2026年安徽中考英语写作试题专家解读与满分作文赏析
作者简介：深耕一线英语教学近40载，中考、高考命题研究专家，发表文章2000余篇，主编《英语满分作文》书系、《英语奥林匹克》、《英语写作素材大辞典》、《现代英汉双解大辞典》等300余本畅销全国的教学及竞赛辅导用书。 本节内容包含：试题解读＋写作要点＋可用素材（含词汇、句式）＋注意事项＋满分作文2篇（附亮点评析、满分揭秘）＋参考范文（附译文）
■经典考题（计20分）
假定你是李华，你参加了班级组织的英语课本剧表演活动。请结合下面的图示信息，用英语写一篇短文，在英语课上进行分享。
注意：
1.短文须包含图中三个要点，所给词汇仅供参考，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数80~100。
◆名师解析
1. 试题解读
本题为课堂口头分享类记叙文，是中考高频校园活动写作题型，设定李华在英语课分享班级英语课本剧经历。文章必须覆盖活动目的、排练演出经历、内心感受三大核心要点，可适度补充细节丰富内容。文体口语化，叙事部分采用一般过去时，活动意义与长久感受使用一般现在时。命题围绕校园学科实践，引导学生记录成长收获，兼顾动词短语、衔接词、复合句等初三核心考点。题干给出参考词块降低写作门槛，同时限制词数80~100词、禁止出现真实校名与人名。既能检测基础词汇运用，又能考查篇章叙事逻辑与情感表达，难度适中，适合初三夯实叙事类作文写作思路。
2. 写作要点
⑴说明举办课本剧的目的：提升英语口语，鼓励内向同学大胆开口展示自己；
⑵讲述筹备全过程：研读课文、分配角色，课后反复打磨台词、刻苦排练；
⑶描述舞台演出，全班默契配合，顺利在教室舞台完成课本剧表演；
⑷抒发内心感受，为团队合作感到自豪，认定这次经历难忘且收获满满。
3. 可用素材
⑴词汇：
improve oral English 提升英语口语；encourage sb. to speak bravely 鼓励某人大胆表达；read the text carefully 仔细研读课文；play different roles 扮演不同角色；practice lines 练习台词；put on the play 上演剧目；on the stage 在舞台上；an unforgettable experience 一段难忘的经历
⑵句式：
This meaningful activity helps us become more confident in speaking English.
这场有意义的活动让我们说英语更加自信。
All the hard practice made our wonderful show possible in the end.
所有辛苦排练最终成就了我们精彩的演出。
4. 注意事项
⑴三大图示要点缺一不可，排练、演出动作用一般过去时，词数稳定在80-100 词，多用过渡词串联情节；
⑵文章面向班级同学，语言简洁自然，全程不出现真实姓名、学校，合理增加细节避免行文空洞。
满分作文展示1
Hello everyone,
I’m Li Hua. Today I’d like to share our class textbook play with you.
We held this activity to improve our oral English and encourage shy classmates to speak up. Before the show, we read the textbook text, chose our own roles and practiced lines every day. Finally, we put on the play smoothly on our classroom stage with great teamwork.
After the performance, warm applause filled the room. I felt really proud of our group. This activity is unforgettable. It builds my confidence and teaches me the value of teamwork.
亮点评析
①speak up、warm applause、build confidence 等校园活动词块地道贴切；
②Before the show、Finally 清晰划分时间线，叙事逻辑清晰有条理；
③长短句搭配，宾语从句与简单句交错，句式不单调；
④语言口语化，贴合课堂现场分享场景，代入感强。
满分揭秘
本文完整覆盖活动目的、筹备经历、内心感受三大要点，词数精准符合80~100词要求。时态区分准确，排练演出用一般过去时，感悟用一般现在时，无语法拼写错误。以时间顺序推进叙事，过渡自然流畅，适度拓展团队合作细节丰富内容。全文无真实个人信息，情感真挚，结构完整清晰，语言简洁易懂，是适配初三考场的标准高分记叙文。
满分作文展示2
Dear classmates,
I’m Li Hua. Let me talk about our wonderful English textbook play.
Our teacher organized it to make our English better and push us to show ourselves. We spent lots of spare time preparing: we studied the scripts, picked proper roles and practiced again and again. We successfully put on the play on the small stage.
Seeing our classmates cheer for us, a strong sense of pride came to me. This experience is unforgettable. Not only did I make progress in English, but I also learned to cooperate with partners.
亮点评析
①a strong sense of pride、cooperate with partners 高级短语提升文采；
②运用 Not only did I… 倒装句式，作为中考加分亮点；
③冒号细化筹备内容，细节充实，内容饱满不空洞；
④结尾升华收获，点明英语进步与团队协作双重成长，立意深刻。
满分揭秘
全篇完整包含题干全部核心信息，选材贴合班级课本剧活动，细节拓展合理。时态规范无误，倒装复合句亮眼出彩，词汇丰富不重复。行文连贯紧凑，严格控制80~100词，遵守不透露真实信息的写作要求。整体语气真诚友好，契合课堂分享语境，叙事与感悟结合紧密，句式多变有层次，完全达到中考书面表达高分标准。
◆参考范文
Hello everyone.
Today I’d like to share our class textbook play with you.
Last month our class prepared a short English play for the school show. Ourteacher encouraged us to take part to improve our spoken English. We spentlots of free time practicing every day. I memorized my text and acted my rolecarefully.
On the day of the show, we put on the play on the bright stage. When wefinished, all the students cheered for us. I felt so proud of myself. Thisexperience is unforgettable for me. It taught me that hard work always bringsgood results.
