今天是中考最后一天了，最后一门是英语，再给同学们加个餐，详细拆解一篇中考范文
改卷老师一看就觉得你写的很高级，第一印象就很好，需要把句式写漂亮，尽量不用简单句
（一）开头高级句型（替换I think / I know）
1. As far as I am concerned, … 在我看来……
2. There is no doubt that … 毫无疑问……
3. It is widely believed that … 人们普遍认为……
4. Nowadays, more and more people realize that… 如今越来越多人意识到……
（二）中间递进/对比/因果高分句
1. Not only can we…, but also we can… 我们不仅能……还能……（倒装，加分重磅）
2. The more…, the better… 越……就越好
3. Thanks to…, we can make great progress. 多亏……我们取得巨大进步
4. Compared with…, …is much more meaningful. 和……相比，……更有意义
5. It’s necessary for us to do… 我们有必要做……（形式主语，避开简单主谓）
（三）观点升华/建议句型
1. It’s high time that we took action to… 我们是时候行动起来去……
2. We are supposed to… instead of… 我们应该……而不是……
3. Only in this way can we… 只有这样我们才能……（倒装，高分亮点）
（四）结尾升华句型
1. In short, every small effort counts. 总之，每一份微小努力都很重要
2. I firmly believe that our life will become brighter. 我坚信我们的生活会更美好
范文
Nowadays, there is no doubt that reading plays an important role in our daily life.
As far as I am concerned, reading is the best way to relax ourselves. Not only can it open our eyes to the whole world, but also it helps us develop good thinking habits.
The more books we read, the richer knowledge we will get. Compared with short videos, classic books can bring us deeper feelings. It’s necessary for us to spend half an hour reading every day.
Only in this way can we make great progress. It’s high time that we put down our phones and pick up books.
In short, every reading effort counts. I firmly believe reading will make us better people.
如今，毫无疑问，阅读在我们的日常生活中占据着重要地位
在我看来，阅读是放松自我的最佳方式。它不仅能开阔我们的眼界，看遍大千世界，还能帮助我们养成良好的思考习惯
我们读的书越多，掌握的知识就越丰富。和短视频相比，经典书籍能带给我们更深层的感悟。我们每天抽出半小时阅读是很有必要的
只有这样，我们才能取得巨大进步。我们是时候放下手机，拿起书本了
总而言之，每一次阅读的付出都意义非凡。我坚信，阅读终将成就更好的我们
逐句对照拆解
第1句：Nowadays, there is no doubt that reading plays an important role in our daily life.
1. 高分句型：There is no doubt that + 从句（高级主语从句）
2. 普通低分替换：I think reading is very important.
3. 得分亮点：抛弃基础I think，句式结构复杂，开篇直接拉高档次
第2句：As far as I am concerned, reading is the best way to relax ourselves.
1. 高分句型：As far as I am concerned（高级观点引入短语）
2. 普通低分：In my opinion, reading can help us relax.
3. 得分亮点：书面正式表达，阅卷一眼加分
第3句：Not only can it open our eyes to the whole world, but also it helps us develop good thinking habits.
1. 高分句型：Not only 倒装句（中考顶级加分语法，必考高分点）
2. 普通低分：Reading can open our eyes and help us think well.
3. 得分亮点：否定词放句首倒装，语法难度拉开差距，作文档次直接升一档
第4句：The more books we read, the richer knowledge we will get.
1. 高分句型：the+比较级，the+比较级 固定高级句式
2. 普通低分：If we read more books, we can learn more things.
3. 得分亮点：简洁优美，阅卷老师非常喜欢，简短有力
第5句：Compared with short videos, classic books can bring us deeper feelings.
1. 高分句型：Compared with… 分词作状语
2. 普通低分：Short videos are not as good as books.
3. 得分亮点：分词开头，句式多样，避免通篇主谓简单句
第6句：It’s necessary for us to spend half an hour reading every day.
1. 高分句型：It is +形容词+for sb. to do 形式主语
2. 普通低分：We need to read for 30 minutes every day.
3. 得分亮点：避免主语重复，句式结构丰富
第7句：Only in this way can we make great progress.
1. 高分句型：Only+状语放句首倒装（第二处倒装，双重加分）
2. 普通低分：We can improve ourselves in this way.
3. 得分亮点：全篇两处倒装，语法亮点充足，冲刺满分关键
第8句：It’s high time that we put down our phones and pick up books.
1. 高分句型：It’s high time that… 是时候做某事（高级建议句型）
2. 普通低分：We should stop playing phones and read books.
3. 得分亮点：替代烂大街should，表达更地道高级
结尾句：In short, every reading effort counts. I firmly believe reading will make us better people.
1. 高分短语：In short（总之）、I firmly believe that（我坚信）
2. 普通低分：All in all, reading is good for us.
3. 得分亮点：结尾升华，情感饱满，收尾完整
写作文的时候孩子们容易硬写自己脑子里的想法，我们脑子里呈现出来的东西，有时候会出现不会写的单词，还有一些同学就一个单词一个单词按汉语的意思堆起来，阅卷老师最不喜欢的就是没有章法，胡乱堆砌的文章
今天考试的作文题目无论是什么题材，你都可以套用这些高分句型，写的时候一定想着怎么把高分句式套进去，不用多4-5句就够了，孩子们加油✊✊✊
