本话题贴合中学生日常校园学习生活，考查学生观察分析、独立思辨与客观表达的能力，打破传统单纯叙事写作的局限。既检验学生基础语言输出能力，又引导学生关注劳逸结合、科学学习、身心健康全面发展，契合新课标 “五育并举” 的育人理念，兼具语言选拔与素养培育双重考查价值。
一、命题情境
假设你是李明，下表是初三 3 班的一周课程安排。请你仔细观察这份课程表，用英语写一篇短文，对这份课程安排做出分析。
写作要点：
1.至少找出课程表两处不合理的地方，并清晰说明对应的理由； 2.可以适当给出优化建议；写作要求： 3.不得出现真实姓名、学校信息； 4.词数 100 词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数； 5.行文逻辑清晰，观点明确，语句通顺、语法正确。
二、阅卷老师满分心理预期
- 审题精准：必须准确找出 2 处及以上不合理问题，理由贴合学生学习实际，不牵强；
- 思辨到位：不单纯吐槽，有理有据，兼顾学业压力、身心劳逸结合、全面发展；
- 结构工整：承接开头→点明问题 + 理由→提出合理建议→总结收尾，三段闭环；
- 语言优质：用好参考词汇
unbalancedarrangementacademic pressure，长短句搭配，语法零失误，过渡自然。三、高分范文一（稳妥标准满分版）
After carefully examining our class schedule, I noticed a few problems.
First of all, the subject arrangement is unbalanced. We have too many main subjects like Chinese, Math and English every day, while there is only one P.E. class and one music class in the whole week. It makes us face heavy academic pressure and have little time to relax our bodies and minds.Second, there are no art or PE lessons on Monday to Thursday, all hard study makes us tired easily and less active in class.
I hope our teachers can make a better arrangement. We should have more sports and art classes to keep us healthy and grow all-sidedly.
✨阅卷高分亮点点评
精准命中两处核心不合理：主科过多、体美课严重不足、周中无放松课程，理由充分贴合学情； 完美使用题目给出的参考加分词汇，扣题精准； 让步、并列句式丰富，逻辑衔接流畅，观点 + 问题 + 建议完整闭环，零语法错误，直接锁定一类满分档。
四、高分范文二（语言拔高拔尖版）
After carefully examining our class schedule, I noticed a few problems.
There are two main disadvantages of this schedule. On one hand, the arrangement of classes is not balanced. We have nearly six main academic courses on most weekdays, which brings us great academic pressure. We hardly have enough time to rest and take exercise. On the other hand, P.E., music and art classes are too few and gathered only on Friday, so we can hardly keep energetic during the early weekdays.
In my opinion, we need a more reasonable plan. More relaxing and sports courses should be put into each weekday. In this way, we can study better and stay in good shape.
✨阅卷高分亮点点评
辩证思维更强，分析更有层次感，格局远超普通流水账作文； 巧用定语从句、on one hand/on the other hand 高级衔接，语言地道高级； 建议落地可行，既表达诉求又态度礼貌得体，是阅卷老师心中的标杆满分范文。
