答案 · 教师版】

① Voluntary work not only helps others but also teaches us to care.

② The Science Festival not only broadened our horizons but also lighted up our passion for science.

③ Shenzhen has not only beautiful scenery but also a strong culture of innovation.

④ Reading can bring us not only knowledge but also joy.

6. With the development of ...　★☆☆

结构公式：With the development of + 名词, + 完整句子

典型长难句：With the development of science, we live a better life.　（福田资源）

仿写任务 · 4 句中译英

① 随着互联网的快速发展，网上学习变得越来越流行。（提示：online learning）

② 随着科技的发展，智能设备已成为我们学习的好帮手。（提示：smart devices）

③ 随着深圳的快速发展，越来越多的游客来这里感受它的魅力。（提示：enjoy its charm）

④ 随着社会的进步，人们越来越重视心理健康。（提示：pay attention to）

【参考答案 · 教师版】

① With the rapid development of the Internet, online learning is becoming more and more popular.

② With the development of technology, smart devices have become helpful tools in our study.

③ With the rapid development of Shenzhen, more and more visitors come to enjoy its charm.

④ With the progress of society, people pay more and more attention to mental health.

7. 感叹句 What ... / How ...!　★☆☆

结构公式：What (a/an) + adj. + n. + 主谓！ / How + adj./adv. + 主谓！

典型长难句：How cute they are! / What a wonderful performance it is!　（2024 深圳中考范文）

仿写任务 · 4 句中译英

① 多么精彩的一场演出啊！（提示：wonderful）

② 深圳这些年变化多大啊！（提示：greatly）

③ 和同学们一起做志愿工作是多么令人难忘的经历啊！（提示：unforgettable）

④ 时间过得多快呀！转眼我们就要毕业了。（提示：in a blink）

【参考答案 · 教师版】

① What a wonderful performance it is!

② How greatly Shenzhen has changed in recent years!

③ What an unforgettable experience it is to do voluntary work with my classmates!

④ How time flies! We will graduate from junior high school in a blink.

8. there be + 定语从句　★☆☆

结构公式：There is/are + 名词 + , where/which + 从句

典型长难句：Shenzhen is known as the "City of Parks", where people can always find a green space to relax.　（自撰示范（呼应板块二））

仿写任务 · 4 句中译英

① 我们学校有很多社团，在那里你可以找到志同道合的朋友。（提示：club）

② 深圳湾有大片红树林，它们是许多珍稀鸟类的家园。（提示：rare birds）

③ 我们社区将建一个学习驿站，人们可以在那里读书和交流。（提示：study space）

④ 图书馆里藏书丰富，你总能找到适合自己的书。（提示：suit）

【参考答案 · 教师版】

① There are many clubs in our school, where you can find friends with the same interests.

② There are large areas of mangroves in Shenzhen Bay, which are home to many rare birds.

③ There will be a study space in our community, where people can read and share ideas.

④ There is a rich collection of books in the library, so you can always find one that suits you.

9. too ... to / ... enough to　★☆☆

结构公式：too + adj. + to do（太……而不能）/ adj. + enough to do（足够……能）

典型长难句：I was too nervous to fall asleep the night before the exam.　（自撰示范（呼应板块二））

仿写任务 · 4 句中译英

① 他太兴奋了，睡不着觉。（提示：excited）

② 这个箱子太重了，那个男孩搬不动。（提示：carry）

③ 她足够勇敢，在演讲比赛中说出了自己的想法。（提示：brave; speak out）

④ 我们要走足够快，才能在暴风雨来临前到家。（提示：before the storm）

【参考答案 · 教师版】

① He was too excited to fall asleep.

② The box is too heavy for the boy to carry.

③ She was brave enough to speak out her ideas in the speech contest.

④ We need to walk fast enough to get home before the storm comes.

