

本次写作共有三个话题
教师对学生的影响
通过"中国梦"实现自我价值
大学生应对挑战的准备

四六级作文评分标准

一、评分原则

评分标准
✔满分15分,分为五个档:
14分档(13-15分)
11分档(10-12分)
8分档(7-9分)
5分档(4-6分)
2分档(1-3分)

2 分——条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。
5 分——基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。
8 分——基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。
11 分——切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。
14 分——切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。
注:白卷,作文与题目毫不相关,或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给 0 分。
5. 字数不够 120 个,应酌情扣分,具体标准:
累计字数在 110~119 之间,扣 1 分;
累计字数在 100~109 之间,扣 2 分;
累计字数在 90~99 之间,扣 3 分;
累计字数在 80~89 之间,扣 4 分;
累计字数在 70~79 之间,扣 7 分;
累计字数<69,扣 9 分。
注:如题目给出主题句,祈使句,结束句,均不得计入所写字数;
只写一段者:0-4 分;只写两段者:0-9 分(指规定三段的作文)。
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话题一

题目
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay that begins with the sentence “While striving for the Chinese Dream, young people enjoy more opportunities to realize their self-worth." You can make comments,cite examples or use your personal experience to develop your essay. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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The details will be explained in this paragraph. First, with innovation-driven development as a national priority, numerous emerging industries have enriched young people’s career options. A growing number of ambitious young talents are no longer confined to traditional industries but instead devote themselves to emerging domains such as artificial intelligence, green energy, and cloud computing, thereby achieving professional fulfillment while pursuing the Chinese Dream. Second, the country’s strong support for overcoming poverty has opened up new spaces for young people to realize their own value. Many young people volunteer to work in poor areas, dedicating themselves to fields such as education, healthcare and infrastructure. In this way, they not only bring changes to these underdeveloped areas but also realize their self-value.
In conclusion, the pursuit of the Chinese Dream brings abundant opportunities for young people. By grasping opportunities, they can achieve their self-worth and contribute to national progress.
在追寻中国梦的过程中,年轻人有更多机会实现自我价值。因此,年轻人应当抓住这些机会,将个人抱负融入国家发展之中。
具体内容将在本段中进行说明。首先,以创新驱动发展作为国家战略重点,众多新兴产业让年轻人有了更多职业选择。越来越多有抱负的年轻人不再局限于传统行业,而是投身于诸如人工智能、绿色能源和云计算等新兴领域,从而在追寻中国梦的同时获得职业成就感。其次,国家对脱贫的大力支持为年轻人实现自身价值开辟了新的空间。许多年轻人自愿到贫困地区工作,投身于教育、医疗和基础设施等领域。这样一来,他们不仅为这些欠发达地区带来了变化,也实现了自我价值。
总之,追寻中国梦为年轻人带来了众多机遇。抓住这些机遇,他们便能够实现自我价值,并为国家发展做出贡献。
精彩句式
①Therefore, young people should seize the opportunities to integrate personal aspirations into the national development.
因此,年轻人应当抓住这些机会,将个人抱负融入国家发展之中。
②Second, the country’s strong support for overcoming poverty has opened up new spaces for young people to realize their own value.
其次,国家对脱贫的大力支持为年轻人实现自身价值开辟了新的空间。
③In conclusion, the pursuit of the Chinese Dream brings abundant opportunities for young people.
总之,追寻中国梦为年轻人带来了众多机遇。
亮点词汇
integrate...into... 把……融入……
aspirations n. 抱负(通常为复数形式)
priority n. 优先事项
ambitious adj. 有抱负的
be confined to... 局限于……
devote oneself to... 投身于……
domain n. 领域
artificial intelligence 人工智能
cloud computing 云计算
fulfillment n. 成就感
overcome poverty 脱贫
dedicate oneself to... 投身于……
healthcare n. 医疗
infrastructure n. 基础设施
underdeveloped adj. 欠发达的
self-value n. 自我价值
abundant adj. 大量的
grasp v. 抓住
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“While striving for the Chinese Dream, young people enjoy more opportunities to realize their self-worth." The integration of personal development and national needs is the key to achieving lasting value.
On the one hand, personal aspirations should be aligned with national development needs. When individuals devote themselves to fields that the country urgently needs, they can exert their greatest potential. For instance, many young scientific researchers have dedicated themselves to the research and development of chips and core technologies, making important contributions to China's technological independence while realizing their own academic dreams. On the other hand, national development provides broader opportunities for personal growth. The advancement of rural revitalization has created a platform for college students to start businesses in rural areas, allowing them to apply their professional knowledge to help farmers increase income and achieve self-worth in serving society.
In short, the realization of the Chinese Dream and personal value are interdependent. Young people should combine their professional strengths with national needs, and strive for national rejuvenation to realize their own more profound and lasting self-worth.

