一、命题情境
某英文网站举办「谢谢你，曾经的自己」主题征文，假设李华投稿，围绕一次成长经历写作：①描述具体往事；②说明感谢过去自己的原因，必须选用提示词：encourage、confident、brave、success、improve，词数≥120 词，开头已给出不计入词数，禁止出现真实校名、人名、地名。
二、阅卷满分心理预期
- 双要点完整落地
完整交代成长事例 + 感恩原因，逻辑闭环；提示词汇自然嵌入文中，不生硬堆砌。 - 选材贴合初中生活
演讲、体育赛事、薄弱学科提分等校园经历，细节真实接地气。 - 情感真挚递进
从前胆怯受挫→自我鼓励坚持→收获进步 / 成功→心怀感恩，情感脉络清晰。 - 语言达标
句式丰富，定语从句、连接词多样，时态准确，符合英文征文温情文风。 - 立意正向
落脚自我坚持、直面困难、收获成长，传递积极的成长价值观。
三、两篇高分范文
范文一（稳妥标准版：校园英语演讲比赛）
Looking back on the past three years, there’s a time when I truly wanted to thank myself.
I used to be too shy to speak in public. Last term, I decided to take part in the English speech competition. Every day after school, I kept practicing and tried to encourage myself to be brave whenever I felt nervous. Gradually, I became more confident and my oral English improved greatly. Finally, I got the third prize and achieved small success.
I thank myself because I didn’t give up at the hardest moment. This experience teaches me that persistence can help us beat weaknesses and grow into better persons.
范文二（语言拔高版：数学弱项逆袭）
Looking back on the past three years, there’s a time when I truly wanted to thank myself.
I once fell far behind in math and nearly lost heart. Instead of giving up, I chose to encourage myself to be brave to face mistakes. I made a daily learning plan, sorted error notebooks and asked teachers for advice regularly. Little by little, my grades improved step by step, and I gained unexpected success in the final exam.
I’m thankful to my past self for sticking to efforts. It makes me confident to meet all challenges in my future study and life.
四、通用高分句型 + 过渡词整理
1. 开篇固定句（题干已给）
Looking back on the past three years, there’s a time when I truly wanted to thank myself.
2. 经历叙事句型
I used to be weak/shy in..., but I decided to make a change. I kept doing... and tried to encourage myself to be brave. Gradually/Little by little, I improved a lot and got success in the end.
3. 感恩收尾句型
I thank myself because I never gave up when facing difficulties. This experience makes me more confident to face future challenges.
高频过渡词
过程：Gradually, Little by little, Every day 转折：Instead of, But 总结：Finally, In the end
套用简易模板
Looking back on the past three years, there’s a time when I truly wanted to thank myself.I once ______（困境）. I kept encouraging myself to be brave and kept practicing every day. Slowly I improved and gained success.I’m thankful to past me for my persistence, which makes me confident for future challenges.