10. V-ing 伴随状语（, V-ing）　★★☆

结构公式：完整句 + , V-ing（表伴随动作或结果）

典型长难句：Eventually, all the runners managed to arrive at the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions.　（福田资源 · 越野跑例文）

仿写任务 · 4 句中译英

① 活动结束时，我们聚集在舞台前拍照并分享感受。（提示：gather; share feelings）

② 孩子们坐在草坪上，听老师讲深圳的故事。（提示：lawn）

③ 老人们坐在院子里，享受阳光，笑得很开心。（提示：enjoy the sunshine）

④ 我们尽力清扫了沙滩，只留下脚印和美好回忆。（提示：leave behind）

【参考答案 · 教师版】

① At the end of the activity, we gathered in front of the stage, taking photos and sharing our feelings.

② The children sat on the lawn, listening to the teacher's stories about Shenzhen.

③ The elderly sat in the yard, enjoying the sunshine and smiling happily.

④ We tried our best to clean the beach, leaving nothing but footprints and sweet memories.

11. 非限制性定语从句（, which ...）　★★☆

结构公式：完整句 + , which + 从句（指代整句或先行词）

典型长难句：The picture was taken in Shenzhen on a sunny morning in April, which shows a beautiful park with colorful flowers and green grass.　（2024 深圳中考范文）

仿写任务 · 4 句中译英

① 我在摄影比赛中获得了一等奖，这让我激动不已。（提示：win the first prize）

② 上周我们去敬老院做志愿工作，这次经历教会了我们关爱他人。（提示：teach sb. to do）

③ 深圳被称为“志愿者之城”，这让每一位市民都感到自豪。（提示：be proud）

④ 我们种下了许多小树，它们将来会让城市更绿。（提示：young trees）

【参考答案 · 教师版】

① I won the first prize in the photography competition, which made me really excited.

② Last week we went to the nursing home to do voluntary work, which taught us to care about others.

③ Shenzhen is called the "City of Volunteers", which makes every citizen proud.

④ We planted many young trees, which will make our city greener in the future.

12. 介词 + which（, in which / among which）　★★☆

结构公式：完整句 + , in/among/with + which + 从句

典型长难句：Last weekend, our school organized a 5km cross-country running activity, in which both students and teachers participated.　（福田资源）

仿写任务 · 4 句中译英

① 上周五我校举行了英语演讲比赛，三十多名学生参加了比赛。（提示：take part in）

② 红树林里生活着许多珍稀鸟类，其中黑脸琵鹭最为珍贵。（提示：the black-faced spoonbill）

③ 春节有许多传统习俗，其中贴春联和包饺子最常见。（提示：customs）

④ 学校开设了丰富的社团课程，其中机器人社团最受欢迎。（提示：club courses）

【参考答案 · 教师版】

① Last Friday, our school held an English speaking competition, in which more than thirty students took part.

② Many rare birds live in the mangroves, among which the black-faced spoonbill is the most precious.

③ There are many customs during the Spring Festival, among which pasting couplets and making dumplings are the most common ones.

④ Our school provides colorful club courses, among which the robot club is the most popular.

13. What 引导主语从句　★★☆

结构公式：What + 从句 + is/was + （not only ... but also ...）

典型长难句：What I gained from this experience was not only knowledge but also the courage to face challenges.　（自撰示范（呼应板块二））

仿写任务 · 4 句中译英

① 这次活动给我印象最深的是同学们的团队精神。（提示：impress sb. most）

② 我们现在应该做的是采取行动保护环境。（提示：take action）

③ 志愿者真正需要的是耐心和爱心。（提示：patience）

④ 这次深圳之行让我明白的是：创新让城市充满活力。（提示：innovation）

【参考答案 · 教师版】

① What impressed me most in the activity was my classmates' team spirit.

② What we should do right now is to take action to protect the environment.

③ What volunteers really need is patience and love.

④ What I learned from this Shenzhen trip is that innovation fills a city with energy.

