本系列共12期,每期一个中考高频主题,逐段拆解模板+短语+连词+范文,手把手教会孩子写作文。
前情回顾:
第1期:万能模板(三步法+数学公式)
第2期:高频话题词汇库
第3期:低分vs高分作文,差距就3点
第4期:写人篇
第5期:写事篇
今天第6期,咱们搞定建议信类作文!
建议信类作文在中考中常见的题目有:
你的朋友学习压力大,请给他写封信提建议
朋友和父母吵架了,你怎么劝他?
同学英语成绩不好,请你分享学习方法
如何保持健康?请给你的笔友写一封信
核心规律:不管怎么出题,都要写清楚——
对方有什么问题?(先共情,别上来就提建议)
你有什么建议?(2-3条,每条配理由)
你希望对方怎么做?(鼓励+祝福)
今天一个模板,帮娃写出有温度、有条理的建议信!
① 中考真题长这样(一眼看懂规律)
(2023年某市中考)你的朋友李明最近学习压力很大,请你给他写一封信,提一些缓解压力的建议。
(2022年某市中考)你的笔友Tom和父母吵架了,他很苦恼。请你写一封信安慰他,并给出你的建议。
不管题目怎么变,都要写:共情 + 建议(2-3条) + 理由 + 鼓励
② 逐段拆解:填空式模板(直接套!)
【第一段:开头】—— 问候 + 共情(先理解对方,别上来就提建议)
Dear ________,
I'm sorry to hear that ________ (对方的问题). I really understand how you feel.
👉 娃只需填:对方名字 + 问题是什么
写出来就是:
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you are under a lot of pressure these days. I really understand how you feel.
【第二段:正文】—— 3个建议 + 每个建议配一个理由
First, I think you should ________ (建议1). Because ________ (理由1).
Second, why not ________ (建议2)? That way, ________ (理由2).
Finally, it's a good idea to ________ (建议3). This can help you ________ (理由3).
👉 娃只需填:3个建议 + 3个理由
写出来就是:
First, I think you should take a break when you feel tired. Because resting can help you study better.
Second, why not talk to your parents or friends? That way, you won’t feel alone.
Finally, it's a good idea to do some exercise every day. This can help you relax and stay healthy.
【第三段:结尾】—— 鼓励 + 祝福 + 邀请回信
I hope you can try my suggestions. Believe in yourself — you are not alone.Please write to me soon and let me know how things go.
Yours
________
👉 娃只需填:自己的名字
写出来就是:
I hope you can try my suggestions. Believe in yourself — you are not alone. Please write to me soon and let me know how things go.
Yours,
Li Hua
③ 高分短语库(建议信篇·背这12个就够了)

④ 逻辑连词(让建议有条理)

⑤ 练手范文(带填空,孩子直接做)
题目:你的朋友李明最近学习压力很大,请你给他写一封信,提一些缓解压力的建议。
Dear Li Ming,
I’m sorry to hear that ________ (对方的问题). I really understand how you feel.
First, I think you should ________ (建议1). Because ________ (理由1).
Second, why not ________ (建议2)? That way, ________ (理由2).
Finally, it's a good idea to ________ (建议3). This can help you ________ (理由3).
I hope you can try my suggestions. Believe in yourself — you are not alone. Please write to me soon and let me know how things go.
Yours,
_______
👉 参考答案(先让娃做,再看答案):
Dear Li Ming,
I’m sorry to hear that you are under a lot of pressure these days. I really understand how you feel.
First, I think you should take a break when you feel tired. Because resting can help you study better.
Second, why not talk to your parents or friends? That way, you won't feel alone.
Finally, it’s a good idea to do some exercise every day. This can help you relax and stay healthy.
I hope you can try my suggestions. Believe in yourself — you are not alone. Please write to me soon and let me know how things go.
Yours,
Li Hua
⑥ 满分范文(无填空,直接背诵)
题目:你的笔友Tom和父母吵架了,他很苦恼。请你写一封信安慰他,并给出你的建议。
Dear Tom,
I'm sorry to hear that you argued with your parents. I really understand how you feel. It happens to everyone.
First, I think you should calm down first. Because when you are angry, it’s hard to talk nicely.
Second, why not say sorry to your parents? That way, they will see that you are trying to fix things.
Finally, it's a good idea to talk to them about your feelings. This can help you understand each other better.
I hope you can try my suggestions. Believe in yourself — you are not alone. Your parents love you. Please write to me soon and let me know how things go.
Yours,
Li Hua
本期小结(学完立刻能用)
✅ 1套填空模板 | 共情→3个建议→鼓励,直接往里填
✅ 12个高分短语 | 背了就能用在建议信里
✅ 5个逻辑连词 | First/Second/Finally,让建议有条理
✅ 2篇完整范文 | 一篇带填空练手,一篇直接背
下期预告
第7期:邀请信篇(邀请参加活动), 敬请关注!
今日小作业
用今天的模板,写一篇建议信:你的同学英语成绩不好,请你给他写一封信,分享学习方法。
写完发评论区,我来逐一点评!
万能模板再发一遍,方便复制:
Dear ________,
I’m sorry to hear that ________. I really understand how you feel.
First, I think you should ________. Because ________.
Second, why not ________? That way, ________.
Finally, it's a good idea to ________. This can help you ________.
I hope you can try my suggestions. Believe in yourself — you are not alone. Please write to me soon and let me know how things go.
Yours,
________
