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🎓中考书面表达分类别总结
命题类别四:活动实操
【考查目标】:要求学生能够按照时间顺序或逻辑顺序清晰描述活动流程,并总结活动收获,表达个人成长感悟。
【命题角度】:
1.安全教育类:消防演习、地震逃生训练、心肺复苏、海姆立克急救教学等
2.实践参与类:做饭、包粽子、校园种植、非遗手工制作等
【审题要点】:
文体:以说明文和记叙文为主
时态:以一般现在时和一般过去时为主
人称:以第一人称(个人体验)和第三人称(流程说明)为主
内容:1.介绍活动,引出下文:简要交代活动背景,使用过渡句连接主体部分;
2.过程描述,补充细节:详细描述关键步骤,逻辑清晰;
3.个人收获,总结升华:具体说明学到的实操技能,表达活动带来的感受。

要点:(1)活动目的;
(2)灭火器的使用方法;
(3)你的体会。
注意:(1)短文须包含上述要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(2)文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
(3)词数80~100(首句已为你写好,不计入总词数)。
Last week, our school carried out Fire Safety Day activities.

Last week, our school carried out Fire Safety Day activities.
The purpose was to draw our attention to fire safety. Among the activities, how to use a fire extinguisher interested me most.
When we use a fire extinguisher, we should first shake it after picking it up, and then pull off the safety pin quickly. As soon as we point the tube at the root of the fire, we are expected to press down on the handle until we put out the fire. During the period, we should be careful enough not to get hurt.
From the activities, I've learned a lot and realized the importance of fire safety.
2️⃣(安全教育-模拟题)假设你是李辉,上周你在学校举行的"安全、急救知识讲座"中学会了急救技能。请结合所学内容,写一篇英语短文,给校英文报投稿。要点:
注意:
Last week, our school held an emergency training class.
参考范文
Last week, our school held an emergency training class. The purpose was to help us learn how to protect ourselves in dangerous situations.
During the class, we learned many useful skills. We practiced how to escape safely during an earthquake by hiding under tables and covering our heads. Teachers also taught us CPR and how to help someone who is choking. These skills can save lives in emergencies.
I think the training was very meaningful. Now I feel more confident about dealing with accidents. Everyone should learn first aid!
3️⃣(非遗传承-模拟题)假设你是李辉。上周你参加了学校"传统文化进校园" 活动,学习了传统剪纸。请结合所学内容,写一篇英语短文,给校英文报投稿。要点:
1.活动目的;
2.剪纸制作过程;
3.你的收获
注意:
1.包含上述要点,可适当发挥;
2.词数80-110(首句已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考范文:
Last week, our school held a traditional culture class. The purpose was to help students understand and inherit Chinese traditional art. Our class focused on paper cutting, which has a history of over 1,500 years.
The teacher first taught us how to fold the red paper carefully. Then we drew patterns of flowers, butterflies and animals on it. I chose a peony design because it symbolizes wealth and beauty. Next, I used small scissors to cut along the lines slowly and carefully. Finally, I opened my work and hung it on the classroom wall.
I think this activity was very meaningful. I learned a special skill and felt proud of our traditional culture. I will share this art with my friends and encourage more people to protect our heritage.
📚类别四书面表达模板|活动实操

安全教育 心肺复苏术 (CPR)
假设你是李华,学校正在举办"生命至上"健康教育活动。请你根据图片提示,用英语向同学们介绍心肺复苏术(CPR)的基本步骤。

要求:
词数80-100词左右; 必须包含图片中的五个步骤; 可适当发挥,写出学习急救技能的意义。
参考词汇:心肺复苏 CPR;意识 consciousness;胸部按压 chest compressions;气道 airway; 人工呼吸 artificial respiration。
实践参与 家务劳动
Teens Around the World 是一个国际青少年交流网站,近日有人发了一个关于“家务劳动”的帖子。假设你是李华,请阅读原帖后,结合自己的生活经历和体会,用英语跟帖。

要求:1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2.词数80~100(文中已给出内容不计入总词数)。
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