14. 强调句 It is ... that ...　★★☆

结构公式：It is + 被强调部分 + that + 句子其余部分

典型长难句：It was this failure that taught me an important lesson: never give up halfway.　（自撰示范（呼应板块二））

仿写任务 · 4 句中译英

① 正是这次志愿活动改变了我对生活的看法。（提示：change one's view）

② 正是我们的共同努力让社区变得更加美丽。（提示：joint efforts）

③ 正是阅读为我们打开了通往世界的大门。（提示：open the door to）

④ 你只有到了深圳，才能真正感受到“深圳速度”。（提示：the "Shenzhen Speed"）

【参考答案 · 教师版】

① It was this voluntary activity that changed my view of life.

② It is our joint efforts that make our community more beautiful.

③ It is reading that opens the door to the world for us.

④ It is in Shenzhen that you can truly feel the "Shenzhen Speed".

15. so that 目的从句　★★☆

结构公式：主句 + so that + 从句（以便，为了）

典型长难句：When I feel stressed, I listen to music so that I can calm down quickly.　（自撰示范（呼应板块二））

仿写任务 · 4 句中译英

① 我们早点出发吧，以便赶上首班车。（提示：catch the first bus）

② 学校开设了静音自习区，这样学生们就能专心学习。（提示：concentrate on）

③ 我们在沙滩上捡拾垃圾，这样海龟就能有干净的家园。（提示：pick up; sea turtle）

④ 请把垃圾分类，这样它们就能被回收利用。（提示：be recycled）

【参考答案 · 教师版】

① Let's set out early so that we can catch the first bus.

② The school has set up a silent reading area so that students can concentrate on their study.

③ We picked up litter on the beach so that sea turtles could have a clean home.

④ Please sort out the garbage so that it can be recycled.

16. as long as 条件从句　★★☆

结构公式：As long as + 从句, + 主句（只要……就……）

典型长难句：As long as everyone does a small part, our world will be more beautiful.　（福田资源）

仿写任务 · 4 句中译英

① 只要坚持练习，你的英语口语就会越来越好。（提示：keep practicing）

② 只要我们携手同行，就没有克服不了的困难。（提示：hand in hand）

③ 只要每个人都绿色出行，深圳的天空就会更蓝。（提示：travel in a green way）

④ 只要有信心和勇气，你就能实现梦想。（提示：confidence）

【参考答案 · 教师版】

① As long as you keep practicing, your spoken English will become better and better.

② As long as we go hand in hand, there will be no difficulties that we can't overcome.

③ As long as everyone travels in a green way, the sky in Shenzhen will be bluer.

④ As long as you have confidence and courage, you will make your dream come true.

17. 情态动词 + 被动语态　★★☆

结构公式：主语 + should/can/must + be + 过去分词

典型长难句：Red paper is usually cut into different shapes to express people's best wishes.　（福田资源 · 2019“中国红”范文）

仿写任务 · 4 句中译英

① 塑料袋不应该被随处丢弃。（提示：plastic bags; throw）

② 珍稀动物必须得到保护，以免灭绝。（提示：die out）

③ 旧书可以捐给山区需要的孩子。（提示：donate; children in need）

④ 垃圾应该被正确分类，这样资源才能被重复利用。（提示：sort out; reuse）

【参考答案 · 教师版】

① Plastic bags shouldn't be thrown away everywhere.

② Rare animals must be protected so that they won't die out.

③ Old books can be donated to the children in need in mountain areas.

④ Garbage should be sorted out properly so that resources can be reused.

18. 不定式作目的状语开头（To ..., ...）　★★☆

结构公式：To + do（目的）, + 主句（新闻报道导语句式）

典型长难句：To spread kindness and care, a volunteer activity was launched at Sunshine Nursing Home last Sunday.　（新闻报道导语句式（呼应板块二））

仿写任务 · 4 句中译英

① 为了让外国朋友更好地了解中国文化，我们举办了这次交流活动。（提示：exchange activity）

② 为了丰富居民生活，社区委员会组织了一次采摘荔枝活动。（提示：enrich; lychee）

③ 为了减轻学习压力，我们每周五下午都开展体育活动。（提示：relieve stress）

④ 为了提高学生的科学兴趣，学校上周举办了科技节。（提示：raise one's interest）

【参考答案 · 教师版】

① To help foreign friends better understand Chinese culture, we held this exchange activity.

