中考作文·逐段突破 | 第12期:学习+健康,中考最常考的两大话题

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中考作文·逐段突破 | 第12期:学习+健康,中考最常考的两大话题

前情回顾:

第1-11期:已发(见往期汇总)

今天第12期(最后两期合辑),咱们搞定学习生活和健康生活类作文!

① 学习生活和健康生活是中考作文的两大常客。

  • 学习生活类:
“我的学习方法”
“如何提高英语成绩”
“一次考试失败的经历与反思”
“初中三年最大的收获”
  • 健康生活类:
“如何保持健康”
“我的健康生活习惯”
“运动对我的影响”
“健康饮食的重要性”
核心规律:不管写什么,都要写清楚——
学习生活:问题 + 方法 + 结果 + 感悟
健康生活:习惯 + 好处 + 呼吁
今天两个模板,帮娃搞定这两大类作文!

② 中考真题长这样

  1. 学习生活·真题(2024·上海中考模拟)
初中三年,你一定积累了不少学习经验。请你写一篇短文,分享你的学习方法,并说明这些方法对你的帮助。
2. 健康生活·真题(2024·杭州中考模拟)
健康的生活方式对中学生很重要。请你写一篇短文,分享你的健康生活习惯,并说明这些习惯对你的好处。

③ 学习生活篇:逐段拆解

【第一段:开头】—— 引出话题
As a student, I have learned that ________ (道理). Today, I want to share my experience about ________ (话题).
👉 写出来就是:
As a student, I have learned that hard work pays off. Today, I want to share my experience about how I improved my English.
【第二段:正文】—— 问题 + 方法 + 结果
At first, I had difficulty in ________ (问题). I felt ________ (感受).
Then, I decided to ________ (方法1). Also, I ________ (方法2).
Thanks to these methods, I ________ (结果).
👉 写出来就是:
At first, I had difficulty in remembering English words. I felt frustrated.
Then, I decided to read English every morning. Also, I made word cards.
Thanks to these methods, I can remember more than 50 words a week.
【第三段:结尾】—— 感悟 + 鼓励
From this experience, I learned that ________ (道理). I hope my experience can encourage you to ________ (鼓励).
👉 写出来就是:
From this experience, I learned that failure is not the end. I hope my experience can encourage you to never give up.

④ 健康生活篇:逐段拆解

【第一段:开头】—— 引出话题
Health is very important for everyone, especially for us students. Today, I want to share my ideas about ________ (话题).
👉 写出来就是:
Health is very important for everyone, especially for us students. Today, I want to share my ideas about how to keep a healthy lifestyle.
【第二段:正文】—— 做法 + 好处(3点)
First, I ________ (做法1). This helps me ________ (好处1).
Second, I ________ (做法2). Thanks to this, I ________ (好处2).
Also, I ________ (做法3). It makes me feel ________ (好处3).
👉 写出来就是:
First, I eat vegetables and fruit every day. This helps me stay energetic.
Second, I run for 30 minutes every morning. Thanks to this, I seldom get sick.
Also, I get enough sleep — at least 8 hours a night. It makes me feel fresh and focused.
【第三段:结尾】—— 总结 + 呼吁
In a word, a healthy lifestyle brings us ________ (总结). I hope everyone can ________ (呼吁).
👉 写出来就是:
In a word, a healthy lifestyle brings us a strong body and a happy mind. I hope everyone can develop good habits.

⑤ 高分短语库

中考作文·逐段突破 | 第12期:学习+健康,中考最常考的两大话题-第1张图片-四季读书网学习类
中考作文·逐段突破 | 第12期:学习+健康,中考最常考的两大话题-第2张图片-四季读书网健康生活类

⑥ 逻辑连词

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⑦ 满分范文(直接背诵)

【学习生活篇·范文】
题目:How I improved my English
As a student, I have learned that hard work pays off. Today, I want to share my experience about how I improved my English.
At first, I had difficulty in remembering English words. I felt frustrated and wanted to give up.
Then, I decided to read English every morning for 20 minutes. Also, I made word cards and reviewed them before bed. I asked my teacher for help when I had questions.
Thanks to these methods, I can remember more than 50 words a week and my grades have improved a lot.
From this experience, I learned that failure is not the end. I hope my experience can encourage you to never give up.
【健康生活篇·范文】
题目:How to keep a healthy lifestyle
Health is very important for everyone, especially for us students. Today, I want to share my ideas about how to keep a healthy lifestyle.
First, I eat a balanced diet. I eat more vegetables and fruit every day and try to avoid junk food. This helps me stay energetic.
Second, I do exercise regularly. I run for 30 minutes every morning. Thanks to this, I seldom get sick and feel strong.
Also, I get enough sleep — at least 8 hours a night. I go to bed before 10 p.m. It makes me feel fresh and focused in class.
In a word, a healthy lifestyle brings us a strong body and a happy mind. I hope everyone can develop good habits from now on.

本期小结

✅ 2套填空模板 | 学习生活+健康生活,各一套
✅ 24个高分短语 | 每类12个,背了就能用
✅ 5个逻辑连词 | 让文章有条有理
✅ 2篇满分范文 | 直接背诵,考场直接套

今日小作业

任选一题完成作文,写完加我微信发给我,我来批改!
学习生活类:分享你的一次学习经历(成功或失败都可以)
健康生活类:介绍你的一个健康习惯以及它对你的好处
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学习生活模板:
As a student, I have learned that ________. Today, I want to share my experience about ________.
At first, I had difficulty in ________. I felt ________.
Then, I decided to ________. Also, I ________.
Thanks to these methods, I ________.
From this experience, I learned that ________. I hope my experience can encourage you to ________.
健康生活模板:
Health is very important for everyone, especially for us students. Today, I want to share my ideas about ________.
First, I ________. This helps me ________.
Second, I ________. Thanks to this, I ________.
Also, I ________. It makes me feel ________.
In a word, a healthy lifestyle brings us ________. I hope everyone can ________.
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