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话题2

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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay that begins with the sentence“It is believed that teachers can exert a profound influence on their,' students' academic” pursuit and personal development.” You can make comments,cite examples or use your personal experience to develop your essay. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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Teachers play a pivotal role in the growth of every student. Their influence extends far beyond the classroom walls, shaping not only our academic achievements but also our personalities.
教师在每个学生的成长过程中都扮演着关键角色。他们的影响远远超出了教室的范围,不仅塑造着我们的学业成绩,也塑造着我们的个性。
First of all, teachers are the igniters of our wisdom. They do more than just impart knowledge; they cultivate our ability to think independently. A good teacher can spark a student's curiosity and encourage them to explore the unknown, laying a solid foundation for their future academic pursuits.
首先,教师是我们智慧的点燃者。他们所做的不仅仅是传授知识,还培养我们独立思考的能力。一位好老师能够激发学生的好奇心,鼓励他们探索未知,为他们未来的学术追求奠定坚实的基础。
Furthermore, teachers serve as inspiring role models. Students often look up to their teachers and imitate their behavior. A teacher’s dedication, patience, and integrity can subtly mold a student’s character and values. For instance, a supportive teacher can help a student build self-confidence when facing failure.
此外,教师还是鼓舞人心的榜样。学生们常常仰慕自己的老师并模仿他们的行为。教师的敬业、耐心和正直能够潜移默化地塑造学生的品格和价值观。例如,一位给予支持的老师能帮助学生在面对失败时建立自信。
In summary, teachers act as guiding lights in our lives. They educate our minds and shape our souls. Therefore, we should always hold deep respect and gratitude for them.
总之,教师是我们生活中的指路明灯。他们启迪我们的思想,塑造我们的灵魂。因此,我们应该始终对他们怀有深深的敬意和感激之情。
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Teachers are the guides for students' growth, and their influence extends far beyond academic pursuits to personal development.

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话题3

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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay that begins with the sentence “Living in an increasingly competitive world, college students should better prepare themselves to confront various challenges.” You can make comments, cite examples or use your personal experiences to develop your essay. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
You should copy the sentence given in quotes at the beginning of your essay.
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Academic prowess alone is no longer sufficient to distinguish oneself. Beyond accumulation of knowledge, students must develop transferable competencies—critical thinking, effective communication, and the ability to adapt knowledge to unfamiliar terrain. Those who can translate theory into practice, and respond flexibly to problems, are far better positioned to navigate an environment defined by uncertainty.
In short, college is not just a place to earn a degree but a training ground for life. By sharpening both their expertise and their grit, students can step into the future with confidence, ready to take on any challenge that comes their way.
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University life is not always smooth sailing. Along with freedom and opportunities, we are inevitably faced with various challenges, such as academic burdens, interpersonal conflicts, and employment anxiety. The question is not whether we will face them, but how we deal with them.
大学生活并非总是一帆风顺。伴随着自由与机遇,我们不可避免地会面临各种挑战,比如学业负担、人际冲突和就业焦虑。问题不在于我们是否会遇到这些挑战,而在于我们如何应对它们。
First and foremost, maintaining a positive mindset is essential. We should regard challenges not as stumbling blocks, but as stepping stones to success. Instead of complaining or escaping, we need to believe that difficulties are temporary and that we have the potential to overcome them.
首先,保持积极的心态至关重要。我们不应将挑战视为绊脚石,而应将其看作成功的垫脚石。我们不应抱怨或逃避,而要相信困难是暂时的,并且我们有能力克服它们。
In addition, taking concrete actions is crucial. When encountering problems, we should analyze the causes calmly and make a practical plan. It is also wise to seek help from professors or classmates rather than fighting a lonely battle. Furthermore, improving our time management skills can help us handle pressure more efficiently.
此外,采取切实行动也很关键。遇到问题时,我们应冷静分析原因,并制定切实可行的计划。向教授或同学寻求帮助也是明智之举,而不是孤军奋战。再者,提高时间管理能力有助于我们更高效地应对压力。
In summary, challenges are catalysts for personal growth. With an optimistic attitude and persistent efforts, we can conquer any difficulty and become stronger individuals.
总之,挑战是个人成长的催化剂。凭借乐观的态度和坚持不懈的努力,我们能够克服任何困难,成为更强大的人。

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