② To enrich the residents' life, the Community Union organized a lychee-picking activity.

③ To relieve the pressure from study, we have sports activities every Friday afternoon.

④ To raise students' interest in science, our school held a Science Festival last week.

19. Not only ... but also 部分倒装　★★★

结构公式：Not only + 助动词 + 主语 + 动词原形 ..., but ... also ...

典型长难句：Not only did it strengthen the friendship between us, but it was also of great benefit to us, physically and mentally.　（福田资源 · 2020 倡议书范文）

仿写任务 · 4 句中译英

① 志愿工作不仅给老人带去欢乐，也让我们收获了成就感。（提示：a sense of achievement）

② 我们不仅要努力学习，还要关心社会。（提示：care about society）

③ 这次比赛不仅让我更自信，还教会了我如何面对失败。（提示：face failure）

④ 深圳不仅有现代化高楼，还有温暖的人情。（提示：warm-hearted people）

【参考答案 · 教师版】

① Not only did our voluntary work bring joy to the elderly, but it also gave us a sense of achievement.

② Not only should we study hard, but we should also care about society.

③ Not only did the competition make me more confident, but it also taught me how to face failure.

④ Not only does Shenzhen have tall modern buildings, but it also has warm-hearted people.

20. Only + 状语置于句首的倒装　★★★

结构公式：Only + 状语（when/by/with ...）+ 助动词 + 主语 + 动词

典型长难句：Only when we master science and technology can we make our country stronger.　（自撰示范（呼应板块二））

仿写任务 · 4 句中译英

① 只有当我们学会关爱他人时，我们才能真正快乐。（提示：care about others）

② 只有通过每天练习，你才能提高英语口语。（提示：improve）

③ 只有大家一起努力，才能把深圳建设得更美好。（提示：build ... into）

④ 只有亲身参与，你才能体会到志愿工作的真正意义。（提示：take part in; personally）

【参考答案 · 教师版】

① Only when we learn to care about others can we be truly happy.

② Only by practicing every day can you improve your spoken English.

③ Only with our joint efforts can we build Shenzhen into a better city.

④ Only by taking part in it personally can you feel the true meaning of voluntary work.

【参考答案 · 教师版】

讲评建议（全板块通用）：仿写只判“结构对不对、语境合不合”，不苛求用词；结构立住后，再引导用板块一词块润色。中译英讲评时，请学生先标出自己的“结构主干”（如倒装的助动词、从句的连接词），再对照参考译文找差距。

板块四 · 段落逻辑（连接词挖空）

高分段落黄金法则：主题句定方向 + 支撑句给细节 + 过渡词理逻辑。支撑句的万能三连——摆重要性 → 指问题 → 给行动，自带逻辑链，任何话题套得进。本板块新增 4 段“连接词与语块挖空”，全部改编自深圳中考真题高分范文：先通读判断逻辑，再填空；空格处标注了中文提示。先求“一段过硬”，再求“三段成篇”。

练习 1 · 段落排序（基础层）

下列 5 句是一次敬老院志愿活动报道段的打乱句序，请按逻辑重新排序（写出字母顺序），并说明排序依据。

A. Upon arrival, we were divided into three groups, and each group had its own task.

B. Last Saturday morning, our class went to Sunshine Nursing Home to do some voluntary work.

C. Everything done, we sat in the yard chatting with the elderly, and their smiles warmed our hearts.

D. My group was responsible for cleaning the windows while the others read newspapers for the old people.

E. When it was time to leave, the elderly thanked us for our work and company.

练习 2 · 连接词与语块挖空：新闻报道体（2021 科技节范文改编）

体裁提示：新闻报道主体段。先判断句子间的逻辑（列举—突出—补充），再填空。每空可能是一词或多词。

There were many items in this activity, ________①（例如）model-making competition, robot competition, science experiment operation. ________②（在其中）them, the most eye-catching one was the robot competition. These robots were ________③（呈……形状）lovely animals, such as rabbits, monkeys and dogs. The robots were ________④（如此）amazing ________⑤（以至于）they could move up and down the stairs freely to pick up all the litters in the trash. ________⑥（此外）, science experiment operations were also exciting.

