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试题原题

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2026届 浙江省县域联盟

2026年5月高考模拟考

英语试题

第四部分 写作(共两节,满分40分)

第二节(满分25分)

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Elvis was a dog with a big personality. If there was a chance to be silly, he would take it without hesitation. He loved hiding toys, spinning in dizzy circles beneath the old oak tree while chasing squirrels, and running away just far enough to make people chase him. Whenever he put on one of his little performances, Mrs. Carter, the lady next door, would lean over the fence, watching the naughty dog and shaking her head. Yet all it took to turn this little rebel into a perfect gentleman was a spoonful of peanut butter or his old tennis ball.

Watching his playful nature every day, his owner Mikaela thought it might be fun to capture the world from Elvis’s point of view. So one day she bought a small GoPro camera (运动相机) and a special harness that a dog could wear. She imagined Elvis running happily while the camera recorded his little adventures.

Mikaela was excited to try it, but Elvis turned out to be even more excited. On a sunny afternoon, golden light spilled across the yard, catching the edges of the bushes. The old oak tree cast shifting shadows on the grass, and a row of wildflowers swayed gently by the fence. Mikaela took Elvis outside to play and brought out the new camera. The moment Elvis saw the shiny little device, his eyes sparkled. Mikaela had barely held it out before Elvis snatched it away as quickly as a shark grabbing its food. “Oh no, not again!” Mrs. Carter called out from behind the fence.

Before Mikaela could react, Elvis was racing across the yard with the GoPro in his mouth. “Hey! Elvis!” Mikaela shouted, running after him. But the more she chased him, the faster he ran. And the GoPro just stayed on the whole time!

注意:

(1)续写词数应为150个左右;

(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。

Mikaela chased after him, worried a lot. ____________________

When Mikaela finally got the camera, she quickly checked it. ___________________________________

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写作分析 & 下水作文

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写作分析

●写作分析

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1. 前文大意:
狗狗Elvis调皮活泼,主人Mikaela想用GoPro相机记录它的视角。但Elvis抢走相机满院飞奔,相机一直开着。Mikaela担心地追赶,邻居Mrs. Carter在一旁观望。故事围绕一场意外的“狗视角”拍摄展开,充满趣味与悬念。......

2. 前文分析:

①主题: 人与宠物间的意外互动,展现从不同视角(狗眼)发现生活之趣,暗含理解、陪伴与爱

②人物:

Elvis:个性鲜明、调皮贪玩,“大 personality”,行为夸张(如鲨鱼夺食般抢相机),是推动情节的核心

Mikaela:富有创意、关爱宠物,但面对Elvis的淘气显得有些无奈和焦急

Mrs. Carter:邻居,一句“Oh no, not again!”侧面烘托Elvis的“前科”

③情节:

起因(想拍狗视角)→ 发展(狗抢相机逃跑)→ 高潮与结局(待续写:追赶与查看录像)

④语言风格:

生动形象,拟人化(“big personality”“shark grabbing its food”),画面感强(阳光、橡树、野花等景物描写),节奏明快,富有趣味

3. 续写思路:

第一段(Mikaela chased after him, worried a lot.)

【承上启下】Mikaela的反应

【过渡拓展】两者互动

【情节推进】因为什么原因让Elvis停下来

第二段(When Mikaela finally got the camera, she quickly checked it.)

【承上启下】相机还好吗

【过渡拓展】发觉相机没问题,接下去做了什么

【主题升华】意外的“互动”映射出理解、陪伴与爱的主题

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下水作文

●下水作文

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   Mikaela chased after him, worried a lot. Her heart pounded as Elvis zigzagged across the lawn, the GoPro still on in his mouth. So naughty was he that he dashed under the old oak tree, and then leaped over the wildflowers. “Elvis, stop!” she yelled, but he only wagged his tail, enjoying his great game. Mrs. Carter chuckled from the fence, pointing to the corner, “Try the peanut butter!” Mikaela grabbed the jar, and the moment Elvis caught the scent, he ran over happily, leaving the new “toy” behind. (82 words)

   When Mikaela finally got the camera, she quickly checked it. Nothing wrong! But there came the special happiness. All was from the low, wobbly world. The blurred grass, the dizzying spin, Mikaela’s anxious chasing, and the neighbor, Mrs. Carter’s giant, smiling face and her booming voice: You, little monster! The most interesting part came at the end: Elvis had abandoned the camera for his favorite peanut! Mikaela laughed, realizing that what she had wanted was a planned adventure, but naughty Elvis rewarded her an unexpected one from his truly unique perspective. (81 words)

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