雅思写作|真题详细拆解,10分钟内用4级词汇搭出6.5分文章框架(含视频讲解)

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雅思写作|真题详细拆解,10分钟内用4级词汇搭出6.5分文章框架(含视频讲解)

平时做练习时可以很好完成写作,但是上了考场由于紧张或者时间限制,而“发挥失常”,这是很多同学遇到的问题。

接下来我会用一道真题,分三期,详细地带着大家拆解考场思路。希望帮助同学们不仅简单、高效地备考,还能稳定地发挥。

我们今天要讲的是:考试前 10 分钟,搭好基本 6.5 分文章框架

(为了方便大家理解写作思路的推进,这个系列会分为视频和文字两个版本)

视频版:

文字版:

我们这个板块的核心内容,其实就是先写文章中只需要改写而不需要构思的部分

题目:Some people think that hosting a major international sporting event may bring some benefits to that country, while others think it has only disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

这是一道关于国际大型体育赛事举办的话题,一些人认为它会带来好处;但是另一些人认为它只会带来坏处

读完题目,其实我们的开头段,就已经写出来了。

开头段改写=共同话题+双方观点

People have different views about whether hosting major international sporting events is beneficial for a country. While some argue that these events create only problems rather than advantages, others believe they can bring significant economic and social benefits if they are managed properly.

除了固定的内容(黑色字体)以外,我们只需要去完成对题目“共同话题+双方观点(红色蓝色)”的改写,就可以构成我们的开头段了。

接下来写中间两个主体段各自段首那句话(topic sentence),依然是双方观点的改写。考虑到 B 方观点有 only,倾向于被否定。所以我们先写 B 方观点TS

B-1:TS- Hosting large sporting events may cause several potential problems.

然后 A 方观点的 TS

B-2:TS-A successful sporting event can generate considerable benefits for the host country.

结尾段,这个题目由于 B 方有 only 存在,过于绝对,所以我们倾向于选赞成 A 方观点

In conclusion, although hosting major sports events may create (problems), I disagree with the view that they bring only disadvantages because they can also produce important (benefits).

结尾段我们也就是做了一个非常简单的改写。这里出现的problems以及benefits,我们先打一个括号放在那儿。因为我还没有去构思中间两个段可能写到的problem和benefits的观点是什么。所以,也不会花时间在结尾段就去考虑该用什么样的单词。我们可以先把中间段写完了,最后再来替换掉这两个基本的词汇。

到目前为止,我们完成了这个6.5分文章框架最重要的4个基本部分。但是完全没有构思观点,也没有编造句子,只是在做改写。所以如果是对于语言基础稍微好一点的同学,其实在5分钟之内完成是没有太大难度的。

接下来的时间,我们想一下好处和坏处的观点分别会是什么:

举办大型体育赛事带来的problem,最容易被想到的应该就是经济的负担和资源的浪费

Idea-1:经济-enormous financial investment

Idea-2:浪费-a serious waste of resources

关于举办这样一些体育赛事带来的好处,我觉得比较容易谈到的依然是类似于经济或者是社会这样一些比较宏观的方面

Idea-1:经济-bring substantial revenue to the local economy

Idea-2:社会-a valuable opportunity to promote their history, culture, scenery and lifestyle

段落内部观点部分,使用到的词汇依然还是4级水平,不过有些修饰词汇明显是有“色彩”的

Problem的段落里出现的:serious(负向)

Benefits 的段落里出现的:successful,substantial,valuable(正向)

这些小细节虽然没有太大的难度,但是如果我们可以想到的话,那对于我们的语言逻辑的体现和得分都是非常有帮助的。

总结

People have different views about whether hosting major international sporting events is beneficial for a country. While some argue that these events create only problems rather than advantages, others believe they can bring significant economic and social benefits if they are managed properly.

Hosting large sporting events may cause several potential problems.

Idea-1:经济-enormous financial investment

Idea-2:浪费-a serious waste of resources

A successful sporting event can generate considerable benefits for the host country.

Idea-1:经济-bring substantial revenue to the local economy

Idea-2:社会-a valuable opportunity to promote their history, culture, scenery and lifestyle

In conclusion, although hosting major sports events may create (problems), I disagree with the view that they bring only disadvantages because they can also produce important (benefits).

到此为止,我们大概花10分钟左右的时间就可以把整个文章的基本框架搭建出来。如果我们可以很熟练的完成这个步骤的话,那我们在考场上的表现就是非常游刃有余,而且有底气。

下节课,我会详细的给大家去讲第一个主体段,该如何基于我们现有的基本词汇去写出完整的7分段落。

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