【参考答案 · 教师版】

①such as　②Among　③in the shape of　④so　⑤that　⑥Besides　

逻辑讲解：本段逻辑链：总列项目（such as）→ 突出亮点（Among them）→ 描写细节（so ... that）→ 补充一句（Besides）。新闻报道主体段“总—分—补”结构，可直接迁移。

练习 3 · 连接词与语块挖空：倡议书体（2020 文明城市范文改编）

体裁提示：倡议书主体段与结尾段。注意“分层建议”的衔接词梯度和结尾的呼吁句式。

________①（首要的是）, our top priority should be protecting the environment. In our daily lives, we can ________②（分类）our trash properly and take public transportation to school, which helps reduce the pollution. ________③（此外）, engaging in voluntary work and raising money for those in need is a great way for us to contribute to the community. ________④（再者）, always remaining honest, friendly, and willing to lend a helping hand to others whenever possible is crucial.

So, don't ________⑤（犹豫）to take action. Even the smallest action can ________⑥（带来改变）for our city. Please join us in this effort to build Shenzhen into a National Civilized City.

【参考答案 · 教师版】

①First and foremost　②sort out　③Additionally　④Furthermore　⑤hesitate　⑥make a difference　

逻辑讲解：倡议书主体段衔接词梯度：First and foremost → Additionally → Furthermore（“首要—补充—递进”），三条建议三个角度；结尾“don't hesitate to take action + make a difference”是呼吁固定搭配。

练习 4 · 连接词与语块挖空：建议信体（2026 学习驿站升格版改编）

体裁提示：建议信主体段（建议 × 理由）。注意“每条建议后接目的/理由从句”的写法。

________①（首先）, it would be better to divide the space into a silent reading area and a group discussion room, ________②（以便）people of different needs can both enjoy it. ________③（此外）, opening the space from 8 a.m. to 9 p.m. at weekends would make it more convenient for students, ________④（关系代词）usually need a quiet place to study after school. ________⑤（最后同样重要）, I suggest providing more books for children, ________⑥（关系代词）can help develop their interest in reading.

【参考答案 · 教师版】

①To begin with　②so that　③In addition　④who　⑤Last but not least　⑥which　

逻辑讲解：建议信主体段“三段式建议”：To begin with → In addition → Last but not least；每条建议用 so that / who / which 从句补理由，做到“建议 + 理由”成对——这正是评分标准中的“内容完整、逻辑连贯”。

练习 5 · 连接词与语块挖空：演讲稿体（志愿活动感言）

体裁提示：演讲稿主体段（叙事 + 感悟）。注意叙事节奏词与收束句式。

Last month, our class carried out a voluntary activity at Sunshine Nursing Home. ________①（起初）, I thought it was just a simple task. ________②（然而）, when I saw the big smiles on the elderly's faces, I realized the true meaning of helping others. ________③（而且）, working with my classmates taught me the importance of teamwork. ________④（总之）, this experience ________⑤（不仅）brought warmth to others ________⑥（而且）lit up my own heart.

【参考答案 · 教师版】

①At first　②However　③What's more　④In a word　⑤not only　⑥but also　

逻辑讲解：叙事段节奏链：At first（预期低）→ However（转折点）→ What's more（递进收获）→ In a word（收束升华）。“先抑后扬 + 递进 + 总结”是感言段的万能骨架。

练习 6 · 补写主题句（进阶层）

下面是一个“节约用水”段落的三个支撑句。请为它补写一个主题句（定方向、统领全段）。

主题句：______________________________________

First, water is necessary for all living things to survive.（摆重要性）

However, many rivers and lakes are polluted by waste, making the water unsafe to use.（指问题）

As students, we can start with small things, like turning off taps when not using them.（给行动）

练习 7 · 补写支撑句与总结句（进阶层）

主题句与两个支撑句已给出。请再补一个支撑句（建议从“社会责任”角度），并写一句总结句收束全段。

主题句：Taking part in voluntary work benefits us a lot.

