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“时光荏苒，吐故纳新；精进不休，一日千里。”在初中阶段的学习和生活中，相信大家在外貌、性格、学习和爱好等各方面都有了自己的变化和进步。学校英语角正在以“How I Have Changed These Years”为题进行征文活动，请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇谈论自己近年各方面改变的文章。
内容包括：
1. 你过去是什么样的人（如外貌、性格、学习、爱好等）；
2. 你最重要的变化是什么；
3. 这个变化是如何发生的（请结合一次具体经历说明）。
要求：
1. 词数80—100；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名等个人信息。
范文一 基础稳妥版
英文原文
How I Have Changed These Years
I have changed a lot in the past few years. I used to be short and shy, and I was afraid to speak in class. I also disliked sports.
Now, I am taller and more outgoing. The biggest change is that I have become confident. Last year, I joined the English speech competition. I practiced every day and finally won third place. It made me realize I could do well if I tried hard.
I am proud of these changes.
中文译文
这些年我变了很多。过去我个子不高，性格也很害羞，上课不敢发言，也不喜欢运动。
现在我长高了，也开朗了许多。我最大的变化是变得自信了。去年，我参加了英语演讲比赛，每天坚持练习，最后获得了第三名。这件事让我明白，只要努力，我就能做好。
我为自己的这些变化感到骄傲。
范文二 高分进阶版
英文原文
How I Have Changed These Years
Time flies, and I have changed a lot since I entered middle school. I used to be a quiet girl who was afraid to communicate with others and hated running.
Now, I am more outgoing and active. The most important change is that I have become brave. Last term, our class held a talent show. I decided to sing a song. At first, I was nervous, but my classmates cheered me on. When I finished, I got big applause. That day, I learned to be brave.
These changes make me a better person.
中文译文
时光飞逝，自从上了初中，我变了很多。以前我是个安静的女孩，害怕和别人交流，也讨厌跑步。
现在我变得更外向、更活泼了。我最重要的变化是变得勇敢了。上学期，班里举办才艺表演，我决定唱一首歌。一开始我很紧张，但同学们都为我加油。表演结束时，我收获了热烈的掌声。那天，我学会了勇敢。
这些变化让我成为了更好的自己。
一、高分句型提炼（直接背就能用）
1. 开头引入变化（万能句）
1. How time flies! I have changed a lot in the past few years.
时光飞逝！过去这些年，我变了很多。
2. Since I entered middle school, great changes have taken place in me.
自从进入初中，我身上发生了巨大的变化。
3. I used to be a person who..., but now I am totally different.
我过去是一个……的人，但现在我完全不一样了。
2. 描述“过去的我”（对比句型）
1. I used to be + 形容词（shy/quiet/short）, and I was afraid to...
我过去很……，而且我害怕……
2. In the past, I didn't like..., but now it has become my hobby.
过去我不喜欢……，但现在它成了我的爱好。
3. At that time, I often..., but now I never do that again.
那时候我经常……，但现在我再也不那样做了。
3. 点明核心变化（过渡句）
1. The biggest change in my life is that I have become + 形容词（confident/brave/outgoing）.
我人生中最大的变化，是我变得……了。
2. What changed me most was a special experience last year/term.
改变我最多的，是去年/上学期的一次特别经历。
3. I never thought I could..., but I finally made it.
我从没想过我能……，但我最后做到了。
4. 描述经历+升华意义（高分关键）
1. Last year, I joined + 活动（English speech competition/talent show）. At first, I was very nervous, but I kept practicing every day. Finally, I won...
去年，我参加了……活动。一开始我很紧张，但我每天坚持练习。最后，我赢得了……
2. Thanks to my classmates/teachers' encouragement, I didn't give up. This experience taught me that if I try my best, I can do anything well.
多亏了同学/老师的鼓励，我没有放弃。这次经历教会我，只要我全力以赴，我就能做好任何事。
3. From then on, I realized that being brave/confident is the key to making progress.
从那以后，我意识到勇敢/自信是进步的关键。
5. 结尾总结+升华主题
1. I am proud of these changes, and I will keep moving forward.
我为这些变化感到骄傲，我会继续前进。
2. These changes make me a better person, and I will never stop improving myself.
这些变化让我成为了更好的自己，我会永远不断进步。
3. I believe I will become even better in the future.
我相信未来的我会变得更棒。
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