支撑① It offers us chances to practice communication skills.

支撑② Helping others brings us joy and a sense of achievement.

支撑③ ______________________________________

总结句：______________________________________

【参考答案 · 教师版】

练习 1 · 排序：B → A → D → C → E。依据：时间标志词串联的活动全程——Last Saturday morning（出发）→ Upon arrival（到达分组）→ 分工干活（D）→ Everything done（干完聊天）→ When it was time to leave（离开）。新闻报道与记叙段落，优先按时间线排。

练习 6 · 主题句参考：Water is an important resource, and therefore, it's our responsibility to protect it.　要点：名词点题（water）+ 态度词（important / our responsibility）；范围不超出后面三个支撑句的内容。

练习 7 · 支撑③参考：What's more, we can learn to take responsibility for society through voluntary work.　总结句参考：In a word, voluntary work is a win-win experience for both others and ourselves.

板块五 · 典型题材开头结尾

使用逻辑：开头定“是什么事、我为什么写”，结尾定“落什么款、表什么态”。六大高频文体各给两个开头句、两个结尾句——建档背诵，两周一次默写复现；考场上按文体“取件”，不再临场造句。

六大文体 · 开头结尾句库

建议信

开头：

· I'm glad to hear that ... I'm writing to offer some suggestions on ...

· Knowing that ..., I'd like to share some of my ideas.

结尾：

· I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.

· I'm looking forward to seeing ... / Your early reply.

演讲稿

开头：

· Good morning, everyone! It's my great honor to stand here and share my ideas about ...

· Ladies and gentlemen, I'm greatly honored to speak here to talk about ...

结尾：

· In a word, it's important for us to ... Let's take action now!

· That's all. Thank you for your listening.

倡议书

开头：

· As we all know, ... I'm writing to call on everyone to ...

· Have you ever thought about ...? Let's do something to ...

结尾：

· Every small action counts, and together we can make a big difference.

· Let's start now! Looking forward to your participation.

新闻报道

开头：

· In order to ..., our school held a/an ... on ... at ..., which attracted ...

· Aimed to ..., an activity was launched by our school last week, in which ...

结尾：

· The activity was highly thought of, because not only did it ..., but it was also of great benefit to ...

· The activity turned out to be a rewarding experience, from which we benefited a lot.

自荐信

开头：

· I'm Li Hua, a student from Class 3, Grade 9. Knowing that ..., I am writing to apply for ...

· I have read the notice that ... I would like to be a member of ...

结尾：

· I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.

· I'm looking forward to your early reply.

感谢信

开头：

· I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for ...

· I'd like to extend my heartfelt gratitude to you for your great help!

结尾：

· Thanks a lot for your kindness again. Give my best regards to ...

· Words can't express my deep appreciation for your kindness.

板块练习

练习 1 · 文体判断　读开头句，判断文体（建议信 / 演讲稿 / 倡议书 / 新闻报道 / 自荐信 / 感谢信）。

1. Good morning, everyone! It's my great honor to stand here and share my ideas about reading.　（________）

2. I'm Li Hua, a student from Class 3, Grade 9. Knowing that our school needs volunteers for the smart campus project, I am writing to apply for the position.　（________）

3. In order to raise students' interest in science, our school held a Science Festival last week, which attracted over 500 students and teachers.　（________）

4. I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your patient guidance.　（________）

5. As we all know, Shenzhen is working hard to become a National Civilized City. I'm writing to call on everyone to protect our community environment.　（________）

6. I'm glad to hear that a new study space will be built in our community. I'm writing to offer some suggestions on how to make it better.　（________）

练习 2 · 功能填空　补全新闻报道开头与结尾中的关键功能词（每空一词）。

开头：________ order to raise students' interest in science, our school ________ a Science Festival last week, ________ attracted many students and teachers.